I was just fixing something i put in the previous post. I wasn't asking a question z. And this is 1Aniu1. I changed my name before I started doing too much stuff on here so I can have a more original name.

Read the rest of RTW's stories, 1Aniu1, and you will know.

What you did with Saba and Everest, not why.

This has got to be my favorite story you have ever written. It had a well developed plot, but was easy to follow at the same time. I also like why you did with Saba and Everest. The whole story is just so intriguing to me. This was very well written. Awesome job!

this story is one of my top 10!!! i was curious to know if they would make it or not!!! great job i luv it !!!!

This is pretty good. Outstanding job!

cmon I'm 17, I should be allowed to read! :/

Funny. No one under 18 can read this, yet there's a comment on here from a 13 year old.

This was a good story, although I'll admit it is the first story I've read from you. Seeing that I just joined up today. The title and the description are actually what got me interested in the first place. The story kept me reading, from the prologue, all the way to the very end. I actually caught on when Saba said, "God I'm so stupid. I should have thought of this in the first place." Cause I remembered hearing about Aleu coming back. All in all, I have to give your story a 5 out of 5. Even though incest (to me) is creepy, your story was very touching. I'm glad I got to read it.

And Thats how it was on the first night when we saw paris in flames