I agree with Godfrey67...

It's a sweet story, but the spelling and grammar make it
almost impossible to follow.

it was okay, it probly would have been better if your computer didnt mess up

Wolf I loved the fanfic.*nuzzles him with lots of love*

for the last time my compter mess up most of the story got delete and the Words got mess up to

Dude, work on your grammar skills......

sorry that was me not FW

and I cholud not think of a name but my sidter is but she will not help me

sorry my compter mess up but there was more to the story and it was better

O.K. I really don't want to have to say that your fanfic sorta' stinks, but, uh, it sorta' stinks. It doesn't really make sense, and I don't think you should've used the visitor's user names. The story would've been good is you worked on the grammar a bit.