laughing.

   "Excuse us, Monsieur, but did you just say Opera Ghost?" Monsieur Nikki said, in between his chuckling.

   "Yes, I did…" Monsieur Levefre said, as he too chuckled rather nervously, "I was merely joking with you, messieurs. A ghost in the Opera Canine, ha! How ridiculous is that."

   "Indeed, Monsieur." Kaltag responded, "We definitely needed a good laugh."

   "Well, I will be on my way, gentledogs," The grey husky said, as he walked to the door, "If you need anything, I will be in Venice." With that, the manager left the Canine for good, leaving it all to the three new ones.

   Monsieur Kaltag sat down at his new desk, and found a bottle of champagne in one of the drawers, "So, my friends, how about a toast?" He asked, as he poured a few glasses of champagne for the three of them.

   "To our new jobs!" He declared, raising his glass.

   "To our new jobs!" Nikki and Star repeated, as the trio drank their glasses. Just then, out of the corner of his eye, the grey-purple husky saw a rather peculiar letter sitting on the table.

   "Hey guys, check this out." He said, as he put his glass down, and lifted the letter in his paws. "This letter looks it's for us," The clean, white envelope was sealed by what looked like a red, wax stamp, which formed the shape of a dog's skull.

   "Well, open it and see what's inside." The large, brown husky ordered.

   "I don't know," Star said nervously, "It looks kind of...scary."

   "Oh, give it here!" Kaltag said, as he snatched the letter out of the dog's paws. He opened the skull seal, and noticed straight away something was "off" about this letter. Whoever wrote the letter mustn't have gone to school, since the pawwriting was rather clumsy. A few of the lines went off in different directions, some were bigger than others, and the words themselves were jumbled together.

   Monsieur Kaltag scowled at the letter, whoever wrote this, he thought, really needs to work on his penmanship. Despite the terrible etiquette of the letter, it was still decipherable, so Kaltag read it aloud:

   To the newly appointed managers of Le Palais Canine,

   First and foremost, I would like to introduce myself. I am a mere "admirer" of the Canine and the works that are performed there, and I apologize if I am unable to greet you three directly. Certain circumstances have prevented me from doing so. Therefore, I will send you notes (of the most amiable nature) detailing how my Opera House is to be run.

   It is my greatest pleasure to work with you three, despite what Monsieur Levefre has said. After seeing your resumes, it appears to me that you three do not have any sort of knowledge of the Opera House (or about music in general). However, I will gladly help you three on this wonderful journey to making your name well known throughout all of Paris, if you heed my instructions that is.

   1. You must take into account any sort of complaints that I shall describe (in excruciating detail) to you. As a connoisseur of the Canine, I'm a well trained watcher and listener, and I can hear and see any kind of problem that goes on in the Canine. Whether it has anything to do with a bad performance, bad practices, improvements, renovations, or (this is most important) if you three are not doing your jobs properly, you must see to it that these problems are resolved as soon as possible. (This is a busy place after all. I cannot allow anything bad to happen here. If one bad apple is spoiled, it might ruin the entire tree.)

   2. I come to the Canine during every single performance. In fact, Messieurs Debeinne and Poligny have ordered the box office and the box-keeper, Mademoiselle Aurelia, to leave Box Five, (the balcony on the 2nd level of the theater, the one near the stage), to me, and me alone. You are to not sell that Box, for it is my private box. If you have any questions about this, please refer to box-keeper. She will definitely reassure that it is my box.

   3. I'm sure you do not know, but I once met the creator of the Canine himself, Monsieur Charles Canine. He had asked me to support his work on the Opera House during its construction. In fact, I was asked to help build it and design it, and since I helped create this wonderful place, I believe it is appropriate for me to receive compensation for my efforts. So, by request of the creator, Monsieur Debienne and Poligny has ordered that every manager after them to send me 20,000 francs a month. Monsieur Levefre has yet to pay me, however, he has promised to send me my payment as soon as possible, so you are free from paying me this month. However, you must pay me every month after that, so do not forget. I have "other" projects that I have been working on, and I must have funds for them to progress.

   4. Any other type of demand that you shall receive from these notes will and must be followed without any kind of protest or question. You are merely to do as you are told, and are not to object to anything that I request of you.

   This first note may seem undesirable and unimportant at first, but I can assure you, however, that they in fact are not. If you are able to follow them without any trouble, then I will not give you any trouble. As long as you do that, then I'm sure this will be a great experience for all of us.

   Your dear friend,

   O.G.

   P.S. Failure to follow any of these rules, or attempting to try and squeeze your way out of completing them, you will be met with rather unfortunate "accidents" that will cost you dearly. I can assure you, messieurs, I personally do not wish to harm anyone, so hopefully you will do the job that you have been assigned.

   As the Chinook finished reading the letter, the three were silent, and didn't exactly know how to respond. The letter sounded like a threat, yet the managers weren't exactly fazed by this, as they proceeded to laugh out loud a second time.

   Monsieur Kaltag said, as he caught his breath, "I have to write to Levefre for coming up with that one, that was funny."

   "It certainly caught me off guard." Nikki interjected, "I mean, what is this? A private box, free income, and orders that must be followed? Is this some kind of a joke?"

   "Um, guys," Star spoke up, "Don't you think whoever wrote this is serious?"

   "Oh Star," Nikki said, putting his arm around his friend, "You worry too much. This is obviously a prank…right Moncharmin?"

   "Of course it is," The Chinook responded, "Now, enough of this foolishness, let's go celebrate. Drinks are on me!"

   Well, not really, he thought.

   The newly appointed managers nodded in agreement, and the three walked out of their new office.

 

 

   The Chagny brother's carriage pulled up in front of their home estate, which was a large, white mansion with quite an impressive garden in front, with a fountain in the middle with a few statues here and there.

   "So, did you enjoy the Gala, brother?" Philippe asked the younger husky, as they got out of the carriage.

   "It was ok," Steele replied without looking at his brother. Philippe could tell that something was upsetting him, but he decided to just keep quiet. Steele was definitely the stubborn type, and at one time the two didn't speak to each other for about a week. So, he merely let his brother have some time to himself.

   As Steele bid his brother goodnight, he entered his bedroom, which was filled with lavish furniture, red and black drapes on the curtains, a small fireplace, a large, glass mirror that was placed in front of his Queen-sized bed, which had curtains on either side of the bed.

   The husky sighed as he took of his suit and vest and threw then on the bed. I can't believe that Jenna didn't want to go out with me, he thought,no one ever turns down Steele de Chagny! He groaned entered his bath-room, switched on the electrical switch, and washed his face vigorously in the sink. After that he took of his white shirt, turned on the bath, and after it was filled up, slowly entered the warm water.

   As he thought more of Jenna, the more his head hurt. That memory that he had witnessed during the Gala was still lingering around in his mind, and it was bugging him. He laid his head back at the edge of the tub, slowly closed his eyes, and drifted off.

 

 

   Perros-Guriec was quite a wonderful place to be during the summer time, where the sun wasn't too hot, and the brief air currents made the fallen leaves and grass blow about in the wind. The beach that was near the Plage Saint-Guirec was also a popular attraction for the dogs that went there. Stephen de Chagny, who was about 7 years of age during that time, found himself in the midst of this field, as he had snuck away from his mother, who was trying to get him to pay attention to his studies.

   After walking a few ways away from the Plage Saint-Guirec where they were staying at, he managed to make his way to the beach undetected. As he made his way down from a few rocks, he could feel the soft, warm sand beneath his paws, the



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June 30, 2016
Usa Male
Thanks, it's no problem at all. I'm still working on the rest of the story, just been a while since i've been on here.

Ah yes, the Inspector is a character that I've created solely for this story, and perhaps I might continue to use him in some other stories (if not with animals than with humans, as creating detective characters is always fun.)

Also, his progression from naive detective to Inspector of Police is based off of Gaston Leroux's short story, The Case of the Yellow Room, just a little fun reference.

June 24, 2016
Usa Male
Pages 14-16
Quite gripping. You did the boxkeeper's description of her encounter very well.

June 23, 2016
Usa Male
Back after a long hiatus.

Page 13 (end of Chapter 3): Uh-huh; that's the Steele I remember, alright.

The detective character, Jean-Claude, intrigues - particularly as I've recently begun work on a couple of police-related stories.

My apologies for taking so long to get back to this.

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
Hopefully you'll enjoy them! :)

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
That all makes sense. btw, I've pasted the next several pages to a document for offline reading.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
I totally know what you mean. Jenna and Steele just seem like a very unlikely couple. It's like Nala and Scar in the Lion King. You just don't do it!
But I can assure you, there will be some good Jenna and Balto scenes in this as well. ;)

Yeah, I've noticed that you're into mostly anthro Balto fanfics, and I just wanted to clear up that yes, they, and everyone else in the story, is a feral animal, not an anthro one (I said that even though they're anthropomorphic, I was mostly referring to the definition, not necessarily stating that they were anthro characters.)

I don't know, I just felt it was sort of appropriate. Somebody actually commented on that as some point, and was wondering as to why I did that. I mostly wanted to keep them in their original forms since everyone is mostly familiar with it, and it's also reminiscent with movies such as All Dogs Go To Heaven, where some scenes have characters doing what they do in my story (wearing clothing, holding objects, etc.) Yes, I know, dogs don't wear clothes, but I think it's a fun little addition, just for the sake of this fan fic.

Also, that's kind of the whole point of this part. Jenna and Steele haven't met in like 13 years or so (well, just for this story anyway) so it would make sense for her not to recognize him.

- Dante

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Just chiming in here, since you and JC kind of lead into it; the first project on our collab list will not be anthro - just in case anyone was concerned about that.

Also, on to Page 12. Not bad, especially for a Jenna/Steele scene (which I usually detest, so getting a "not bad" out of me for one is pretty big). The description of them moving on all fours kind of threw me because when you describe them in clothes and so on my mind naturally drifts to a more "anthro" version of them. Also, I was kind of surprised at how long it took Jenna to connect the dots. Other than that, it's good.

February 21, 2016
Usa Male
I'm glad that you've enjoyed it. To tell you the truth, I'm also a purist for the original forms of the characters. And even though I stated that in the introduction, they are anthropomorphic, I was referring to that they have the same characteristics of the Balto film, they just have more human like qualities to them, such as wearing clothes and such. Of course anyone can interpret it in their own way, I hint in some of the chapters that they are still in their original feral forms.

Also, don't feel bad if you're not analyzing every aspect of the story. I'll take anything that I can get when it comes to comments or critiques. As long as someone enjoys it, it's good enough for me! :)

Yeah, it's a long one, since I wrote it in chapters, but I decided to just put the whole thing here. Might as well, but I didn't think it'd be as long as I originally thought.

Oh, I don't consider myself to be that advanced. I've just had years of experience, what with English always being my favorite subject in school. Always has. I may not write like the greats, but I know exactly what to put down, in order to give the reader something cool and interesting to read. And I'm glad you've enjoyed thus far! :)

February 20, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Okay, so, I have been pouring gradually through this, and I must admit, I am enjoying it! You have a keen writing style, which is pretty advanced (considering the relative writing skills of the average fan writer). A few thoughts:

1. I will continue to read the whole thing but, given that I have completed at least a few chapters, I feel that I have gotten the entire gist of this, enough to comment on it...

2. As I mentioned to DT with his recent submission, I am a purist when it comes to the characters. While I love seeing them in good and effective crossovers, I really am not a fan of anthro concepts. Now, that being said, you HAVE crafted an entertaining and engaging story line here, and it would be untrue to suggest that I am not enjoying it!

3. I guess the only anthro setting I ever have enjoyed (and continue to) is that created by Disney for the Robin Hood movie. For me, that worked. And I guess I have seen it that was because I viewed it years ago as a kid. It's another great crossover. And I SUSPECT that the "Zootopia" film will be likewise for me...I even have already made up my mind that it could work as a modern-day future of the Disney Robin Hood setting. Now that I can get behind! Not taking anything away from what you've crafted here of course.

4. While I am not a fan of the Phantom of the Opera epic (though I know the basics of the story, and went to read a full outline of it to get myself prepped for this read), I know it is a great work of literature, and I totally see why you chose it. Especially given the fact that you are a fan of that story.

5. I'm not much of a "Monday-morning quarterback", and I personally don't like to minutely analyze chapter and verse in comments. So you won't see that much from me (and I hope I'm not letting you down in that regard). The size of this work makes it very intimidating to try and flip back through and locate something to analyze in comments. I hope you don't mind!

All that aside, you really have crafted a very good story here so far, and I am impressed! It is a LOOOONG one (lol), perhaps the longest I've seen on Animation Source (as far as I can recall anyway), but I understand why it is as long as it is.

Best of luck with Part 2!

February 08, 2016
Usa Male
UPDATE: The 2nd part of this story is still being worked on, however, for those of you who don't wish to wait for the entire thing to be posted here, this story is also uploaded and updated on my DeviantArt account: HydeCorner, and on my Fanfiction account: Dante Frost.
Once I'm finished with the 2nd part, I will upload the entire thing here. Until then, feel free to follow along either my DeviantArt account, or on my Fanfiction account.

Also, for future stories, I am currently working with Dragon Tamer (Author of the Toby series and Balto's Treasure Island) or Omnitrix 12 on Fanfiction.net for a collab story. Be on the look out for that in the near future.

Peace!

- Dante Frost

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