that always kept his head held high with pride. Philippe had quarreled with his mother, telling her that spoiling him would not teach him anything, but his pleas went unanswered.

   However, once Stephen turned 16, and their parents having already passed away, his brother still saw the hidden potential inside of him, and decided to be rid of his childish attitude. He soon shipped him off to the military, in order to turn him into something far greater than some kind of pure-blood dog. For the next 5 years, Steele showed great promise in the armed forces, as he was quite skilled with the rifle, and his strength seemed to out match those of the other soldiers.

   During his time at one of the many army forts, one of the gunpowder barrels inside accidentally exploded, and caused the building to catch fire. Even though most of the soldiers managed to escape, some of them were still trapped inside. Stephen volunteered to go back inside, and as luck would have it, managed to come right back out with all of the remaining soldiers, despite the ferocity of the flames. It was almost like the flames didn't encumber him, but only made him stronger, much like pure, unrelenting steel. Thus, he was given the nickname "Steele" by his comrades, and soon, everyone in Paris caught on to the name, and it stuck.

   Once Steele returned to the Chagny estate at the age of 24, he came back a popular celebrity, and yet, despite his brother's efforts to change his brother, his act of heroism seemed to grow the Vicomte's sense of pride. He was still just as selfish and stuck-up as he was before, and if it wasn't for his brother to straighten him out, he would probably be left to go on a gloating rampage.

   The brother's then turned their attention to the stage, as did everyone else, as the Gala began, with various composers performing classic compositions, such as Beethoven's 5th, Mozart's Symphony No.40 in G Minor, Bach's Toccata, and many others. As the Gala progressed, everyone eagerly anticipated the arrival of La Carlotta to blow them away as she always did.

   Unbeknownst to them, however, the pink and white poodle had unfortunately contracted a severe case of bronchitis, and was unable to get to the Canine on time. This wasn't exactly good news for Monsieur Belmont, the acting-manager for the Canine.

   "What do you mean she can't perform?" The rather short-tempered Beagle barked at the dachshund messenger that was sent from La Carlotta.

   "I'm sorry Monsieur, but I'm afraid she's ill," He replied, taking off his hat. "There's nothing I can do."

   The Beagle rubbed his forehead, "Great, we've lost our star! Now what? There's no understudy for La Carlotta! Oh, what are we to do?"

   Jennifer Daae…she will perform tonight…

   A voice whispered in the acting-manager's ear, almost like someone was speaking to him. He looked around him, but found that no one was near him. He shook his head, thinking he was hearing things.

   Daae? He thought, realizing that was the last thing on his mind when it came for an understudy. Why on earth would anyone suggest that? He slowly peaked out the curtain, and noticed some of the dogs were getting restless, and realized that he didn't have much of a choice.

   La Carlotta will not like this, he thought gravely.

   "Somebody, anybody, fetch Mademoiselle Daae please," He ordered some of the dog's around him, "Quickly!" Eventually, one of the dogs had heard his order, and rushed off to find her. The acting-manager fixed his coat a bit, and walked behind the curtain and onto the stage.

   "Ladies and gentledogs," He said, "It is my sad duty to report, that the great La Carlotta, is ill, and will be unable to perform this evening."

   The audience was rather disappointed to hear that, and started moaning and complaining.

   "However, we have managed to find a last minute replacement, an understudy for La Carlotta; Mademoiselle Jennifer Daae. Please enjoy."

   A few of the dogs in the front started whispering to one another. "Who is Jennifer Daae?" One of them asked with a rather confused look on his face.

   "I don't think she's part of the chorus." One of the dogs answered, "Believe me, I've checked the brochure. I've never even heard of that name before."

   "Excuse me, Mademoiselle," A dog said, who was sitting nearby, "But did you say Daae?"

   "I believe so. I've heard that name before, but the only thing that comes to mind is the Alaskan violinist of the same name." He replied.

   "That's it!" The first dog exclaimed, "I remember now. Jennifer Daae was his only daughter. I wouldn't be surprised that she decided to join the Canine. Why didn't she appear in the chorus? I thought she was supposed to be a good singer?" He also noticed that the huskies name was not on the list of performers on the program.

   "I heard she hasn't really been up to par. Mademoiselle Babette says she sings like a crock!"

   "I heard she keeps to herself, and doesn't really talk to many dogs,"

   "I heard she---" Everyone started to hush themselves, as the overture for Gonoud's Romero ett Juliette started up. As soon as it was finished, the curtain parted, as the figure of what looked like an Alaskan husky came onstage.

   The dog slowly walked up to the front, a tad nervous as the spotlight shone down on her form. She could feel her legs shaking, almost like her apprehensiveness wanted to swallow her whole. Yet, she soon found courage inside of her, and as the conductor waved his arm, the aria began.

   She rang out the high A that began the aria almost effortlessly, which made the entire theater fall silent. Some of the dogs seated in the audience dropped their jaws in shock, as this seemingly unknown backstage dog had suddenly sprung out something that had been hidden for quite some time.

   "…Je veux vivre…dans le reve qui m'enivre ce jour encor!...Douce flame, jet e garde dans mon ame cooooommmmee un tresor!" The husky swayed back and forth to the beat of the music, as the notes flowed freely out of her throat. Some of the audience gasped, as the notes were so beautiful, almost like they were listening to an angel from heaven sing to them.

   "Brother, mind if I borrow your opera glasses?" The younger malamute asked his brother. Philippe gladly handed it over to him, and as the malamute saw the husky on stage up close, he gasped. The image of a similar, much younger husky popped into his mind, almost like the dog singing was familiar to him. He shook his head, trying not to think of it, and focused mostly on her gorgeous features.

   "Stephen, are you alright?" The black husky asked.

   "She's…perfect," He replied, a surprising tone of adoration coming from his voice, which wasn't exactly natural for the older brother to hear from his brother. He knew that Steele was always getting winks and glances from various females when they attended parties, but this was the first time that Philippe had heard his brother say it in such a…romantic way.

   Once the aria was finished, the entire theater was filled with cheers and applause. Some whistled, some threw roses (that were meant for La Carlotta), and even some of the employees backstage that were watching were cheering for her.

   Up in the Chagny's balcony, Philippe was clapping for the husky on stage, and looked at his brother curiously; his brother was completely silent, as the malamute couldn't keep his eyes off the husky on the stage.

   Jenna…is that…really you? He thought, the same strange memory coming into his brain, one that had been locked away for quite some time. He wasn't sure what it was, but dismissed it, thinking it wasn't all too important.

   As for the husky onstage, everyone was cheering for her, however, something must have come over her, as she suddenly felt dizzy, and collapsed on the stage. Immediately, a few of the employees came over to her aid, and carried her off the stage.

   With the performance now over, Philippe placed the brochure in his coat pocket, and turned to his brother, ready to take him to the Grand Foyer where the retirement party for the manager was taking place, but found that he was gone from his seat. He groaned, as he realized that his brother was up to his old tricks again.

   As always, he thought, rolling his eyes, going after some girl, yet again. When will he ever learn? Philippe shook his head, and walked out of the box.

 

 

   After the performance, a few of the employees went to check on Jenna in her workplace, but they were met by a purple, feisty Pomeranian show dog instead, who was outside the backstage costume door.

   "Please, will you all keep it down, she's trying to rest!" She yapped at the dogs, "Come back later." Everyone walked away from the husky's costume room, and the show dog sighed. She closed the door, and turned back to the husky, who was sitting on one of the couches in the room, with a wet cloth over her forehead. Dixie was one of Jenna's few friends at the Canine, and she, along



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June 30, 2016
Usa Male
Thanks, it's no problem at all. I'm still working on the rest of the story, just been a while since i've been on here.

Ah yes, the Inspector is a character that I've created solely for this story, and perhaps I might continue to use him in some other stories (if not with animals than with humans, as creating detective characters is always fun.)

Also, his progression from naive detective to Inspector of Police is based off of Gaston Leroux's short story, The Case of the Yellow Room, just a little fun reference.

June 24, 2016
Usa Male
Pages 14-16
Quite gripping. You did the boxkeeper's description of her encounter very well.

June 23, 2016
Usa Male
Back after a long hiatus.

Page 13 (end of Chapter 3): Uh-huh; that's the Steele I remember, alright.

The detective character, Jean-Claude, intrigues - particularly as I've recently begun work on a couple of police-related stories.

My apologies for taking so long to get back to this.

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
Hopefully you'll enjoy them! :)

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
That all makes sense. btw, I've pasted the next several pages to a document for offline reading.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
I totally know what you mean. Jenna and Steele just seem like a very unlikely couple. It's like Nala and Scar in the Lion King. You just don't do it!
But I can assure you, there will be some good Jenna and Balto scenes in this as well. ;)

Yeah, I've noticed that you're into mostly anthro Balto fanfics, and I just wanted to clear up that yes, they, and everyone else in the story, is a feral animal, not an anthro one (I said that even though they're anthropomorphic, I was mostly referring to the definition, not necessarily stating that they were anthro characters.)

I don't know, I just felt it was sort of appropriate. Somebody actually commented on that as some point, and was wondering as to why I did that. I mostly wanted to keep them in their original forms since everyone is mostly familiar with it, and it's also reminiscent with movies such as All Dogs Go To Heaven, where some scenes have characters doing what they do in my story (wearing clothing, holding objects, etc.) Yes, I know, dogs don't wear clothes, but I think it's a fun little addition, just for the sake of this fan fic.

Also, that's kind of the whole point of this part. Jenna and Steele haven't met in like 13 years or so (well, just for this story anyway) so it would make sense for her not to recognize him.

- Dante

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Just chiming in here, since you and JC kind of lead into it; the first project on our collab list will not be anthro - just in case anyone was concerned about that.

Also, on to Page 12. Not bad, especially for a Jenna/Steele scene (which I usually detest, so getting a "not bad" out of me for one is pretty big). The description of them moving on all fours kind of threw me because when you describe them in clothes and so on my mind naturally drifts to a more "anthro" version of them. Also, I was kind of surprised at how long it took Jenna to connect the dots. Other than that, it's good.

February 21, 2016
Usa Male
I'm glad that you've enjoyed it. To tell you the truth, I'm also a purist for the original forms of the characters. And even though I stated that in the introduction, they are anthropomorphic, I was referring to that they have the same characteristics of the Balto film, they just have more human like qualities to them, such as wearing clothes and such. Of course anyone can interpret it in their own way, I hint in some of the chapters that they are still in their original feral forms.

Also, don't feel bad if you're not analyzing every aspect of the story. I'll take anything that I can get when it comes to comments or critiques. As long as someone enjoys it, it's good enough for me! :)

Yeah, it's a long one, since I wrote it in chapters, but I decided to just put the whole thing here. Might as well, but I didn't think it'd be as long as I originally thought.

Oh, I don't consider myself to be that advanced. I've just had years of experience, what with English always being my favorite subject in school. Always has. I may not write like the greats, but I know exactly what to put down, in order to give the reader something cool and interesting to read. And I'm glad you've enjoyed thus far! :)

February 20, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Okay, so, I have been pouring gradually through this, and I must admit, I am enjoying it! You have a keen writing style, which is pretty advanced (considering the relative writing skills of the average fan writer). A few thoughts:

1. I will continue to read the whole thing but, given that I have completed at least a few chapters, I feel that I have gotten the entire gist of this, enough to comment on it...

2. As I mentioned to DT with his recent submission, I am a purist when it comes to the characters. While I love seeing them in good and effective crossovers, I really am not a fan of anthro concepts. Now, that being said, you HAVE crafted an entertaining and engaging story line here, and it would be untrue to suggest that I am not enjoying it!

3. I guess the only anthro setting I ever have enjoyed (and continue to) is that created by Disney for the Robin Hood movie. For me, that worked. And I guess I have seen it that was because I viewed it years ago as a kid. It's another great crossover. And I SUSPECT that the "Zootopia" film will be likewise for me...I even have already made up my mind that it could work as a modern-day future of the Disney Robin Hood setting. Now that I can get behind! Not taking anything away from what you've crafted here of course.

4. While I am not a fan of the Phantom of the Opera epic (though I know the basics of the story, and went to read a full outline of it to get myself prepped for this read), I know it is a great work of literature, and I totally see why you chose it. Especially given the fact that you are a fan of that story.

5. I'm not much of a "Monday-morning quarterback", and I personally don't like to minutely analyze chapter and verse in comments. So you won't see that much from me (and I hope I'm not letting you down in that regard). The size of this work makes it very intimidating to try and flip back through and locate something to analyze in comments. I hope you don't mind!

All that aside, you really have crafted a very good story here so far, and I am impressed! It is a LOOOONG one (lol), perhaps the longest I've seen on Animation Source (as far as I can recall anyway), but I understand why it is as long as it is.

Best of luck with Part 2!

February 08, 2016
Usa Male
UPDATE: The 2nd part of this story is still being worked on, however, for those of you who don't wish to wait for the entire thing to be posted here, this story is also uploaded and updated on my DeviantArt account: HydeCorner, and on my Fanfiction account: Dante Frost.
Once I'm finished with the 2nd part, I will upload the entire thing here. Until then, feel free to follow along either my DeviantArt account, or on my Fanfiction account.

Also, for future stories, I am currently working with Dragon Tamer (Author of the Toby series and Balto's Treasure Island) or Omnitrix 12 on Fanfiction.net for a collab story. Be on the look out for that in the near future.

Peace!

- Dante Frost

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