strange, mysterious aura around it, almost like it hadn't been used in years. The carpet had dust about it, as it seemed to have been not been cleaned, cobwebs were seen on the seats, all except for one in the far corner, which was covered by the darkness of the Box, as the Box itself was not illuminated by any kind of source of light around it or above it.

   Suddenly, out of nowhere, a large, black figure jumped in front of the managers as they entered the Box, giving some of them a gasp of shock, making Star fall back from shock. The Box-Keeper would have been frightened as well, but rolled her eyes in irritation, as she could tell who was behind this little joke.

   "Monsieur Buquet!" She exclaimed, as the pit-bull scene-shifter took of the black sheet that was over his head, laughing his chain-smoker's laugh.

   "Sorry, I couldn't resist," He then wheezed as he snickered, his foul breath coming out clear as day.

   "Monsieur, I suggest you treat the new managers with respect." The collie scolded the pit.

   "Come no', Aurelia, it's all in good fun!" He snickered, placing his hat back on his head.

   "Buquet…" The collie replied sternly, folding her arms.

   The pit merely sighed, "Sorry if I scared ya, messieurs. I do it to everyone."

   "That's fine, Monsieur," Kaltag began, "And your name is…?"

   "Joseph Buquet or you can call me the Chief of the Flies." He chuckled, bowing his head.

   "He's the main scene-shifter up in the rafters of the theater." The Box-Keeper added.

   "I see," The Chinook replied.

   "Say, Chief," Nikki asked, "Do you know about this…Opera Ghost?"

   The pit then laughed aloud once again, "So, you want to know about the Opera Ghost?"

   "Um…yes?" Nikki replied. The scene-shifter then looked around and down the hall, almost like he was checking to see if anyone else was around.

   "Come inside the Box, messieurs." He said gravely, "And I'll tell you…what I saw." The managers then went inside the dark Box, with the collie still outside in the hall. She didn't exactly want to join them, seeing how the pit had already told his encounter with the ghost to nearly everyone at the Canine. So listening to it again was definitely getting old, but she went inside along with other dogs.

   The managers sat on their haunches, with the scene-shifter in front of them, and the collie behind them standing in front of the now closed door.

   "Listen carefully, as I only tell others about the ghost once, OK?" He asked the managers, who nodded in response, all except the Chinook in the middle, who seemed skeptical.

   "Monsieur, are you sure this is necessary?" Kaltag inquired, "I don't believe in ghosts, and neither do my fellow colleagues."

   "Yeah," Star added, "What's so scary about some dumb ghost?"

   The pit then got up in the grey-purple husky's face, "I suggest you keep your mouth shut around these parts, Monsieur," His voice had that grave, stern tone again, "The ghost could be anywhere…" Once the pit knew he had the manager's attention, he began his tale.

   "I was up in the rafters, like I always am, havin' my smoke break, and whil' I was leanin' against the rail, I heard something move on the beam, and when I looked to the left, I saw 'im."

   "Are you sure you didn't just see someone else?" Kaltag asked.

   "As the Lord's witness, I know what I saw; 'e was there, standing with a long, black cloak roun' his shoulders, as black as night. 'e wore a gentledog's suit, with a black tux, a white vest and bow-tie. 'e 'ad large paws, like wolf paws, you know, them big ones with the claws that can tear your face off, and on' of 'em were on the rail, and the claws made a scratching soun', an' his nails were so sharp that the' made marks on the stee' bar. I looked at 'is face and 'e 'ad a white skull for a 'ead, and there were two, big grey 'ars stickin' ou' of 'is 'ead. 'e stared at me with those yellow eyes of his, which seemed to glow in the dark. 'e then turned around and vanished, almost like 'e faded into the dark."

   Whilst the Chinnok's friends tried to understand what the scene-shifter had said (he wasn't too great in ways of articulation), Kaltag wasn't sure what to think of this ghost. He definitely didn't believe in such beings, and when he used write stories about the supernatural in the papers, he felt like the canines he was interviewing were probably making most of it up. He was a realist at heart, and believed in real things, not spirits and phantoms; and the thought of a ghost being in the Opera Canine seemed absolutely absurd.

   "Are you sure what you saw, Monsieur?" He asked the pit, "Perhaps you were drinking?"

   "I kno' what I saw, believe me," The scene-shifter replied with a slight cough, "Now if you excuse me, the 'Chief ''as to get back to work." The pit walked past the dogs, and before he left, he turned and said, "Don' be snooping aroun' 'n places that you don' belong, messieurs. Don' go anywhere 'n this House by yourself or 'e might catch you, with his…magical lasso.

   "Lasso? What lasso?" Kaltag responded.

   "I'll let Madame tell you about it, got work to do, good day messieurs." With a swift bow, the pit left the Box.

   "Madame, do you know anything about this ghost?" Nikki asked the collie.

   The collie sighed, "I do know a few things. I know he has been seen multiple times, and I've…well…" Her voice trailed off, almost like she knew something.

   "Yes?" Kaltag replied, trying to edge her on. "Is their something you want to tell us?"

   "Well…I'm not exactly allowed to say anything," She responded, scratching the back of her head with a front paw, "But, since you're new to the Canine and how things are run here, I shall inform you what the ghost is capable of."

   "Oh, what can a silly ghost do?" Star joked, "Jump out and scare people?"

   "No, messieurs, the ghost is not prone to childish pranks. He has done things…dreadful things in this House," The box-keeper had that same serious tone that the scene-shifter had.

   "Dreadful things?" The grayish-purple husky gulped, "What kind of things?"

   "It is said that if you see the ghost, you are cursed. Some have said he will come into your dressing room when you're not looking, and steal something valuable. He has already stolen Monsieur Claudin's violin, and Madame Sorelli's ballet slippers."

   "Is this the only thing that he has done?" Nikki inquired.

   "No…I hate to say it…" The collie had an anxious look on her face, "but he's…killed dogs."

   "Killed?!" Star exclaimed, "Kaltag, do you realize what this means? There's a killer ghost on the loose! We have to-!" The husky was then hit on the head yet again by the Chinook.

   "Star, calm yourself," He assured, "I'm sure that a corporeal being like a ghost can't possibly kill anyone."

   Madame Aurelia then interjected, "Oh, but he can, Monsieur, and he has."

   "Really? Do you have any proof, Madame?"

   The collie looked down at her paws, "Well…no…I…"

   "Well, without any sort of proof that this ghost exists, I think it's safe to say that he doesn't exist at all and we have absolutely, positively, most assuredly nothing to be afraid of." He replied confidently, and then walked over to the door of the Box, "Now, if you excuse us, we have an Opera House to run, not sit here and listen to myths and legends. Good day, Madame."

   The collie was about to say something else, but she decided to let manager's return to their office. She then realized then and there that these managers seemed "different" than the last 3. She thought the idea of a ghost stalking, stealing from, and possibly killing dogs would scare them out of their coats. It occurred to the Box-Keeper that the trio wasn't fazed by the presence of the ghost, nor did they believe in him.

   They'll understand soon enough, she thought, placing her paws on the railing of the balcony, looking at the stage of the theater, but if the ghost threatens them, don't come crying to me Messieurs. As the collie listened to the beautiful notes of Gounod, the sound of what seemed like claws tapping on the arm of one of the chairs came into her ears.

 

 

   Jenna sat in her one-bedroom apartment complex, which was conveniently located only a mile away from the Canine, making travel there easy. There wasn't much to the apartment, seeing as how small it was. Her income didn't bring in much, so she



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June 30, 2016
Usa Male
Thanks, it's no problem at all. I'm still working on the rest of the story, just been a while since i've been on here.

Ah yes, the Inspector is a character that I've created solely for this story, and perhaps I might continue to use him in some other stories (if not with animals than with humans, as creating detective characters is always fun.)

Also, his progression from naive detective to Inspector of Police is based off of Gaston Leroux's short story, The Case of the Yellow Room, just a little fun reference.

June 24, 2016
Usa Male
Pages 14-16
Quite gripping. You did the boxkeeper's description of her encounter very well.

June 23, 2016
Usa Male
Back after a long hiatus.

Page 13 (end of Chapter 3): Uh-huh; that's the Steele I remember, alright.

The detective character, Jean-Claude, intrigues - particularly as I've recently begun work on a couple of police-related stories.

My apologies for taking so long to get back to this.

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
Hopefully you'll enjoy them! :)

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
That all makes sense. btw, I've pasted the next several pages to a document for offline reading.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
I totally know what you mean. Jenna and Steele just seem like a very unlikely couple. It's like Nala and Scar in the Lion King. You just don't do it!
But I can assure you, there will be some good Jenna and Balto scenes in this as well. ;)

Yeah, I've noticed that you're into mostly anthro Balto fanfics, and I just wanted to clear up that yes, they, and everyone else in the story, is a feral animal, not an anthro one (I said that even though they're anthropomorphic, I was mostly referring to the definition, not necessarily stating that they were anthro characters.)

I don't know, I just felt it was sort of appropriate. Somebody actually commented on that as some point, and was wondering as to why I did that. I mostly wanted to keep them in their original forms since everyone is mostly familiar with it, and it's also reminiscent with movies such as All Dogs Go To Heaven, where some scenes have characters doing what they do in my story (wearing clothing, holding objects, etc.) Yes, I know, dogs don't wear clothes, but I think it's a fun little addition, just for the sake of this fan fic.

Also, that's kind of the whole point of this part. Jenna and Steele haven't met in like 13 years or so (well, just for this story anyway) so it would make sense for her not to recognize him.

- Dante

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Just chiming in here, since you and JC kind of lead into it; the first project on our collab list will not be anthro - just in case anyone was concerned about that.

Also, on to Page 12. Not bad, especially for a Jenna/Steele scene (which I usually detest, so getting a "not bad" out of me for one is pretty big). The description of them moving on all fours kind of threw me because when you describe them in clothes and so on my mind naturally drifts to a more "anthro" version of them. Also, I was kind of surprised at how long it took Jenna to connect the dots. Other than that, it's good.

February 21, 2016
Usa Male
I'm glad that you've enjoyed it. To tell you the truth, I'm also a purist for the original forms of the characters. And even though I stated that in the introduction, they are anthropomorphic, I was referring to that they have the same characteristics of the Balto film, they just have more human like qualities to them, such as wearing clothes and such. Of course anyone can interpret it in their own way, I hint in some of the chapters that they are still in their original feral forms.

Also, don't feel bad if you're not analyzing every aspect of the story. I'll take anything that I can get when it comes to comments or critiques. As long as someone enjoys it, it's good enough for me! :)

Yeah, it's a long one, since I wrote it in chapters, but I decided to just put the whole thing here. Might as well, but I didn't think it'd be as long as I originally thought.

Oh, I don't consider myself to be that advanced. I've just had years of experience, what with English always being my favorite subject in school. Always has. I may not write like the greats, but I know exactly what to put down, in order to give the reader something cool and interesting to read. And I'm glad you've enjoyed thus far! :)

February 20, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Okay, so, I have been pouring gradually through this, and I must admit, I am enjoying it! You have a keen writing style, which is pretty advanced (considering the relative writing skills of the average fan writer). A few thoughts:

1. I will continue to read the whole thing but, given that I have completed at least a few chapters, I feel that I have gotten the entire gist of this, enough to comment on it...

2. As I mentioned to DT with his recent submission, I am a purist when it comes to the characters. While I love seeing them in good and effective crossovers, I really am not a fan of anthro concepts. Now, that being said, you HAVE crafted an entertaining and engaging story line here, and it would be untrue to suggest that I am not enjoying it!

3. I guess the only anthro setting I ever have enjoyed (and continue to) is that created by Disney for the Robin Hood movie. For me, that worked. And I guess I have seen it that was because I viewed it years ago as a kid. It's another great crossover. And I SUSPECT that the "Zootopia" film will be likewise for me...I even have already made up my mind that it could work as a modern-day future of the Disney Robin Hood setting. Now that I can get behind! Not taking anything away from what you've crafted here of course.

4. While I am not a fan of the Phantom of the Opera epic (though I know the basics of the story, and went to read a full outline of it to get myself prepped for this read), I know it is a great work of literature, and I totally see why you chose it. Especially given the fact that you are a fan of that story.

5. I'm not much of a "Monday-morning quarterback", and I personally don't like to minutely analyze chapter and verse in comments. So you won't see that much from me (and I hope I'm not letting you down in that regard). The size of this work makes it very intimidating to try and flip back through and locate something to analyze in comments. I hope you don't mind!

All that aside, you really have crafted a very good story here so far, and I am impressed! It is a LOOOONG one (lol), perhaps the longest I've seen on Animation Source (as far as I can recall anyway), but I understand why it is as long as it is.

Best of luck with Part 2!

February 08, 2016
Usa Male
UPDATE: The 2nd part of this story is still being worked on, however, for those of you who don't wish to wait for the entire thing to be posted here, this story is also uploaded and updated on my DeviantArt account: HydeCorner, and on my Fanfiction account: Dante Frost.
Once I'm finished with the 2nd part, I will upload the entire thing here. Until then, feel free to follow along either my DeviantArt account, or on my Fanfiction account.

Also, for future stories, I am currently working with Dragon Tamer (Author of the Toby series and Balto's Treasure Island) or Omnitrix 12 on Fanfiction.net for a collab story. Be on the look out for that in the near future.

Peace!

- Dante Frost

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