well could do so even thought had read a lot of fanfics about Balto's past and I thought that Balto678 made the one of the best version (even don't remember how many ones I had read about) So I hope you'll make it look better

Thanks Pirkka, it was nice to hear someone who had positive words. I have begun writing another one, but it has nothing to do with this one. It's titled "Balto's Quest." It's a fairly long one about Balto's past, and is on the same site as the one above. If anyone is interested I would encourage you to go check it out, and please, tell me what you think. Thanks

I like it, well sad that life is hard someday's but I hope that you will write new story or just simple Next part to your story it bet that it will be as good that this one,by the way your spelling errors didn't teas me at all well mean fact I didn't even see them

So you don't like happy endings?

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(I hate fast writing)

well i began writing this story before the release of balto III. so thats why none of the characters are the same, sorta. oh and big D, there are two ways to spell there. there, means in general, while their means it's owned. yeah it was a bad ending, but i dont like fairy tales. so long.

Poooooooooooooor Kodi!!!!! Great Story!

Oky, I'm done. Nice story man. It's good to read a story without the 'happily everafter' ending thing in it. *Sign* Poor Kodi...... Poor Kodi......

Nevermind. Found Star.

And where did Dusty and Star go???