Suddenly, Jenna's vision failed her, and she fainted away.

   The husky awoke to the sound of some kind of booming crescendo, pulsating and almost shaking the very walls of the room she was in. She then drearily remembered what happened moments before. The song that Balto and her had sung together, and Balto tearing off the mask, that was still on the floor of the bedroom. She couldn't help but shiver when she remembered every gruesome detail of that awful face of him. However, her ears perked up at the sound of the organ that was vibrating all around her. She knew Balto must have felt terrible, and she couldn't help but feel bad for him. He probably wanted to show her his face, despite his previous protests.

   No wonder he wears a mask, she thought, walking over to the door, to hide that…face… She shook her head, trying her best to get rid of that image in her head. She slowly opened the door, and upon poking her head out, she saw Balto, with his back to hers, as he sat on his stool, his paws pounding away at the organ keys. He struck every key down with incredible force, the pipes on the organ blasting out note after note. It was almost like every single one of his emotions was being taken out on that instrument.

   "I can hear you…" He said depressingly. Jenna sighed, as she slowly made her way out of the room, and she crept over to the hybrid.

   "Balto…" She began, "I'm…I'm sorry about what happened. I didn't mean to-,"

   "I knew it," He interrupted solemnly, "You…you're just the same. You're just like all the rest."

   "Balto, please, I swear I didn't mean to be-," The hybrid spun around on his chair, to reveal his hideous face.

   "Afraid?" He growled, "You're afraid, aren't you? Even after you said you wouldn't be," The wolf-dog then chuckled, his soft, pure voice was now like that of a monster. It sounded deeper, and darker, "It's truly something, isn't it? How easily one can change their opinions on someone, based on their overall appearance." He then placed his paws on each side of his face, rocking that sick head back and forth, "Well, are you satisfied? I'm very handsome, huh? I'm exactly what you wanted me to be, huh? You're a liar, Jenna, you lied to me. I…I thought I could trust you…"

   "Balto, please, listen to me, I'm sorry for what I did," Jenna wasn't sure what to do, as this didn't seem like Balto. It was almost like he was a completely different dog. Considering her previous assumptions, she knew that Balto was still a criminal, and if this is who he really is, then who knows what he could be capable of. "I really want you to know that."

   "Don't you see, Jenna? Don't you see that this is who I am?" He slowly walked towards the husky, who couldn't help but slowly back away, that face getting closer and closer. "Well, I'm still regular Balto, your Angel of Music, the Opera Ghost, and your incredible teacher and friend. But this," He then drew himself up on his hind legs, "this is what I hide, this is the true horror that lurks within the Opera Canine!" He then squinted darkly at the husky, "And you found him."

   Jenna didn't answer, as she wasn't sure what to do. She had to find some way to make Balto calm down, but she was too afraid to try anything.

   "You think that I'm a bad dog, don't you? All those rumors about me are somewhat true, but they don't know everything. I'm just a lost soul, who wants nothing more to be accepted, but this face of mine is a curse, a terrible disease that decays the body, and unfortunately it has started on my face, ever since I was born. I thought you could take it, I thought you could handle it!" He soon became desperate again, his voice almost breaking out of sadness, "I thought you, my dearest friend, would love me back, and after all this time, this was my final task for you to accomplish. I thought someone as kind, as generous, and as beautiful of a dog like you would understand." He then slowly turned away from the husky, "But, I was wrong."

   "Balto, please, I was afraid, but there's nothing wrong with you. Your face isn't the problem, it's-," Jenna was once again interrupted as the hybrid suddenly, as he forced Jenna to the wall behind her, as he shook with a furious anger, as he angrily gazed down at her.

   "You don't know anything, Jenna!" He whispered, "I've had this all my life. It's been a problem that I've never been able to fix. Sure, a mask can hide it away, but I can't deny it forever." Jenna could see the tears forming in his eyes, "I…can't even…look at myself in a mirror…every night, I dream of a better place for me, a place where I can touch my face, and there will be fur, just like the rest of my body, but no! I can't have that kind of happiness. That's why I live down here, that's why I can never show my face, nor can I ever be with others. It's because of that dangerous curiosity that you clearly have, you just had to look, didn't you?" Jenna cringed the hybrid's awful face drew closer and closer to her, and she turned away, "Look…look at me!" He growled, forcing her to make contact with him once again, "I want you to see, Jenna, I want you to look at the face you wanted to look at. You think this is another mask, but you're wrong. Oh, you are so wrong. Go ahead, scream, try and shield yourself from the horror that's before you. Feast your eyes, and glut your soul on my cursed ugliness!"

   Jenna was shaking like a leaf as she couldn't tear herself away. Her heart was beating 100 miles per hour, and she felt like she was going to die of fright.

   "Please, Balto," She whimpered, "I'm sorry, please, I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to hurt you. Please, don't be angry, I didn't know, I swear I didn't know."

   "So, I should just let you go after all of this?" He backed away from the husky, leaving her frozen on the spot, "You'd probably tell that Jean-Claude, or the Managers, or you're friend Monsieur Vicomte, wouldn't you? You'd tell the whole world about me. I know you, I know dogs just like you. One minute they love you, the next their running away from you!"

   "Balto, please, can't you just listen to me?" Jenna begged, "I'll say it again, I'm sorry for what I did. I'd never hurt you, much like you'd never hurt me." She then walked up to the hybrid, who turned his face away, "I'm not like the rest of those dogs, Balto. I don't see you as a monster, I really don't. I've trusted you as a friend, and as a teacher. You're an amazing dog, Balto. I know you don't really think I'd ever hate you."

   The hybrid then sighed, "How can I trust you? I thought you'd…love me…" Jenna then took hold of the hybrid's paw, making him gasp.

   "I know what I did was wrong, Balto, but you have to understand that I'll never forget all that you've done. You're still the same wolf-dog that I know, and I know you can trust me again. Please, Balto." The hybrid looked down at the floor, and he seemed unconvinced. Jenna knew she was running out of options, and there just had to be some way to cheer him up.

   His mask, she thought of the mask that was still left on the floor of the bedroom, and she immediately went over to fetch it. Upon returning, she handed it over to him.

   "You…you really do understand, do you?" The hybrid's confidence seemed to be coming back, but Jenna could still see the doubt in his yellow eyes. He then took the mask from the husky, and he quickly placed it on his face.

   That face of his was finally gone, for now.

   "I guess I should apologize, Jenna. I didn't mean to snap at you." He made his way over to the coat rack, and took his cape and hat from it, and placed it on himself. "I'll take you back to your dressing room, now."

   Jenna followed the hybrid across the lake and up the long staircase in complete silence. They had nothing to say to each other, and Jenna was still perturbed from what had happened, and she knew Balto was just as doubtful as she was about him.

   Finally, they were near Jenna's dressing room. "I will leave now." Balto said, but before Jenna could turn to leave, he spoke up, his face had a hopeful expression, "You will come back, right?"

   Jenna replied, "Yes, I promise to come back. Good night, Balto."

   The hybrid nodded, "Bonne nuit, Mademoiselle." With one final smile that Jenna could make out in the dark, the hybrid vanished into the pitch-black darkness that surrounded them.

 

 

   "Then what happened?" Steele asked, as he was somewhat excited by what he had been hearing.

   "He left me there, and to tell you the truth, I didn't feel safe in my dressing room, nor did I feel safe in any part of the Canine. So, when I went home that night, I immediately wrote to you, saying that I needed your help."

   "And now where here."



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June 30, 2016
Usa Male
Thanks, it's no problem at all. I'm still working on the rest of the story, just been a while since i've been on here.

Ah yes, the Inspector is a character that I've created solely for this story, and perhaps I might continue to use him in some other stories (if not with animals than with humans, as creating detective characters is always fun.)

Also, his progression from naive detective to Inspector of Police is based off of Gaston Leroux's short story, The Case of the Yellow Room, just a little fun reference.

June 24, 2016
Usa Male
Pages 14-16
Quite gripping. You did the boxkeeper's description of her encounter very well.

June 23, 2016
Usa Male
Back after a long hiatus.

Page 13 (end of Chapter 3): Uh-huh; that's the Steele I remember, alright.

The detective character, Jean-Claude, intrigues - particularly as I've recently begun work on a couple of police-related stories.

My apologies for taking so long to get back to this.

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
Hopefully you'll enjoy them! :)

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
That all makes sense. btw, I've pasted the next several pages to a document for offline reading.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
I totally know what you mean. Jenna and Steele just seem like a very unlikely couple. It's like Nala and Scar in the Lion King. You just don't do it!
But I can assure you, there will be some good Jenna and Balto scenes in this as well. ;)

Yeah, I've noticed that you're into mostly anthro Balto fanfics, and I just wanted to clear up that yes, they, and everyone else in the story, is a feral animal, not an anthro one (I said that even though they're anthropomorphic, I was mostly referring to the definition, not necessarily stating that they were anthro characters.)

I don't know, I just felt it was sort of appropriate. Somebody actually commented on that as some point, and was wondering as to why I did that. I mostly wanted to keep them in their original forms since everyone is mostly familiar with it, and it's also reminiscent with movies such as All Dogs Go To Heaven, where some scenes have characters doing what they do in my story (wearing clothing, holding objects, etc.) Yes, I know, dogs don't wear clothes, but I think it's a fun little addition, just for the sake of this fan fic.

Also, that's kind of the whole point of this part. Jenna and Steele haven't met in like 13 years or so (well, just for this story anyway) so it would make sense for her not to recognize him.

- Dante

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Just chiming in here, since you and JC kind of lead into it; the first project on our collab list will not be anthro - just in case anyone was concerned about that.

Also, on to Page 12. Not bad, especially for a Jenna/Steele scene (which I usually detest, so getting a "not bad" out of me for one is pretty big). The description of them moving on all fours kind of threw me because when you describe them in clothes and so on my mind naturally drifts to a more "anthro" version of them. Also, I was kind of surprised at how long it took Jenna to connect the dots. Other than that, it's good.

February 21, 2016
Usa Male
I'm glad that you've enjoyed it. To tell you the truth, I'm also a purist for the original forms of the characters. And even though I stated that in the introduction, they are anthropomorphic, I was referring to that they have the same characteristics of the Balto film, they just have more human like qualities to them, such as wearing clothes and such. Of course anyone can interpret it in their own way, I hint in some of the chapters that they are still in their original feral forms.

Also, don't feel bad if you're not analyzing every aspect of the story. I'll take anything that I can get when it comes to comments or critiques. As long as someone enjoys it, it's good enough for me! :)

Yeah, it's a long one, since I wrote it in chapters, but I decided to just put the whole thing here. Might as well, but I didn't think it'd be as long as I originally thought.

Oh, I don't consider myself to be that advanced. I've just had years of experience, what with English always being my favorite subject in school. Always has. I may not write like the greats, but I know exactly what to put down, in order to give the reader something cool and interesting to read. And I'm glad you've enjoyed thus far! :)

February 20, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Okay, so, I have been pouring gradually through this, and I must admit, I am enjoying it! You have a keen writing style, which is pretty advanced (considering the relative writing skills of the average fan writer). A few thoughts:

1. I will continue to read the whole thing but, given that I have completed at least a few chapters, I feel that I have gotten the entire gist of this, enough to comment on it...

2. As I mentioned to DT with his recent submission, I am a purist when it comes to the characters. While I love seeing them in good and effective crossovers, I really am not a fan of anthro concepts. Now, that being said, you HAVE crafted an entertaining and engaging story line here, and it would be untrue to suggest that I am not enjoying it!

3. I guess the only anthro setting I ever have enjoyed (and continue to) is that created by Disney for the Robin Hood movie. For me, that worked. And I guess I have seen it that was because I viewed it years ago as a kid. It's another great crossover. And I SUSPECT that the "Zootopia" film will be likewise for me...I even have already made up my mind that it could work as a modern-day future of the Disney Robin Hood setting. Now that I can get behind! Not taking anything away from what you've crafted here of course.

4. While I am not a fan of the Phantom of the Opera epic (though I know the basics of the story, and went to read a full outline of it to get myself prepped for this read), I know it is a great work of literature, and I totally see why you chose it. Especially given the fact that you are a fan of that story.

5. I'm not much of a "Monday-morning quarterback", and I personally don't like to minutely analyze chapter and verse in comments. So you won't see that much from me (and I hope I'm not letting you down in that regard). The size of this work makes it very intimidating to try and flip back through and locate something to analyze in comments. I hope you don't mind!

All that aside, you really have crafted a very good story here so far, and I am impressed! It is a LOOOONG one (lol), perhaps the longest I've seen on Animation Source (as far as I can recall anyway), but I understand why it is as long as it is.

Best of luck with Part 2!

February 08, 2016
Usa Male
UPDATE: The 2nd part of this story is still being worked on, however, for those of you who don't wish to wait for the entire thing to be posted here, this story is also uploaded and updated on my DeviantArt account: HydeCorner, and on my Fanfiction account: Dante Frost.
Once I'm finished with the 2nd part, I will upload the entire thing here. Until then, feel free to follow along either my DeviantArt account, or on my Fanfiction account.

Also, for future stories, I am currently working with Dragon Tamer (Author of the Toby series and Balto's Treasure Island) or Omnitrix 12 on Fanfiction.net for a collab story. Be on the look out for that in the near future.

Peace!

- Dante Frost

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