see, I've made you my student because I wanted to show you my genius, in hopes that well...well..." He shuffled his grey paws, "I've been in need of a friend, and since I've gained your trust, I was wondering if you would, you know, want to be my companion, one that I can rely on, and one I can trust, like a friend?"

   Jenna seemed a bit touched, but even though Balto was harmless for the most part, she still wasn't too convinced. He might be her teacher, and probably the nicest and kindest creature in the world, but he was the Opera Ghost, a criminal hiding within the Opera House. She definitely needed to be more convinced.

   "Can I just be your student?" She replied, "We can meet down here instead of behind the walls in my workplace or in my dressing room, like face-to-face?"

   Balto's black face lit up, "Sounds great my dear," He then took Jenna's paw in his, "Together, we will take Paris by storm!" Balto raised a paw to the sky, as Jenna felt somewhat surprised by this sudden outburst.

   "Oh, sorry about that," He blushed, "Sort of overreacted." He chuckled, and walked over to his piano, "Shall I play something for you?"

   "Ok," Jenna responded, "What are you going to play?"

   "Why, it's a song of my own," Balto then opened a thin black folder with the words Music of the Night on the front in gold font, "Made specifically for you." Jenna simply blushed a bit, as she never had a song written for her before.

   He continued, "You see, Jenna, now that we have met, I am now able to show you something far more than singing lessons could ever give you. Music is more than just a gift, it is a God sent, something only the greatest of dogs could be born with. I have only given you a fraction of the power and glory that I have achieved over the years." He then scarcely caressed his paws over the keys on the piano, "Now, listen, as I, your Angel of Music, send you into a world of majesty and enlightenment."

   The wolf-dog slowly placed his paws on his piano, and like some kind of magician, slowly lifted them up, as he commanded a disembodied orchestra to start playing. Where it was coming from Jenna did not know, but it played almost hypnotically, and it was clear to her that Balto was about to sing, and as the rising symphony began to play, the entire world seemed to freeze in time, as Balto began to sing, slowly and softly, "Night time sharpens, heightens each sensation, darkness stirs and wakes imagination…"

   Jenna nearly gasped, as the sound of the wolf hybrid's voice was absolutely alluring, even in these first few notes. It didn't just sound like a regular opera voice, it sounded like a ghost had passed through his throat, as his voice echoed within the hollow walls of the lair. It was unlike anything she had heard before. True, she had heard his voice from behind the walls of the Canine sing those beautiful notes, but to see, to hear those notes come out of an ordinary being was almost astounding, unnatural.

   "Silently the senses abandon their defenses…" He then slowly lifted himself up on his hind legs, and gracefully passed the piano, and walked towards his slowly,

   "Slowly, gently, night unfurls its splendor," The way he moved! His entire being was like a spirit within him had possessed him, his body moved in such a way that allured the husky, almost like he and the music that played within the lair had become…one. He swayed his arms about, his footsteps silent as he 'glided' across the stone floor, "grasp it, sense it, tremulous and tender."

   As he neared Jenna, he dared not touch her, his paws gracefully passing over her fur, his pads barely feeling the white and ruby red hairs. This entire experience was strange, almost like she was being taken under a mesmerizing spell, his yellow eyes staring out of his phantom like form. It was almost like he was no longer the Opera Ghost she had seen, or the Angel that he claimed to be. He was truly a spirit of music, and she was his servant, as the world around her was no more, and it was taken over by the hybrid's dark, lustrous realm.

   He then lifted a paw, and caressed the husky's cheek, "Turn your face away, from the garish light of day," She felt herself turn her head, almost like the hybrid had commanded it, like she was under his control. He then moved his paw under her chin, carefully lifting it and drawing it towards him, as the two gazed into each other's eyes.

   "Turn your thoughts away from cold, unfeeling light and listen to, the music of the night." Balto gave a small smile, and used the other paw to move itself over the husky's eyes.

   "Close your eyes, and surrender to your darkest dreams," Jenna did so, and the voice of Balto seemed to become even greater when she could not see him, almost like some kind of disembodied angel was singing to her. It was clear to Jenna that this song was more than just entrancing. She seemed to be attracted to the hybrid in some way, his overall mysteriousness and voice had won her over, and she was helpless to resist his urges. "Purge your thoughts of the life you knew before," He slowly draped his arm over the husky's shoulders, drawing her closer to him, but they still were not touching. "Close your eyes, let your spirit start to sour…"

   Jenna's eyes were still closed, but like a marionette, as Balto lifted his paw above their heads, Jenna lifted her head up just as the paw did, almost like he was lifting her into the air. She then opened her eyes to gaze at the hybrid next to her. "And you'll live, as you've never lived, before…"

   Balto then backed away from Jenna, and lifted his paws again, and continued his song, "Softly, deftly, music shall caress you, hear it, feel it, secretly possess you…" Jenna was even more mesmerized by the hybrid, as he stepped back, caressing himself, his paws moving over his suit and chest and sides, using another paw to lead Jenna along with him.

   "Open up your mind, let your fantasies unwind," As he got to the large medieval gate, he turned around, and raised his arms to ceiling again. He seemed to sprawl against the portcullis, his claws grasping against the black bars, and he turned again, his back to the gate, his body in some kind of seductive pose. "In this darkness which you know you cannot fight, the darkness of the music of the night…"

   Jenna then went over to the hybrid whose arms were stretched against the gate, and was about to touch him, but the hybrid flinched, making Jenna walk away from him, and he let go of the gate, and walked towards her again, his voice rising itself from its soft key to a more booming tone, as the music itself grew itself to a large crescendo. "Close your eyes, start a journey through a strange, new world, leave all thoughts of the world you knew before, close your eyes and let music set you free!" His voice grew to immense proportions, almost like a thunder clap of power and control. He had such control over his voice it was phenomenal. As he hit the last note, like a composer at the end of piece, as he raised up his arms like his voice, and waved his paws over his head, silencing the music for a brief moment. He then gave Jenna his paw, to which she took, and he gently, ever so gently drew his arm over her neck, her back to his chest, and she felt herself lie her head against Balto's arm.

   "Only then can you belong to me..." The two dogs then rocked back and forth, almost like a rocking chair in tune with the music, which seemed to slow itself down into a soft, melodic tone, almost like a lullaby,

   "Floating, falling, sweet intoxication," Jenna then felt the urge to touch the hybrid that was holding her, and she almost touched the black mask covering his face, and Balto caught it in a swift motion, and caressed her being, this time scarcely feeling her soft fur. He seemed to tremble, as this was the first time that he had actually felt her like this, and it made him feel sensations he had never felt before. "Touch me, trust me, savor each sensation…"

   He then held her paws, and lifted her up on her hind legs as him, as they slowly moved around the lair, "Let the dream begin, let your darker side give in, to the power of the music that I write…the power of the music of the night…"

   Jenna, completely entranced in this song, felt herself slowly come close to the hybrid's chest, their paws still touching, and the incredible experience was more than she could bear, and she collapsed into Balto's arms, half-awake and half-asleep.

   The hybrid gasped, as he wasn't expecting this to happen. He lifted the husky in his arms, and quickly walked over to the spare room with the red satin bed. As he laid her on the pillows of the bed, he looked over husky. She seemed even more beautiful in the dim candle light. He couldn't take his glowing, yellow eyes off of her, her attractiveness almost as alluring as his voice.

   "You alone can make my song take flight…" He sang softly, as Balto's song came to a close. Jenna slowly opened her eyes to see the hybrid standing over her, but Balto moved his paw over her face against, telling her to rest, and as she slowly drifted off into a deep slumber, the last thing she



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June 30, 2016
Usa Male
Thanks, it's no problem at all. I'm still working on the rest of the story, just been a while since i've been on here.

Ah yes, the Inspector is a character that I've created solely for this story, and perhaps I might continue to use him in some other stories (if not with animals than with humans, as creating detective characters is always fun.)

Also, his progression from naive detective to Inspector of Police is based off of Gaston Leroux's short story, The Case of the Yellow Room, just a little fun reference.

June 24, 2016
Usa Male
Pages 14-16
Quite gripping. You did the boxkeeper's description of her encounter very well.

June 23, 2016
Usa Male
Back after a long hiatus.

Page 13 (end of Chapter 3): Uh-huh; that's the Steele I remember, alright.

The detective character, Jean-Claude, intrigues - particularly as I've recently begun work on a couple of police-related stories.

My apologies for taking so long to get back to this.

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
Hopefully you'll enjoy them! :)

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
That all makes sense. btw, I've pasted the next several pages to a document for offline reading.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
I totally know what you mean. Jenna and Steele just seem like a very unlikely couple. It's like Nala and Scar in the Lion King. You just don't do it!
But I can assure you, there will be some good Jenna and Balto scenes in this as well. ;)

Yeah, I've noticed that you're into mostly anthro Balto fanfics, and I just wanted to clear up that yes, they, and everyone else in the story, is a feral animal, not an anthro one (I said that even though they're anthropomorphic, I was mostly referring to the definition, not necessarily stating that they were anthro characters.)

I don't know, I just felt it was sort of appropriate. Somebody actually commented on that as some point, and was wondering as to why I did that. I mostly wanted to keep them in their original forms since everyone is mostly familiar with it, and it's also reminiscent with movies such as All Dogs Go To Heaven, where some scenes have characters doing what they do in my story (wearing clothing, holding objects, etc.) Yes, I know, dogs don't wear clothes, but I think it's a fun little addition, just for the sake of this fan fic.

Also, that's kind of the whole point of this part. Jenna and Steele haven't met in like 13 years or so (well, just for this story anyway) so it would make sense for her not to recognize him.

- Dante

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Just chiming in here, since you and JC kind of lead into it; the first project on our collab list will not be anthro - just in case anyone was concerned about that.

Also, on to Page 12. Not bad, especially for a Jenna/Steele scene (which I usually detest, so getting a "not bad" out of me for one is pretty big). The description of them moving on all fours kind of threw me because when you describe them in clothes and so on my mind naturally drifts to a more "anthro" version of them. Also, I was kind of surprised at how long it took Jenna to connect the dots. Other than that, it's good.

February 21, 2016
Usa Male
I'm glad that you've enjoyed it. To tell you the truth, I'm also a purist for the original forms of the characters. And even though I stated that in the introduction, they are anthropomorphic, I was referring to that they have the same characteristics of the Balto film, they just have more human like qualities to them, such as wearing clothes and such. Of course anyone can interpret it in their own way, I hint in some of the chapters that they are still in their original feral forms.

Also, don't feel bad if you're not analyzing every aspect of the story. I'll take anything that I can get when it comes to comments or critiques. As long as someone enjoys it, it's good enough for me! :)

Yeah, it's a long one, since I wrote it in chapters, but I decided to just put the whole thing here. Might as well, but I didn't think it'd be as long as I originally thought.

Oh, I don't consider myself to be that advanced. I've just had years of experience, what with English always being my favorite subject in school. Always has. I may not write like the greats, but I know exactly what to put down, in order to give the reader something cool and interesting to read. And I'm glad you've enjoyed thus far! :)

February 20, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Okay, so, I have been pouring gradually through this, and I must admit, I am enjoying it! You have a keen writing style, which is pretty advanced (considering the relative writing skills of the average fan writer). A few thoughts:

1. I will continue to read the whole thing but, given that I have completed at least a few chapters, I feel that I have gotten the entire gist of this, enough to comment on it...

2. As I mentioned to DT with his recent submission, I am a purist when it comes to the characters. While I love seeing them in good and effective crossovers, I really am not a fan of anthro concepts. Now, that being said, you HAVE crafted an entertaining and engaging story line here, and it would be untrue to suggest that I am not enjoying it!

3. I guess the only anthro setting I ever have enjoyed (and continue to) is that created by Disney for the Robin Hood movie. For me, that worked. And I guess I have seen it that was because I viewed it years ago as a kid. It's another great crossover. And I SUSPECT that the "Zootopia" film will be likewise for me...I even have already made up my mind that it could work as a modern-day future of the Disney Robin Hood setting. Now that I can get behind! Not taking anything away from what you've crafted here of course.

4. While I am not a fan of the Phantom of the Opera epic (though I know the basics of the story, and went to read a full outline of it to get myself prepped for this read), I know it is a great work of literature, and I totally see why you chose it. Especially given the fact that you are a fan of that story.

5. I'm not much of a "Monday-morning quarterback", and I personally don't like to minutely analyze chapter and verse in comments. So you won't see that much from me (and I hope I'm not letting you down in that regard). The size of this work makes it very intimidating to try and flip back through and locate something to analyze in comments. I hope you don't mind!

All that aside, you really have crafted a very good story here so far, and I am impressed! It is a LOOOONG one (lol), perhaps the longest I've seen on Animation Source (as far as I can recall anyway), but I understand why it is as long as it is.

Best of luck with Part 2!

February 08, 2016
Usa Male
UPDATE: The 2nd part of this story is still being worked on, however, for those of you who don't wish to wait for the entire thing to be posted here, this story is also uploaded and updated on my DeviantArt account: HydeCorner, and on my Fanfiction account: Dante Frost.
Once I'm finished with the 2nd part, I will upload the entire thing here. Until then, feel free to follow along either my DeviantArt account, or on my Fanfiction account.

Also, for future stories, I am currently working with Dragon Tamer (Author of the Toby series and Balto's Treasure Island) or Omnitrix 12 on Fanfiction.net for a collab story. Be on the look out for that in the near future.

Peace!

- Dante Frost

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