"Ladies and gentledogs," Monsieur Levefre said as he took a glass in his paw, "It has been a long 8 years since I took over the role of manager from Monsieur Debienne and Monsieur Poligny, the first managers of the Canine. And after those years, I'm surprised that I have lasted this long. I am deeply honored for having the chance of being part of this wonderful establishment. So here is to all those years." Levefre raised his glass, and everyone else followed suite.

   "Before we start, I would like to introduce you all to the three dogs that will be running the Opera Canine," He then waved his paw over the trio and called out their names in order, who stood up when their name was called, Monsieur Nikki Firmin to the dog on right, Monsieur Kaltag Moncharmin in the middle, and Monsieur Star Andre on the left.

   Everyone applauded the three dogs, and as they sat back down in their chairs, they could hear that someone was still clapping rather slowly. A few of the guests who were seated at the rectangular tables noticed this, and when they looked over to find the source of the clapping, a few of them gasped, and immediately turned there heads.

   "It's the Opera Ghost," One of them whispered, and soon everyone in the Foyer had their heads turned towards the clapping sound, and what they saw made their blood run cold.

   The ghost was seated at one of the tables at the very back, in one of the corners of the Foyer, a table that was far away from all of the rest, which had a black tablecloth over it instead of white one. One of the lights was out at that corner, making that entire place covered with a black shadow, and a few of the dogs near the table could make out a pair of yellow eyes with brown irises, staring back at them. They couldn't see much of his body, for the darkness around him seemed to cover his entire form. Only his eyes could be seen, along with his large, furry grey paws, which slowly clapped in a rather unsettling motion, which broke the eerie silence that had placed over the entire Foyer.

   Monsieur Levefre coughed slightly, as a grave; rather upsetting feeling came over him. I promised I'd pay him tomorrow before I leave…oh I hope he isn't too angry. Upon making eye contact with the ghost, his fears were no doubt realized.

   The other dogs next to him, however, where confused as to what was going on. Star was the first to speak up, "Um, excuse me, Monsieur Levefre, who is that?" He asked, "Is he a friend?"

   "No…not exactly…but he is a very…well-known dog around here." He said, as he looked over at the ghost's table, but saw that he was gone, with the light illuminating the spot where the ghost sat, revealing it to be empty. As soon as everyone realized this, the happy mood returned to the Foyer.

   "That was weird," Monsieur Kaltag said, "Kind of random as well."

   "Yes, indeed," Monsieur Levefre then got up from his seat, having suddenly lost his appetite, "If you please, gentledogs, follow me and I will show you to your new office.."

   "Of course, Monsieur," Monsieur Kaltag replied, as he and Nikki stood up, however Star seemed to be speaking to one of the females at the other table, who was stroking his chin.

   "You know, I'm going to be the boss of this place pretty soon," He said grinning, "and if you want, you can come into my office anyt-wuph!" The purple dog was then dragged out by his suit collar, which was grasped by Monsieur Kaltag, who merely ignored his friend's whimpers.

   "Aw, I was just getting started," Star whimpered in protest.

   "Come on, you can flirt later," Kaltag replied, as the three went out of the Grand Foyer.

   It was truly a miracle that Monsieur Levefre managed to find these three, despite their lack of knowledge of the music business. He was a tad desperate, and despite his lack of knowledge of the three dogs, he thought he might as well offer them a job. It was no surprise that they agreed, for the trio seemed just as desperate for change from their boring, dull lifestyles.

   Kaltag Moncharmin, the head of the three dogs, had previously been a journalist for the paper Le Figaro, in which he was known for his impeccable "pawwriting" and immense use of adjectives, and whilst he enjoyed it, he wasn't really interested in it after writing about bland and boring events.

   Nikki Firmin had previously worked in the scrap metal business, and it was about as dull as you could think of. Having to work day and night in the factory wasn't exactly fun, what with the fear of getting burned by the hot metal and getting covered with soot being eminent, it wasn't all too fitting for the brown husky, who still had a small burn spot on his neck.

   Star Andre worked as a waiter for the restaurant L'Orchidée. He wasn't at all too pleased with his work, despite how easy it may have sounded, but having to wait on upper-class dogs that never really paid him much attention, were rude to him, and having been pushed around like a servant by his boss and staff, it definitely unsatisfied him. It was almost like he didn't exist, and his voice didn't matter at all.

   The three had first met at a small inn, and they became fast friends. They traded stories, and realized that they shared one thing in common: boredom, bored of their lives, bored of their jobs, and just all around fed up with not really being able do anything interesting. So, when the announcement for a managerial opening at the Palais Canine came in the paper, Kaltag was one of the first to get a copy, and told his two friends, and went to Monsieur Levefre for the job. Just the thought of actually running a business instead of working in it sounded exciting for the trio, and they sent their resumes to the Canine.

   Despite the other numerous amount of dogs that also applied for the position, and despite their incredible knowledge of business work and the music world, the trio still managed to snag the position, despite their non-musical background.

   Monsieur Levefre led the dogs over to the area with the Grand Staircase, which, much like the foyer, was polished with gold, which could be seen as soon as someone walked through the entrance. The staircase was made up of 2 separate staircases, with two on each side, which led to the second floor, with both of them being leading to the largest staircase, which led down to the floor. The staircase itself was covered in white marble, and above the area were even more mosaic paintings, with a skylight in the middle. At each side of the different pillars and railings of the Grand Staircase area, were small lamps that illuminated the entire place.

   The Manager's Office was located near the entrance, which could conveniently found on the right side of the Grand Staircase. Monsieur Levefre opened the door with his key, and the 4 walked inside. The office wasn't very big, but it also wasn't so small either. The manager's desk was located on the left; with one chair on either side of the table; with a few papers strewn about the top it, alongside a small cigar box, and a small, silver candlestick. The right side held a bookcase, which took up most of the wall, with a piano at its feet, which was used for private auditions. In the middle was a fireplace, with the portraits of Monsieur Debienne and Monsieur Poligny, the previous managers, at the top; a small clock which was placed on the top of the mantelpiece of the hearth, with two small, marble vases on the sides. At the two ends of the fireplace held two tall candlesticks, which were held up by tall, black candle holders. The office seemed to have something of a homey, peaceful sort of feel to it, as the candles darkly lit up the place, as ones paws felt nice against the red velvet carpet.

   "Now, gentledogs, this is your new 'home away from home' as they say." The old manager chuckled to himself.

   "We thank you, Monsieur." Monsieur Kaltag replied, taking off his hat, "Place looks great, fantastic, splendid, magnificent-"

   "It's awesome!" Star suddenly exclaimed, but only received a smack to the head by the Alaskan Chinnok. That sort of thing happened quite a lot for some unknown reason.

   "Oh, that reminds me," The manager then swiftly walked over to the desk, and opened up one the small drawers, at took out the contents inside, and walked back over to the three dogs.

   "These are the Master Keys, messieurs, of the Opera Canine. These keys are tremendously valuable to the Opera House, as they unlock every single room in this House, over 2,500 of them. Use them with extreme care, and do not let them out of your sight." The trio, standing in a line as they always did, each held out a paw to receive their key. Levefre gave one to Kaltag, then to Nikki, and as Star held out his eagerly, he realized he did not receive one.

   "Why didn't I get one?" He asked, frowning.

   "I'm sorry, Monsieur Andre," The elderly husky apologized, "But ever since I was given the reigns of this House, messieurs Debienne and Poligny had told me that the third key suddenly went missing one day. They haven't found it since. They said that the Opera Ghost had stolen it."

   This sudden statement about a ghost made the three burst out laughing.

 



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June 30, 2016
Usa Male
Thanks, it's no problem at all. I'm still working on the rest of the story, just been a while since i've been on here.

Ah yes, the Inspector is a character that I've created solely for this story, and perhaps I might continue to use him in some other stories (if not with animals than with humans, as creating detective characters is always fun.)

Also, his progression from naive detective to Inspector of Police is based off of Gaston Leroux's short story, The Case of the Yellow Room, just a little fun reference.

June 24, 2016
Usa Male
Pages 14-16
Quite gripping. You did the boxkeeper's description of her encounter very well.

June 23, 2016
Usa Male
Back after a long hiatus.

Page 13 (end of Chapter 3): Uh-huh; that's the Steele I remember, alright.

The detective character, Jean-Claude, intrigues - particularly as I've recently begun work on a couple of police-related stories.

My apologies for taking so long to get back to this.

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
Hopefully you'll enjoy them! :)

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
That all makes sense. btw, I've pasted the next several pages to a document for offline reading.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
I totally know what you mean. Jenna and Steele just seem like a very unlikely couple. It's like Nala and Scar in the Lion King. You just don't do it!
But I can assure you, there will be some good Jenna and Balto scenes in this as well. ;)

Yeah, I've noticed that you're into mostly anthro Balto fanfics, and I just wanted to clear up that yes, they, and everyone else in the story, is a feral animal, not an anthro one (I said that even though they're anthropomorphic, I was mostly referring to the definition, not necessarily stating that they were anthro characters.)

I don't know, I just felt it was sort of appropriate. Somebody actually commented on that as some point, and was wondering as to why I did that. I mostly wanted to keep them in their original forms since everyone is mostly familiar with it, and it's also reminiscent with movies such as All Dogs Go To Heaven, where some scenes have characters doing what they do in my story (wearing clothing, holding objects, etc.) Yes, I know, dogs don't wear clothes, but I think it's a fun little addition, just for the sake of this fan fic.

Also, that's kind of the whole point of this part. Jenna and Steele haven't met in like 13 years or so (well, just for this story anyway) so it would make sense for her not to recognize him.

- Dante

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Just chiming in here, since you and JC kind of lead into it; the first project on our collab list will not be anthro - just in case anyone was concerned about that.

Also, on to Page 12. Not bad, especially for a Jenna/Steele scene (which I usually detest, so getting a "not bad" out of me for one is pretty big). The description of them moving on all fours kind of threw me because when you describe them in clothes and so on my mind naturally drifts to a more "anthro" version of them. Also, I was kind of surprised at how long it took Jenna to connect the dots. Other than that, it's good.

February 21, 2016
Usa Male
I'm glad that you've enjoyed it. To tell you the truth, I'm also a purist for the original forms of the characters. And even though I stated that in the introduction, they are anthropomorphic, I was referring to that they have the same characteristics of the Balto film, they just have more human like qualities to them, such as wearing clothes and such. Of course anyone can interpret it in their own way, I hint in some of the chapters that they are still in their original feral forms.

Also, don't feel bad if you're not analyzing every aspect of the story. I'll take anything that I can get when it comes to comments or critiques. As long as someone enjoys it, it's good enough for me! :)

Yeah, it's a long one, since I wrote it in chapters, but I decided to just put the whole thing here. Might as well, but I didn't think it'd be as long as I originally thought.

Oh, I don't consider myself to be that advanced. I've just had years of experience, what with English always being my favorite subject in school. Always has. I may not write like the greats, but I know exactly what to put down, in order to give the reader something cool and interesting to read. And I'm glad you've enjoyed thus far! :)

February 20, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Okay, so, I have been pouring gradually through this, and I must admit, I am enjoying it! You have a keen writing style, which is pretty advanced (considering the relative writing skills of the average fan writer). A few thoughts:

1. I will continue to read the whole thing but, given that I have completed at least a few chapters, I feel that I have gotten the entire gist of this, enough to comment on it...

2. As I mentioned to DT with his recent submission, I am a purist when it comes to the characters. While I love seeing them in good and effective crossovers, I really am not a fan of anthro concepts. Now, that being said, you HAVE crafted an entertaining and engaging story line here, and it would be untrue to suggest that I am not enjoying it!

3. I guess the only anthro setting I ever have enjoyed (and continue to) is that created by Disney for the Robin Hood movie. For me, that worked. And I guess I have seen it that was because I viewed it years ago as a kid. It's another great crossover. And I SUSPECT that the "Zootopia" film will be likewise for me...I even have already made up my mind that it could work as a modern-day future of the Disney Robin Hood setting. Now that I can get behind! Not taking anything away from what you've crafted here of course.

4. While I am not a fan of the Phantom of the Opera epic (though I know the basics of the story, and went to read a full outline of it to get myself prepped for this read), I know it is a great work of literature, and I totally see why you chose it. Especially given the fact that you are a fan of that story.

5. I'm not much of a "Monday-morning quarterback", and I personally don't like to minutely analyze chapter and verse in comments. So you won't see that much from me (and I hope I'm not letting you down in that regard). The size of this work makes it very intimidating to try and flip back through and locate something to analyze in comments. I hope you don't mind!

All that aside, you really have crafted a very good story here so far, and I am impressed! It is a LOOOONG one (lol), perhaps the longest I've seen on Animation Source (as far as I can recall anyway), but I understand why it is as long as it is.

Best of luck with Part 2!

February 08, 2016
Usa Male
UPDATE: The 2nd part of this story is still being worked on, however, for those of you who don't wish to wait for the entire thing to be posted here, this story is also uploaded and updated on my DeviantArt account: HydeCorner, and on my Fanfiction account: Dante Frost.
Once I'm finished with the 2nd part, I will upload the entire thing here. Until then, feel free to follow along either my DeviantArt account, or on my Fanfiction account.

Also, for future stories, I am currently working with Dragon Tamer (Author of the Toby series and Balto's Treasure Island) or Omnitrix 12 on Fanfiction.net for a collab story. Be on the look out for that in the near future.

Peace!

- Dante Frost

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