the fresh smell of the waves wafted into his nose. He noticed that the wind was rather fierce of here, which blew his fur in different directions.

   He walked around the sandy plane for a while, and was going to return to his mother before he was missed, until he heard a dog shout, "My bandana!" Stephen turned to where the voice had come from, and found that a female husky, was chasing after an orange cloth that had been blown away by the wind. Stephen, being the heroic type and always wanting to help any Damsel in Distress, bolted in the direction of the husky.

   As he ran up to the husky, he noticed that the wind had blown the bandana out to sea. "What's wrong?" He asked the dog, who had tears in her eyes. He noticed that this husky was different from other huskies that he had seen. She had fur that was a ruby red instead of black or orange.

   "I had taken off my bandana, but the wind was so fierce, that it slipped from my paws. I tried to catch it, but now it's gone." She unhappily replied. "My Father was right; I shouldn't have taken it off." She then hung her head in shame.

   The malamute felt bad for the husky, and replied "I'll get it for you," he offered.

   The husky looked at him, "But, it's pretty far out there." She pointed to where the bandana was, as it floated in the waves. Stephen had to agree, it was a few meters off from the shore.

   "Doesn't matter, I can do it." He replied proudly, and he took of his little suit, and ran straight into the water. As he went further out to sea, he could feel the water rising around him, and he was forced to dog paddle as he lost his footing. It didn't matter to him; his sights were on the bandana.

   Come on, almost there, He thought, as he neared the cloth, when a wave suddenly rose up, and crashed into the husky, and he went under. The husky on shore gasped as the dog disappeared beneath the waves. However, she gasped again, this time happily, when the dog emerged from the underwater moments later, her bandana in his mouth.

   Stephen got out of the water, and even though he was drenched from head to tail, he didn't mind. Of course, he knew his mother wasn't going to approve of this.

   "Here you go." He said, panting, placing the soaked bandana on the ground, "Safe and sound."

   "Thank you so much!" She ran up to hug the malamute, but noticed that he was completely covered with water, "Oh my, you're all wet." She said, giggling.

   "So are you," He replied, smirking.

   "What do you-?" The malamute then shook himself, as Jenna cried out, trying to cover herself with her paws.

   "Stop, you're getting water on my fur!" She cried.

   "Sorry, he he," Stephen chuckled, as he matted down his fur with his paws. "Say, what's your name?"

   "Jennifer Daae, but everyone calls me Jenna." She smiled warmly, "What's yours?"

   Before the malamute could speak, Stephen's mother suddenly came over to where the two youngsters were, and started yelling at him, and immediately dragged him away by on of his ears.

   "Hey, what's your name?" Jenna called after the husky.

   "It's Stephen!...ow!" He shouted back, as he was dragged away by his mother, his ear almost feeling like it was going to be torn off.

   The next day, Stephen tried to explain to his mother about his heroic act, but she didn't want to hear it. She merely said a young, upper-class dog shouldn't play with a dog from the middle-class section of France. Of course, this didn't exactly resonate with the young malamute, so he went against his mother's wishes, and would sneak out as much as he could to see Jenna at her home.

   That night, he went over to Jenna's house, and as luck would have it, he saw her looking out her window.

   "Jenna! Psst!" He whispered to the husky from behind a bush.

   "Stephen?" Jenna asked, "What are you doing here?"

   "Shh, I'm coming up," The malamute then threw up a rope that he had found, and Jenna grabbed it with her paws. "Don't drop it."

   "Ok," She answered, as she held on to the rope as tight as she could. Stephen clutched the rope with both front paws, and used his hind paws to walk up the wall.

   "Stephen, you…you're kind of heavy," Jenna grunted, as she pulled the rope back a bit, in order to sustain the malamute's weight.

   "Hey, I'm not that chubby!" Stephen exclaimed, as he tugged the rope with his paws, as he nearly reached the top of the window.

   At last, Stephen managed to make it to the top. "Whoo, I'm here. Let me- "

   Just then, the door to Jenna's bedroom opened, as Gustave called her name. Jenna turned around and jumped at the same time, accidentally releasing the rope from her paws. Jenna inwardly cringed as he heard Stephen yell and hit the ground below with a thud.

   Gustave had then asked Jenna as to what she was doing up, but she merely told him that she was just getting some fresh air. Gustave merely told her to go to bed, and left her room. As soon as she knew he was down the hall, Jenna ran over to her window to check on Stephen.

   She gasped when she saw that the malamute was on his back, his paws up in the air, a bit dazed from the fall.

   "Sorry about that," She whispered, "You know, you could just ask my Dad if you want to come over. He won't mind."

   "Ok, sounds good," Stephen groaned, as he laid his head back on the ground. Jenna giggled, bid the malamute goodnight, and closed her window.

   The next few weeks were the best time the Stephen had ever spent in their lives. Despite Jenna being 2 years younger than him, the two instantly became friends, and practically did everything together. During the day, the two would play in the fields, race each other on the beach and play in the water, and would play hide-and-seek in the nearby forest. During the night, Gustave would play for them on his violin, tell them stories of the curious little girl named Little Lotte, and the two would sometimes have picnics in the attic. It was an experience that Stephen had never felt in so long, as he was always pampered by his mother. Here, he felt like he could finally be himself, and just be a kid.

   However, as the days went by, the two realized that the more they spent with each other, without even knowing it; they almost seemed to fall in love. "Grand Amour" as Gustave had put it. They became inseparable, and would sometimes cuddle up next to each other, as they lay in the green grass.

   Of course, nothing lasts forever.

   It was night, and Stephen and Jenna were sitting up on top of Jenna's roof, as they gazed up at the moon. Stephen knew that what he was about to tell Jenna would definitely displease her, but he had no choice.

   "Jenna, I have something to tell you," Stephen said, looking down at his paws. The husky looked over at the malamute, and Stephen could see the moon reflected in her light brown eyes.

   "What is it?" She asked.

   "I'm…moving back to Paris." Stephen replied sadly. "I'm sorry that I can't stay here. I would if I could, but I can't."

   It was clear to Stephen that Jenna was upset when she heard this, but if she was, she didn't show it.

   "That's ok, Stephen…I…," Jenna looked at the malamute with concern, as Stephen seemed to be fighting back tears.

   "I-I just…I d-don't want you to forget me…I mean….y-you…you're the only friend I've ever had," Stephen said, as he struggled to keep himself composed. Jenna then pulled him for a hug.

   "Don't worry, Stephen. I'm not going to leave you, I promise. Just remember, whenever you're alone, or afraid, just think of me, and you'll be back here with me. " Jenna said, and suddenly, she gave the malamute a kiss on the cheek. Stephen's heart skipped a beat, as he felt his white cheeks turn red.

   "Haha, you're blushing, Stephen." Jenna giggled, as the malamute chuckled back. The two dogs then leaned their heads against each other, as they watched the moon rise up into the sky. It was an incredible experience, one that the malamute would never forget.

 

 

   Steele suddenly woke up with a start, and breathed heavily. He realized that he had passed out in the tub, and he shook as he got out of the now cold water.

   After drying himself off, he reflected on that dream he just had, which turned out to be a memory that he had been locked away inside the corners of his brain. Those long-lost days in Perros were almost completely erased from his psyche during his time in the service. In fact, he wondered as to why he hadn't remembered it until now.

   It's because of you, Jenna. I thought of you, and I saw you, and I remembered you. Steele almost felt like he was no longer the "Steele" that had come out of the burning fort. He felt like the Stephen that had once played with the husky so long ago. Not the spoiled rotten



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June 30, 2016
Usa Male
Thanks, it's no problem at all. I'm still working on the rest of the story, just been a while since i've been on here.

Ah yes, the Inspector is a character that I've created solely for this story, and perhaps I might continue to use him in some other stories (if not with animals than with humans, as creating detective characters is always fun.)

Also, his progression from naive detective to Inspector of Police is based off of Gaston Leroux's short story, The Case of the Yellow Room, just a little fun reference.

June 24, 2016
Usa Male
Pages 14-16
Quite gripping. You did the boxkeeper's description of her encounter very well.

June 23, 2016
Usa Male
Back after a long hiatus.

Page 13 (end of Chapter 3): Uh-huh; that's the Steele I remember, alright.

The detective character, Jean-Claude, intrigues - particularly as I've recently begun work on a couple of police-related stories.

My apologies for taking so long to get back to this.

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
Hopefully you'll enjoy them! :)

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
That all makes sense. btw, I've pasted the next several pages to a document for offline reading.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
I totally know what you mean. Jenna and Steele just seem like a very unlikely couple. It's like Nala and Scar in the Lion King. You just don't do it!
But I can assure you, there will be some good Jenna and Balto scenes in this as well. ;)

Yeah, I've noticed that you're into mostly anthro Balto fanfics, and I just wanted to clear up that yes, they, and everyone else in the story, is a feral animal, not an anthro one (I said that even though they're anthropomorphic, I was mostly referring to the definition, not necessarily stating that they were anthro characters.)

I don't know, I just felt it was sort of appropriate. Somebody actually commented on that as some point, and was wondering as to why I did that. I mostly wanted to keep them in their original forms since everyone is mostly familiar with it, and it's also reminiscent with movies such as All Dogs Go To Heaven, where some scenes have characters doing what they do in my story (wearing clothing, holding objects, etc.) Yes, I know, dogs don't wear clothes, but I think it's a fun little addition, just for the sake of this fan fic.

Also, that's kind of the whole point of this part. Jenna and Steele haven't met in like 13 years or so (well, just for this story anyway) so it would make sense for her not to recognize him.

- Dante

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Just chiming in here, since you and JC kind of lead into it; the first project on our collab list will not be anthro - just in case anyone was concerned about that.

Also, on to Page 12. Not bad, especially for a Jenna/Steele scene (which I usually detest, so getting a "not bad" out of me for one is pretty big). The description of them moving on all fours kind of threw me because when you describe them in clothes and so on my mind naturally drifts to a more "anthro" version of them. Also, I was kind of surprised at how long it took Jenna to connect the dots. Other than that, it's good.

February 21, 2016
Usa Male
I'm glad that you've enjoyed it. To tell you the truth, I'm also a purist for the original forms of the characters. And even though I stated that in the introduction, they are anthropomorphic, I was referring to that they have the same characteristics of the Balto film, they just have more human like qualities to them, such as wearing clothes and such. Of course anyone can interpret it in their own way, I hint in some of the chapters that they are still in their original feral forms.

Also, don't feel bad if you're not analyzing every aspect of the story. I'll take anything that I can get when it comes to comments or critiques. As long as someone enjoys it, it's good enough for me! :)

Yeah, it's a long one, since I wrote it in chapters, but I decided to just put the whole thing here. Might as well, but I didn't think it'd be as long as I originally thought.

Oh, I don't consider myself to be that advanced. I've just had years of experience, what with English always being my favorite subject in school. Always has. I may not write like the greats, but I know exactly what to put down, in order to give the reader something cool and interesting to read. And I'm glad you've enjoyed thus far! :)

February 20, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Okay, so, I have been pouring gradually through this, and I must admit, I am enjoying it! You have a keen writing style, which is pretty advanced (considering the relative writing skills of the average fan writer). A few thoughts:

1. I will continue to read the whole thing but, given that I have completed at least a few chapters, I feel that I have gotten the entire gist of this, enough to comment on it...

2. As I mentioned to DT with his recent submission, I am a purist when it comes to the characters. While I love seeing them in good and effective crossovers, I really am not a fan of anthro concepts. Now, that being said, you HAVE crafted an entertaining and engaging story line here, and it would be untrue to suggest that I am not enjoying it!

3. I guess the only anthro setting I ever have enjoyed (and continue to) is that created by Disney for the Robin Hood movie. For me, that worked. And I guess I have seen it that was because I viewed it years ago as a kid. It's another great crossover. And I SUSPECT that the "Zootopia" film will be likewise for me...I even have already made up my mind that it could work as a modern-day future of the Disney Robin Hood setting. Now that I can get behind! Not taking anything away from what you've crafted here of course.

4. While I am not a fan of the Phantom of the Opera epic (though I know the basics of the story, and went to read a full outline of it to get myself prepped for this read), I know it is a great work of literature, and I totally see why you chose it. Especially given the fact that you are a fan of that story.

5. I'm not much of a "Monday-morning quarterback", and I personally don't like to minutely analyze chapter and verse in comments. So you won't see that much from me (and I hope I'm not letting you down in that regard). The size of this work makes it very intimidating to try and flip back through and locate something to analyze in comments. I hope you don't mind!

All that aside, you really have crafted a very good story here so far, and I am impressed! It is a LOOOONG one (lol), perhaps the longest I've seen on Animation Source (as far as I can recall anyway), but I understand why it is as long as it is.

Best of luck with Part 2!

February 08, 2016
Usa Male
UPDATE: The 2nd part of this story is still being worked on, however, for those of you who don't wish to wait for the entire thing to be posted here, this story is also uploaded and updated on my DeviantArt account: HydeCorner, and on my Fanfiction account: Dante Frost.
Once I'm finished with the 2nd part, I will upload the entire thing here. Until then, feel free to follow along either my DeviantArt account, or on my Fanfiction account.

Also, for future stories, I am currently working with Dragon Tamer (Author of the Toby series and Balto's Treasure Island) or Omnitrix 12 on Fanfiction.net for a collab story. Be on the look out for that in the near future.

Peace!

- Dante Frost

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