distinguished" tone, one that rings of angelic proportions. Therefore, we would like to speak to you about your eminent "replacement" in this performance of Faust.

   Sincerely,

   Kaltag Moncharmin

   Kaltag was completely baffled by what the poodle had read, and for the most part, he hadn't been drinking, so there was no way he could have written anything to the singer.

   "May I see the note, Madame?" He asked, to which the poodle gladly handed it over. He looked over the note, and noticed that the paw-writing was scarily similar to his; even the signature was exactly the same as the way he would write it. Who wrote this? He thought, I didn't write this. Is this some kind of a joke?

   "Madame, I didn't write this letter, nor did I send this."

   "Well, if you didn't write it," The poodle replied, clearly annoyed by this ordeal, "Then who did? Who dares address my great voice as not being'à la hauteur'?"

   "We don't know, but-" The door to the office opened again, as Inspector Jean-Claude entered, also carrying a note.

   "Monsieur Managers," He said, "What is the meaning of this?" It was clear with his tone that he wasn't all too pleased by the letter he received.

   Not again…Kaltag thought groaning, "What's wrong, Monsieur?"

   "I received a threatening letter from some anonymous source, which came from the Opera Canine." He then opened the letter and read the contents:

   Monsieur Inspector of Police,

   So, is it to be war between us? You have been meddling in affairs that are not to be meddled with. You are not welcome here at the Opera Canine, and you must never return, on behalf of the Managers, the staff, and the Canine itself.

   O.G.

   "O.G.?" Madame Aurelia said, "The Opera Ghost sent you that letter, Monsieur."

   "Well, I thought as much," He replied, "What with the similar initials, but why would he send me a note?"

   "Maybe because you are investigating, Monsieur," Madame Aurelia said cautiously, "I told you that the ghost wouldn't like it."

   "Oh, come on, Aurelia," Kaltag added, "It's perfectly harmless, and besides, he hasn't really done much. Also, why are you here?

   "I have another note, Monsieur, from the Opera Ghost." The three groaned in unison, but Kaltag took it anyway, and read it aloud:

   To the Managers,

   Whilst I have sent you several notes already, this one will be the most crucial for tomorrow's performance. The following are a brief list of instructions that you must follow:

   1. La Carlotta will not be present at the performance, nor will she play the role of Marguerite. The role belongs to Mademoiselle Daae, whose voice shines far greater than any singer, especially La Carlotta's. Therefore, she will play the lead role for tomorrow's performance.

   2. Just a brief reminder, I demand my monthly salary of exactly 20,000 francs. Please disclose the payment in check form, and give it to Madame Aurelia, who will deliver it to me.

   3. Box Five will not be sold. It is an important performance, and I will be sat in that Box, as I always am. Don't think about spying again, Monsieur Star and Nikki, I don't like being watched.

   4. Madame Aurelia, I would most appreciate it if you could send me a box of chocolates for the performance. Think of it as a special occasion treat. I will gladly pay you in full along with my program.

   5. These are the instructions that must be followed in order to make this night, and Mademoiselle Daae's night, a success. Failure to follow these orders will resort in disaster.

   You're friend,

   O.G.

   La Carlotta almost fainted when she heard that she really was being replaced, and let's just say, she wasn't all to happy about that, "I can't believe it!" She cried, "I will not be replaced! That role belongs to me!"

   "Mademoiselle, calm yourself," Kaltag said assuredly, "I'm not sure why this ghost wants you out of the performance. Do not worry; we will make sure it doesn't happen."

   "Sorry, Monsieur, but I disagree." Monsieur Jean-Claude interjected. Everyone looked his way, as he placed a paw on his chin. He too was confused as to why this ghost would want Jenna to be in the lead role instead of Carlotta, as this didn't seem to prompt any sort of threat to the Canine.

   La Carlotta gasped, "What? What do you mean, Monsieur?"

   "It seems to me that this ghost had rather odd rules from what I've been told. He has a private Box; he demands such strange orders, almost like he runs this Opera House. However, I don't exactly like the sound of disaster happening, so, I believe it is fit to do as he says."

   "What?" Carlotta and the managers exclaimed together. Jean-Claude was taken sort of aback by this.

   "Now, now, there's no need to shout in unison," He said, lifting a paw, "Let me explain. From what I know, this ghost is still a mystery to me, and it's unknown what kind of disaster he is referring to. If this phantom has the ability to harm others, and cause accidents, I know for a fact that if something like this does happen, it might cost important property damage, and more importantly, canine lives." He sighed, "I know you might not agree, I'm saying this as the voice of reason here, Messieurs, and I just want to see what happens when the ghost's orders are obeyed."

   "You mean you will only obey him today, but not any other day?" Madame Aurelia inquired.

   "Madame, you seem nervous," Jean-Claude raised a brow, "is everything alright?"

   "Monsieur," The collie replied, "I don't like the idea of anyone challenging the ghost. I know I told you I saw him, and spoke to him, but you're right; neither of us knows what he could be capable of, real or not."

   "I understand your worry, Mademoiselle, and your disappointment, Madame Carlotta, but this is probably for the best. I won't let anyone get hurt tonight, no matter what."

   "But, what about me Monsieur?" Carlotta asked, "Don't I have any say in this?"

   "Madame, I suggest you try to understand the situation we are in. I'm afraid we don't have a choice."

   "But, you're the Inspector of Police! You should be able to fix this problem!"

   "Mademoiselle," The Shepard said in a sudden stern tone, "My job is to protect and serve the animals of Paris, not solve everyone's minor problems. Either follow these orders, or risk your well-being at the Canine."

   La Carlotta was angry, and it almost looked like she was about to burst, but she took a deep breath, "Fine, if that's how it is, that's how it is. I don't need this! Come Jacques, we're leaving." She walked over to the door, and turned back, "I don't think you understand that this is about my well-being, and my reputation. You'll see tomorrow, messieurs, who's truly belongs on that stage." She then slammed the door behind her.

   Jean-Claude placed his hat on his head, "Now then, Messieurs, I hope that you do what is right, for yourselves, and for the Canine. Before I leave, may I see the letters you've received from the ghost thus far?" Kaltag quickly opened a drawer in his desk, and pulled out the first 2 letters from the ghost, and handed them over along with the notes they gave that same day." Thank you, and good day to you Messieurs, and you too Mademoiselle." Everyone nodded their heads, and the Inspector left them as well.

   "I completely agree with Monsieur Inspector, Messieurs, and I hope you do the right thing." The collie then followed suit and left the managers by themselves.

   The three then walked over to the desk, as they had some thinking to do. Whilst it was true that Monsieur Jean-Claude was right, it seemed to go against everything that the manager's had agreed on; that the ghost was fake, and his orders were false. Yet with their current situation, they seemed somewhat conflicted. Despite their previous determination to refuse the ghost's presence and requests, it seemed to the managers that this ghost was indeed a threat, even if they still didn't believe in him. Yet, the idea of the ghost being a masked criminal did give them chills, so they knew for a fact that they had to make a decision fast.

   "What do you think, Kal?" Star asked, sitting in one of the chairs, "Should we follow them?"

   "And what? Risk looking like idiots?" Kaltag replied, "Ha, I don't think so."

   "Um, Kal, maybe Jean-Claude's right," Nikki added, "Maybe we really don't know too much about the ghost to really see if what he says is true."

   "Yeah and what if he does something bad?" Star said with a nervous look.

   "Guys, I thought we agreed that the ghost's orders and



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June 30, 2016
Usa Male
Thanks, it's no problem at all. I'm still working on the rest of the story, just been a while since i've been on here.

Ah yes, the Inspector is a character that I've created solely for this story, and perhaps I might continue to use him in some other stories (if not with animals than with humans, as creating detective characters is always fun.)

Also, his progression from naive detective to Inspector of Police is based off of Gaston Leroux's short story, The Case of the Yellow Room, just a little fun reference.

June 24, 2016
Usa Male
Pages 14-16
Quite gripping. You did the boxkeeper's description of her encounter very well.

June 23, 2016
Usa Male
Back after a long hiatus.

Page 13 (end of Chapter 3): Uh-huh; that's the Steele I remember, alright.

The detective character, Jean-Claude, intrigues - particularly as I've recently begun work on a couple of police-related stories.

My apologies for taking so long to get back to this.

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
Hopefully you'll enjoy them! :)

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
That all makes sense. btw, I've pasted the next several pages to a document for offline reading.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
I totally know what you mean. Jenna and Steele just seem like a very unlikely couple. It's like Nala and Scar in the Lion King. You just don't do it!
But I can assure you, there will be some good Jenna and Balto scenes in this as well. ;)

Yeah, I've noticed that you're into mostly anthro Balto fanfics, and I just wanted to clear up that yes, they, and everyone else in the story, is a feral animal, not an anthro one (I said that even though they're anthropomorphic, I was mostly referring to the definition, not necessarily stating that they were anthro characters.)

I don't know, I just felt it was sort of appropriate. Somebody actually commented on that as some point, and was wondering as to why I did that. I mostly wanted to keep them in their original forms since everyone is mostly familiar with it, and it's also reminiscent with movies such as All Dogs Go To Heaven, where some scenes have characters doing what they do in my story (wearing clothing, holding objects, etc.) Yes, I know, dogs don't wear clothes, but I think it's a fun little addition, just for the sake of this fan fic.

Also, that's kind of the whole point of this part. Jenna and Steele haven't met in like 13 years or so (well, just for this story anyway) so it would make sense for her not to recognize him.

- Dante

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Just chiming in here, since you and JC kind of lead into it; the first project on our collab list will not be anthro - just in case anyone was concerned about that.

Also, on to Page 12. Not bad, especially for a Jenna/Steele scene (which I usually detest, so getting a "not bad" out of me for one is pretty big). The description of them moving on all fours kind of threw me because when you describe them in clothes and so on my mind naturally drifts to a more "anthro" version of them. Also, I was kind of surprised at how long it took Jenna to connect the dots. Other than that, it's good.

February 21, 2016
Usa Male
I'm glad that you've enjoyed it. To tell you the truth, I'm also a purist for the original forms of the characters. And even though I stated that in the introduction, they are anthropomorphic, I was referring to that they have the same characteristics of the Balto film, they just have more human like qualities to them, such as wearing clothes and such. Of course anyone can interpret it in their own way, I hint in some of the chapters that they are still in their original feral forms.

Also, don't feel bad if you're not analyzing every aspect of the story. I'll take anything that I can get when it comes to comments or critiques. As long as someone enjoys it, it's good enough for me! :)

Yeah, it's a long one, since I wrote it in chapters, but I decided to just put the whole thing here. Might as well, but I didn't think it'd be as long as I originally thought.

Oh, I don't consider myself to be that advanced. I've just had years of experience, what with English always being my favorite subject in school. Always has. I may not write like the greats, but I know exactly what to put down, in order to give the reader something cool and interesting to read. And I'm glad you've enjoyed thus far! :)

February 20, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Okay, so, I have been pouring gradually through this, and I must admit, I am enjoying it! You have a keen writing style, which is pretty advanced (considering the relative writing skills of the average fan writer). A few thoughts:

1. I will continue to read the whole thing but, given that I have completed at least a few chapters, I feel that I have gotten the entire gist of this, enough to comment on it...

2. As I mentioned to DT with his recent submission, I am a purist when it comes to the characters. While I love seeing them in good and effective crossovers, I really am not a fan of anthro concepts. Now, that being said, you HAVE crafted an entertaining and engaging story line here, and it would be untrue to suggest that I am not enjoying it!

3. I guess the only anthro setting I ever have enjoyed (and continue to) is that created by Disney for the Robin Hood movie. For me, that worked. And I guess I have seen it that was because I viewed it years ago as a kid. It's another great crossover. And I SUSPECT that the "Zootopia" film will be likewise for me...I even have already made up my mind that it could work as a modern-day future of the Disney Robin Hood setting. Now that I can get behind! Not taking anything away from what you've crafted here of course.

4. While I am not a fan of the Phantom of the Opera epic (though I know the basics of the story, and went to read a full outline of it to get myself prepped for this read), I know it is a great work of literature, and I totally see why you chose it. Especially given the fact that you are a fan of that story.

5. I'm not much of a "Monday-morning quarterback", and I personally don't like to minutely analyze chapter and verse in comments. So you won't see that much from me (and I hope I'm not letting you down in that regard). The size of this work makes it very intimidating to try and flip back through and locate something to analyze in comments. I hope you don't mind!

All that aside, you really have crafted a very good story here so far, and I am impressed! It is a LOOOONG one (lol), perhaps the longest I've seen on Animation Source (as far as I can recall anyway), but I understand why it is as long as it is.

Best of luck with Part 2!

February 08, 2016
Usa Male
UPDATE: The 2nd part of this story is still being worked on, however, for those of you who don't wish to wait for the entire thing to be posted here, this story is also uploaded and updated on my DeviantArt account: HydeCorner, and on my Fanfiction account: Dante Frost.
Once I'm finished with the 2nd part, I will upload the entire thing here. Until then, feel free to follow along either my DeviantArt account, or on my Fanfiction account.

Also, for future stories, I am currently working with Dragon Tamer (Author of the Toby series and Balto's Treasure Island) or Omnitrix 12 on Fanfiction.net for a collab story. Be on the look out for that in the near future.

Peace!

- Dante Frost

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