audition, since there were openings for the chorus, she still couldn't bring herself to sing (she knew since she had actually tried to sing a few notes, and noticed that her under practiced voice was completely off key). She felt embarrassed, and was glad that Levefre understood her situation. She soon asked him if there was anything else that was available, and he soon brought up the idea of being a costume dog, a job that would require her to make all of the costumes for actors. She agreed, and with a shake of her paw, she was made the costume dog of the Canine.

   She knew this job was for her, for many reasons. For instance, the costume room was in the very back of the Grand Theater's stage, so it was far away from the music that she had left behind. Another great thing about this was that she was mostly by herself, so she was rarely bothered by anyone. Even when her newly acquired friends Dixie and Slyvie would stop by to chat, she would mostly be either very busy, or would want to be by herself. The two chorus dogs didn't really understand their husky friend, but they respected her privacy nonetheless.

   After about a week after becoming the Canine's newest costume dog, everyone in the Opera House was talking about their newest member. A few of the staff members would say she was nice, whilst some of the dogs up in the rafters, including Joseph Buquet, would try to catch a glimpse of her slick but furry form. The male actors thought she was quite beautiful, whilst Madame Aurelia thought she was a rather odd sort of character. Overall, Jennifer Daae seemed out of the ordinary, but someone that seemed normal enough to fit right in with the rest of the staff.

   The female ballet dancers and chorus members, however, didn't exactly feel the same way. They didn't like that fact that she was so pretty (funnily enough, Jenna was in fact much more beautiful than most of them) and they wondered as to why she didn't audition. It was soon found out that she was related to the famous violist Gustave Daae, and they soon became confused as to why Jenna hadn't thought of being in the chorus or becoming a singer or actress.

   "Maybe she thinks she's better than us?" One female opera singer said to her friends at a dinner party, "I bet she thinks she's too skilled to be a part of the chorus!"

   This somewhat made sense to them. They believed that Jenna had numerous amounts of training, both from her Father and from the Paris Conservatorium.

   "I've heard she doesn't want to be anywhere near the stage!" Another singer had said to her friends, "What kind of dog doesn't want to be in an Opera House, but still joins one anyway?"

   These rumors made the rust-colored husky a regular thing to talk about in the regular line of gossip at the Canine. The employees would usually whisper to themselves, sometimes the ballet girls would giggle or laugh behind her back, or Buquet at his bunch would try and flirt with her. This was all somewhat embarrassing to say the least. It was like being to new kid at school, and she didn't like the way people talked about her. So, she slowly began to isolate herself, as she refused to spend time with anyone. She didn't go to the various different events in the Canine, she sat at the very back of the theater during a staff meeting. She ate lunch alone, and didn't really speak to anyone, besides the actors coming for their costumes. She spent all her time alone, and she soon began to accept it.

   After only a month since she joined the Opera House, Jenna wasn't exactly as enthusiastic as she originally was when she asked to become a costume dog. True, the work wasn't hard, and the pay was reasonable, but she couldn't stand being talked about behind her back. Sometimes she would stop her sewing machine and just cry softly with her head on her desk, almost feeling like she didn't belong in the Canine.

   I don't deserve to be here, she thought sadly, trying to hide her tears, I don't belong amongst these dogs and their beautiful voices and tremendous wealth and acting skills. I don't want to be here anymore…

   Her hopes were almost gone, until one day. She was busy working on a nobleman's suit for the upcoming performance of Don Giovanni. The costume room was a bit stuffy, so she had taken off her bandanna. She was working rather diligently, wiping the sweat from her brow.

   Jenna… The husky's ears perked up as she thought they had picked up someone's voice in distance. She stopped her sewing, but when she didn't hear anything but silence, she returned to her work.

   Jenna… The voice returned, this time it was a bit clearer. Jenna got up from her seat and walked over to the door. Upon opening it, she looked around the place, but she noticed that she was alone. She wasn't sure who was calling her, but she decided to ignore it and went back to her sewing.

   It wasn't until a few minutes later she heard the voice again.

   Jenna…Jennifer Daae… The husky was now getting irritated. She then called out, "Hello, who's there?"

   Jenna…Listen to me…I have come for you… Jenna wasn't sure where this voice was coming from, and from the looks of things, she didn't like the idea of being picked on. Was someone pulling a prank on her?

   "Who's there? If this is a prank, I'm not falling for it."

   "Do not be alarmed…I have watched you from afar…and I have come for you…you see…I am you Angel of Music…"

   Jenna was completely taken aback by this statement. Sure, she thought the voice was probably some dog playing a trick on her, but now, that idea was thrown straight out the window. The voice had said it was the Angel of Music. The Angel of Music? The one that her Father spoke of in his stories? It was said that the Angel of Music would come to those that were in dire need of help, when all of their hopes and dreams were dashed away, the Angel would descend from Heaven and come to their aid, blessing them with the gift that only an Angel could give.

   And he was here in the Opera Canine, and Jenna had heard him. However, she was still skeptical, "Are you really the Angel of Music?" Jenna asked, "Prove to me that you're my Angel." After she asked this question, she suddenly heard what sounded like music from an orchestra start to play. It sounded near to her, almost like it was disembodied and omnipresent. As the music built itself up, the voice began to sing what sounded like the last notes from Puccini's spellbinding opera Turandot

   "Dilegua, o notte! Tramontate, stelle! Tramontate, stelle! All'alba vincerro…vincerrro…vincerro!" The voice suddenly boomed with a fiery passion, almost like an Angel's voice had suddenly penetrated the very earth itself. Jenna was frozen in her spot, as the heavenly voice surrounded her with a sensation unlike anything she had ever felt before. The voice had proven it to her, and he was right. He really was the Angel of Music.

   Jenna's eyes lit up, as she nearly cried as the voice sang to her, "I don't believe it," She began, putting her paw on her mouth in disbelief, "I thought my Father was wrong, but he was right. He sent you to me!"

   "Yes, he has, and I have come to give you a gift…a gift unlike anything you've ever seen before. I have watched you for many days, and I understand that you are very sad, and unhappy. Those fools in this place don't understand you, but I do, I truly do, and I am here to help you. I will give you your voice back, and you will become just like…no, you will be better than any opera singer imaginable!"

   Jenna's ears drooped, "No, I don't think so," She replied sadly, "My voice sounds terrible."

   "Do not fret, my dear. Why do you think I'm here? I will show you the way to greatness, I assure you. I promise you this, with my spirit, and your voice, in one combined, I will give you the gift of music!"

   "Do you mean, like, lessons?" She asked.

   "Yes, I will give you lessons. It is my duty to serve you, my dear. I will be your private instructor, a teacher of sorts."

   "OK, um, I think we should meet here. I have some free time for about an hour at 2:00 PM. Is that an ok time for you to teach me?"

   "Yes, I like that. I will meet you here, every day, for an hour of singing lessons. Do not forget, and never be late." Jenna thought she felt something move past her, like some kind of presence fade away, and she knew that the voice had vanished.

   Jenna received her promised music lessons each and every day after that, at the exact time of 2:00. Despite Jenna's lack of training, the "Angel" was patient, and didn't mind if Jenna wasn't up to par with his level. He had somehow managed to remember where Jenna's Father had left off in his lessons, and immediately picked it up from there. Soon, Jenna became better and better, each day she would practice and practice, humming underneath her breath whilst she worked, or sometime she would go up to the roof and sing, where no one would be able to hear her (she was still somewhat shy).

   Jenna felt happy, more so than she did in a long time. When her Father had passed,



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June 30, 2016
Usa Male
Thanks, it's no problem at all. I'm still working on the rest of the story, just been a while since i've been on here.

Ah yes, the Inspector is a character that I've created solely for this story, and perhaps I might continue to use him in some other stories (if not with animals than with humans, as creating detective characters is always fun.)

Also, his progression from naive detective to Inspector of Police is based off of Gaston Leroux's short story, The Case of the Yellow Room, just a little fun reference.

June 24, 2016
Usa Male
Pages 14-16
Quite gripping. You did the boxkeeper's description of her encounter very well.

June 23, 2016
Usa Male
Back after a long hiatus.

Page 13 (end of Chapter 3): Uh-huh; that's the Steele I remember, alright.

The detective character, Jean-Claude, intrigues - particularly as I've recently begun work on a couple of police-related stories.

My apologies for taking so long to get back to this.

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
Hopefully you'll enjoy them! :)

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
That all makes sense. btw, I've pasted the next several pages to a document for offline reading.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
I totally know what you mean. Jenna and Steele just seem like a very unlikely couple. It's like Nala and Scar in the Lion King. You just don't do it!
But I can assure you, there will be some good Jenna and Balto scenes in this as well. ;)

Yeah, I've noticed that you're into mostly anthro Balto fanfics, and I just wanted to clear up that yes, they, and everyone else in the story, is a feral animal, not an anthro one (I said that even though they're anthropomorphic, I was mostly referring to the definition, not necessarily stating that they were anthro characters.)

I don't know, I just felt it was sort of appropriate. Somebody actually commented on that as some point, and was wondering as to why I did that. I mostly wanted to keep them in their original forms since everyone is mostly familiar with it, and it's also reminiscent with movies such as All Dogs Go To Heaven, where some scenes have characters doing what they do in my story (wearing clothing, holding objects, etc.) Yes, I know, dogs don't wear clothes, but I think it's a fun little addition, just for the sake of this fan fic.

Also, that's kind of the whole point of this part. Jenna and Steele haven't met in like 13 years or so (well, just for this story anyway) so it would make sense for her not to recognize him.

- Dante

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Just chiming in here, since you and JC kind of lead into it; the first project on our collab list will not be anthro - just in case anyone was concerned about that.

Also, on to Page 12. Not bad, especially for a Jenna/Steele scene (which I usually detest, so getting a "not bad" out of me for one is pretty big). The description of them moving on all fours kind of threw me because when you describe them in clothes and so on my mind naturally drifts to a more "anthro" version of them. Also, I was kind of surprised at how long it took Jenna to connect the dots. Other than that, it's good.

February 21, 2016
Usa Male
I'm glad that you've enjoyed it. To tell you the truth, I'm also a purist for the original forms of the characters. And even though I stated that in the introduction, they are anthropomorphic, I was referring to that they have the same characteristics of the Balto film, they just have more human like qualities to them, such as wearing clothes and such. Of course anyone can interpret it in their own way, I hint in some of the chapters that they are still in their original feral forms.

Also, don't feel bad if you're not analyzing every aspect of the story. I'll take anything that I can get when it comes to comments or critiques. As long as someone enjoys it, it's good enough for me! :)

Yeah, it's a long one, since I wrote it in chapters, but I decided to just put the whole thing here. Might as well, but I didn't think it'd be as long as I originally thought.

Oh, I don't consider myself to be that advanced. I've just had years of experience, what with English always being my favorite subject in school. Always has. I may not write like the greats, but I know exactly what to put down, in order to give the reader something cool and interesting to read. And I'm glad you've enjoyed thus far! :)

February 20, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Okay, so, I have been pouring gradually through this, and I must admit, I am enjoying it! You have a keen writing style, which is pretty advanced (considering the relative writing skills of the average fan writer). A few thoughts:

1. I will continue to read the whole thing but, given that I have completed at least a few chapters, I feel that I have gotten the entire gist of this, enough to comment on it...

2. As I mentioned to DT with his recent submission, I am a purist when it comes to the characters. While I love seeing them in good and effective crossovers, I really am not a fan of anthro concepts. Now, that being said, you HAVE crafted an entertaining and engaging story line here, and it would be untrue to suggest that I am not enjoying it!

3. I guess the only anthro setting I ever have enjoyed (and continue to) is that created by Disney for the Robin Hood movie. For me, that worked. And I guess I have seen it that was because I viewed it years ago as a kid. It's another great crossover. And I SUSPECT that the "Zootopia" film will be likewise for me...I even have already made up my mind that it could work as a modern-day future of the Disney Robin Hood setting. Now that I can get behind! Not taking anything away from what you've crafted here of course.

4. While I am not a fan of the Phantom of the Opera epic (though I know the basics of the story, and went to read a full outline of it to get myself prepped for this read), I know it is a great work of literature, and I totally see why you chose it. Especially given the fact that you are a fan of that story.

5. I'm not much of a "Monday-morning quarterback", and I personally don't like to minutely analyze chapter and verse in comments. So you won't see that much from me (and I hope I'm not letting you down in that regard). The size of this work makes it very intimidating to try and flip back through and locate something to analyze in comments. I hope you don't mind!

All that aside, you really have crafted a very good story here so far, and I am impressed! It is a LOOOONG one (lol), perhaps the longest I've seen on Animation Source (as far as I can recall anyway), but I understand why it is as long as it is.

Best of luck with Part 2!

February 08, 2016
Usa Male
UPDATE: The 2nd part of this story is still being worked on, however, for those of you who don't wish to wait for the entire thing to be posted here, this story is also uploaded and updated on my DeviantArt account: HydeCorner, and on my Fanfiction account: Dante Frost.
Once I'm finished with the 2nd part, I will upload the entire thing here. Until then, feel free to follow along either my DeviantArt account, or on my Fanfiction account.

Also, for future stories, I am currently working with Dragon Tamer (Author of the Toby series and Balto's Treasure Island) or Omnitrix 12 on Fanfiction.net for a collab story. Be on the look out for that in the near future.

Peace!

- Dante Frost

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