spoiled rotten Viscount that he was, but the young, adventurous, brave, and "puppyish" pup that he once was. What happened in those years?

   He had grown up, and those long, tough years of being pampered by his mother, and being sent off to the military by his brother, seemed to not turn his skin into cold, hard steel, but his heart instead.

   Gosh, it's been, what, 15 years since then? I wonder if she remembers me after all this time. He pondered this as he got into bed, but he wasn't exactly sure. Jenna had seen him, but she seemed to not recognize him, even when they met face to face. Also, Jenna didn't refer to him as Stephen, just Monsieur Vicomte and Steele de Chagny.

   Maybe she really did forget about me, he thought as he lay down on his pillow, Perhaps I'll be able to figure it out when we go out to dinner. Then I'll see if she still thinks of her Stephen from time to time. He realized that this could probably be his chance to get Jenna to finally see that he is the one she wants. If it happened once, then it could happen again.

   Right?

   Either way, he smiled as he thought of them being friends again, and perhaps even more than that, just like the good o'l days. He the fell asleep with the words Little Lotte on his lips.

 

 

Chapter 3

 

   Rehearsals for the newest production of Charles Gounod's Faust were underway a month before the Gala was performed, which would premiere in only 2 weeks afterwards, so there was a rush amongst the staff as they tried to get as much of the Opera done in such a short amount of time, as much of Act 1, 2, and 4 had already been rehearsed and completed. However, due to La Carlotta's absence, they had to resort to using Jennifer Daae as the brief understudy for Carlotta during rehearsals of Act 3 and 5.

   As Act 3 was being rehearsed, a female canine was casually walking down the 2nd floor hallways of the Opera House, which were connected to the Box balconies of the theater, which was were she could normally be found, going in and out of the Boxes and checking for who and where guests would be seated for a performance. She had jet black fur on her face, with a strip of white running down the middle, with the same pattern of colors repeated on the rest of her body, with a layer of black fur on her back and tail, which contrasted with her snowy white underbelly, which also went down to her paws, where the black color ended on her ankles and elbows. She wore a jet black dress jacket, which ended at the base of her stomach, along with a small emerald gem that was attached to white ruffles that went down the front of her chest, with golden cuff-links at the end of the sleeves of the jacket. Madame Elisabeth Aurelia, the Opera Canine's Box-Keeper, a title that she held with an iron paw.

   The origin of the Box-Keeper seemed unknown to the staff, however due to her rich accent it was clear that she was not from Paris, but from England, yet her past life was a mystery. It was said that she had moved from London not too long ago, but many of the staff didn't really know her enough to ask what she had done beforehand, as she did not have any surviving relatives, nor did she have any friends to be with or companions to talk with, so she was always alone during her time at the Canine.

   In this rather odd character, she was seen just as mysterious as the Opera Ghost. The staff could clearly tell that after her first day at the Canine (which was approximately 6 years back) something seemed to have changed from her friendly demeanor, into a rather puzzling one. She could be seen wandering the halls of the balcony Boxes, going up and down over and over, peering out through the Box's red velvet curtains, and her overall aura was certainly mystifying, yet curious. Though no one was exactly certain as to why she acted this way, it was clear that something indeed must have happened to her.

   Some say, that she was the only one to have actually spoken to the Opera Ghost, though this could not be proven, and was merely just a regular rumor told among the superstitious staff.

   All sorts of dogs from the upper-class had proceeded to buy some of their Box seats, and it was clear that it was going to be a full house on opening night for Faust. So, the box-keeper was permitted to place plagues on the doors that led to each Box that said the French word "Loue", which stands for "rented" or "leased". It was usually used for Boxes that held seats that had already been sold to guests beforehand. It was a tiresome job, as she had to do it nearly everyday of the week, and she wasn't permitted to take too many breaks. However, it did bring in good money, and she was one of the few that actually received a reasonable pay, so she sucked it up and did her job with vigor and stamina.

   The collie had just passed the doors of Boxes 3, 7 and the infamous Box Five, and as she did, she thought she heard a tapping noise from behind Box Five, which made her stop and turn her head towards the mahogany door. It was apparent to many guests and the staff that this Box was haunted (by the Opera Ghost no doubt) and it was a tradition that the Box was not to be sold to anyone, no matter what the circumstances were. This matter of the Box and its mysterious occupant confused the new managers, and they immediately went to the Box-Keeper to ask her about it.

   The first thing she noticed about the managers was their lack of basic theatre knowledge, so it was no doubt irritating for the collie to walk the trio through the massive theatre, the seating arrangements, and how many guests could be seated.

   The only positive thing about them was that they were fast learners, which made her sigh with relief. She wasn't one to repeat herself. It was when she was called to their office was when Monsieur Kaltag asked her of the situation of Box Five, and she proceeded to lead them to the hallway of the balcony Boxes.

   "Box Five is just around this corner, Messieurs." The collie told the managers as they walked around the Box hallway. Each door that led to one of the many Boxes in the theater had the same inscription on the mahogany doors, with the number of places (seats) available in the box on the left, the box number in the middle, and a blank space on the right, which is where the words Loue would be placed. Box Five was one such Box, and it seemed to not differentiate from any of the other doors.

   "Madame, we received a note from some anonymous animal named 'O.G' and he has told us that this Box Five belongs to him. Is this true?"

   The box-keeper turned to the Chinook, "I'm well aware of that, Monsieur Moncharmin," she said, "and yes, it belongs to the Opera Ghost."

   The trio couldn't help but chuckle to themselves.

   "What's so funny?" The collie asked, not sure as to why the dogs found the term "Opera Ghost" so amusing.

   "I'm sorry Madame," replied Kaltag, "but we can't help but find this Opera Ghost to be nothing more than a joke. I'm sure that you're well aware of this, right?"

   Madame Aurelia then stopped in her tracks, and turned to the dogs, "Messieurs, I know this Opera House like the back of my paw," She remarked sternly, "and I can tell you that, no, I don't believe it to be a 'joke'."

   "Why is that, Madame?" Star asked, giving a slight chuckle, "He seems pretty funny to me."

   "I'm sorry Monsieur, but the ghost is no laughing matter." The collie then turned her head and continued walking down the hall, the giggling managers following behind.

   As the dogs made their way to Box Five, they're seemed to be a strange presence around them as they rounded the narrow hall, almost like something was waiting and watching them from behind the walls.

   The door to Box Five, as I've said, seemed to not contrast with any of the other doors around it. It had 6 seats inside, and had the word Loue on the right side, just above the small, circular glass window.

   "This is it?" Monsieur Kaltag asked, a bit confused as to what all the fuss was about.

   "It doesn't look so special." Nikki remarked.

   "Yeah, what's the deal?" Star added.

   "This is the ghost's Box, Messieurs, that's what's important about it."

   The Chinook then said that he wished to see what was inside, but he was blocked by the collie.

   "I'm sorry, but you can't go in without a key."

   "Ok, could you please open the door?"

   "I can't Monsieur."

   "Why not," Kaltag asked, before chuckling a bit, "is the 'ghost' going to spring out and attack?"

   "No, but..."

   "Ok, then open it for us."

   The collie sighed, and went to unlock the door, taking her Master Key necklace off her neck, and unlocked the door.

   The trio then walked up to the door, and as the collie slowly opened the door, and upon turning the latch, a small puff of what looked like dust could be seen coming from the carpet, which was visible in the light.

   As the managers entered the Box, there seemed to be a strange,



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June 30, 2016
Usa Male
Thanks, it's no problem at all. I'm still working on the rest of the story, just been a while since i've been on here.

Ah yes, the Inspector is a character that I've created solely for this story, and perhaps I might continue to use him in some other stories (if not with animals than with humans, as creating detective characters is always fun.)

Also, his progression from naive detective to Inspector of Police is based off of Gaston Leroux's short story, The Case of the Yellow Room, just a little fun reference.

June 24, 2016
Usa Male
Pages 14-16
Quite gripping. You did the boxkeeper's description of her encounter very well.

June 23, 2016
Usa Male
Back after a long hiatus.

Page 13 (end of Chapter 3): Uh-huh; that's the Steele I remember, alright.

The detective character, Jean-Claude, intrigues - particularly as I've recently begun work on a couple of police-related stories.

My apologies for taking so long to get back to this.

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
Hopefully you'll enjoy them! :)

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
That all makes sense. btw, I've pasted the next several pages to a document for offline reading.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
I totally know what you mean. Jenna and Steele just seem like a very unlikely couple. It's like Nala and Scar in the Lion King. You just don't do it!
But I can assure you, there will be some good Jenna and Balto scenes in this as well. ;)

Yeah, I've noticed that you're into mostly anthro Balto fanfics, and I just wanted to clear up that yes, they, and everyone else in the story, is a feral animal, not an anthro one (I said that even though they're anthropomorphic, I was mostly referring to the definition, not necessarily stating that they were anthro characters.)

I don't know, I just felt it was sort of appropriate. Somebody actually commented on that as some point, and was wondering as to why I did that. I mostly wanted to keep them in their original forms since everyone is mostly familiar with it, and it's also reminiscent with movies such as All Dogs Go To Heaven, where some scenes have characters doing what they do in my story (wearing clothing, holding objects, etc.) Yes, I know, dogs don't wear clothes, but I think it's a fun little addition, just for the sake of this fan fic.

Also, that's kind of the whole point of this part. Jenna and Steele haven't met in like 13 years or so (well, just for this story anyway) so it would make sense for her not to recognize him.

- Dante

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Just chiming in here, since you and JC kind of lead into it; the first project on our collab list will not be anthro - just in case anyone was concerned about that.

Also, on to Page 12. Not bad, especially for a Jenna/Steele scene (which I usually detest, so getting a "not bad" out of me for one is pretty big). The description of them moving on all fours kind of threw me because when you describe them in clothes and so on my mind naturally drifts to a more "anthro" version of them. Also, I was kind of surprised at how long it took Jenna to connect the dots. Other than that, it's good.

February 21, 2016
Usa Male
I'm glad that you've enjoyed it. To tell you the truth, I'm also a purist for the original forms of the characters. And even though I stated that in the introduction, they are anthropomorphic, I was referring to that they have the same characteristics of the Balto film, they just have more human like qualities to them, such as wearing clothes and such. Of course anyone can interpret it in their own way, I hint in some of the chapters that they are still in their original feral forms.

Also, don't feel bad if you're not analyzing every aspect of the story. I'll take anything that I can get when it comes to comments or critiques. As long as someone enjoys it, it's good enough for me! :)

Yeah, it's a long one, since I wrote it in chapters, but I decided to just put the whole thing here. Might as well, but I didn't think it'd be as long as I originally thought.

Oh, I don't consider myself to be that advanced. I've just had years of experience, what with English always being my favorite subject in school. Always has. I may not write like the greats, but I know exactly what to put down, in order to give the reader something cool and interesting to read. And I'm glad you've enjoyed thus far! :)

February 20, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Okay, so, I have been pouring gradually through this, and I must admit, I am enjoying it! You have a keen writing style, which is pretty advanced (considering the relative writing skills of the average fan writer). A few thoughts:

1. I will continue to read the whole thing but, given that I have completed at least a few chapters, I feel that I have gotten the entire gist of this, enough to comment on it...

2. As I mentioned to DT with his recent submission, I am a purist when it comes to the characters. While I love seeing them in good and effective crossovers, I really am not a fan of anthro concepts. Now, that being said, you HAVE crafted an entertaining and engaging story line here, and it would be untrue to suggest that I am not enjoying it!

3. I guess the only anthro setting I ever have enjoyed (and continue to) is that created by Disney for the Robin Hood movie. For me, that worked. And I guess I have seen it that was because I viewed it years ago as a kid. It's another great crossover. And I SUSPECT that the "Zootopia" film will be likewise for me...I even have already made up my mind that it could work as a modern-day future of the Disney Robin Hood setting. Now that I can get behind! Not taking anything away from what you've crafted here of course.

4. While I am not a fan of the Phantom of the Opera epic (though I know the basics of the story, and went to read a full outline of it to get myself prepped for this read), I know it is a great work of literature, and I totally see why you chose it. Especially given the fact that you are a fan of that story.

5. I'm not much of a "Monday-morning quarterback", and I personally don't like to minutely analyze chapter and verse in comments. So you won't see that much from me (and I hope I'm not letting you down in that regard). The size of this work makes it very intimidating to try and flip back through and locate something to analyze in comments. I hope you don't mind!

All that aside, you really have crafted a very good story here so far, and I am impressed! It is a LOOOONG one (lol), perhaps the longest I've seen on Animation Source (as far as I can recall anyway), but I understand why it is as long as it is.

Best of luck with Part 2!

February 08, 2016
Usa Male
UPDATE: The 2nd part of this story is still being worked on, however, for those of you who don't wish to wait for the entire thing to be posted here, this story is also uploaded and updated on my DeviantArt account: HydeCorner, and on my Fanfiction account: Dante Frost.
Once I'm finished with the 2nd part, I will upload the entire thing here. Until then, feel free to follow along either my DeviantArt account, or on my Fanfiction account.

Also, for future stories, I am currently working with Dragon Tamer (Author of the Toby series and Balto's Treasure Island) or Omnitrix 12 on Fanfiction.net for a collab story. Be on the look out for that in the near future.

Peace!

- Dante Frost

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