would haunt an Opera House, out of all places. However, Jean-Claude put a paw to his chin instead.

   "Inspector?"

   Jean-Claude came back to his senses, "Oh, sorry about that Babet. I was just…thinking…" The Shepard placed his top hat on his head, and made his way to the door.

   "See you later, Monsieur." Babet nodded, Jean-Claude following suit, before heading out of his office. As he walked out of the building and waited for a carriage, the words "Opera Ghost" seemed to stick to his mind.

   A ghost in an Opera House, he thought, placing a paw to his chin again, how interesting…

 

 

   The loud barks of an extremely furious poodle resonated among the walls of the Manager's office, in which the trio of bosses seemed to be shaken by La Carlotta's sudden appearance. They hadn't expected her to arrive a day early, as she was said to be back by that Thursday, but her current disposition seemed to tell them otherwise.'

   La Carlotta had just recovered from her bronchitis, and having heard the news of the dog that had replaced her during the Gala, she nearly spit out her morning tea. Just the idea of her, the great La Carlotta, the leading soprano for the past 5 seasons, having an understudy was preposterous, unbelievable, but it was indeed true: The great La Carlotta had been replaced at the Gala without her permission, something that she wasn't all too happy about.

   "Please, Madame, if you could keep your voice down," Kaltag said, checking if his ear drums were still in tact by rubbing his ears. "There are people at work outside."

   "Keep my voice down?" Carlotta barked, "How can I when you have replaced me with some…some…costume dog! I can never be replaced! What kind of managers are you? Monsieur Levefre would never let this happen!" She then slumped on the chair behind her, whilst her dachshund servant Jacques fanned her off.

   "Madame, this is not entirely our fault." Kaltag responded, "We didn't know that you were going to be replaced at the Gala."

   "But you didn't fix it, did you? I know what goes on the stage, Monsieur Manager, how that husky plays my role during rehearsals! I thought I instructed Monsieur Belmont to not have anyone, and I meant anyone, to take my place if I am away. But, he did not listen, did he? I will be speaking with him about this. Do not think for a second messieurs that I am going to forget this little stunt! We will discuss matter this later, messieurs"

   The poodle then got up from her chair, and strutted rather abrasively towards the door, "Jacquie, la porte, s'il vous plait," she ordered her servant.

   "Oui, mademoiselle," The dachshund replied, opening the door for the poodle. With a resounding "humpfh" sound, and with an abrupt turn of her head, the diva left the office, with her little servant tailing behind her.

   "Yeesh, with all that yelling, it's strange how her voice is still in tact!" Star said, taking another sip of his champagne, "So, when is the Inspector arriving?"

   "He will be here shortly, Star. In the meantime, could you please fetch the waiter from the Café de'l Opera?"

   "No problem, Kal," The purple husky saluted, and right as he got up to the door, it was suddenly opened by the Box-Keeper, and the door smacked the poor husky right on the head.

   "Oh, I am sorry, Monsieur Andre!" Madame Aurelia cried, realizing what she had done, "Are you alright?" Star nodded in response, as he started to see stars.

   "It's ok, he'll be fine," Nikki interjected, "He's taken worse beatings from Kal."

   "It's true, Madame." Star responded, as he was getting dizzy, "It's all in good…fun…" The husky then fell on his back with a thump, unconscious.

   "I'll get him," Nikki walked over to the purple husky as he dragged him over to an adjacent chair.

   "Well, while he does that," Kaltag said, getting up from his spot, "Is there something you need?"

   "Yes, Monsieur, I have a letter for you three." The collie then took out a letter with a very familiar red wax seal on it. As soon as she placed it on the manager's desk, the Chinook groaned, as the letter was the same one from before.

   "Let me guess, it's from O.G.?" Kaltag inquired, taking the letter in his paws. "Is this really necessary? We've been following his orders as of late."

   "Yes, Monsieur, I suggest you read it." Aurelia replied insistently.

   Kaltag rolled his eyes, knowing full well that this was nothing more than a prank. Of course, he had expected another letter, but this was starting to get a bit ridiculous. Despite his disbelief in the ghost, he broke the seal of the letter, and read it:

   Monsieur Managers,

   I am quite excited for the beginning of the newest season of the Opera Canine, and one of my favorite operas is the one that will start off this glorious season: Charles Gounod's Faust.

   I assume that Carlotta has returned to the Canine, and whilst she is welcome back, I don't exactly believe that she has any "real" talent. Only a fool would prance around the stage, thinking that she's acting, and whilst I think that her voice is quite impressive, she does not seem to capture the charm, beauty, and innocence that Mademoiselle Daae has brought to the stage during rehearsals. Oh, if only there was a way for her to play the part of Marguerite for this production…

   Oh, that's right, that's your job, Messieurs, and I am absolutely sure that you will give the role of Marguerite to Mademoiselle Jennifer Daae, who, in my opinion…no in fact, will do a much better job than any other singer before her that has played the role.

   As for Carlotta, she will probably play a smaller role, one that's more "ideal" for her taste. Like, oh I don't know, Siebel perhaps?

   Anyway, I expect you to follow up on this offer, and perhaps you could make it possible. It would surely be of service to this entire opera house, and to your "reputations".

   Sincerely,

   O.G.

   P.S.: Expect more letters from me next week. They will be of great importance to opening night.

   P.S.S: Also, could you tell Madame Aurelia to get me a foot-stool. The seats are a bit stiff in Box Five, and I must stretch my legs from time to time.

   The Manager slumped down in his chair, unsure what to think of the letter. From the looks of things, it was practically telling them, no, forcing them to comply with whatever this O.G. wanted. It didn't sound like an order, it was mostly a suggestion, but Kaltag didn't exactly trust what this O.G. was referring to.

   He acts like we're his servants or something! It is your duty to do so! This O.G. is really starting to- The Chinook's thoughts were suddenly cut off by a knock at the door.

   "I'll get it, Monsieur," Madame Aurelia walked over to the door, and opened it.

   She gasped once she saw the figure before her, "Oh, Monsieur Inspector," She bowed, "Mind if I take your hat?"

   "Much obliged, Madame," Jean-Claude smiled and nodded, handing over his top hat.

   "Monsieur Inspector, thank you for coming," Kaltag said, "Please, have a seat."

   "Thank you, but I'm perfectly fine at the moment." The Inspector sat down on his haunches instead, "So, you three called me…?" He looked over at Star, who was muttering in his sleep.

   "Is he alright?" The Inspector asked.

   Kaltag groaned, "Nikki could you?" He then made raised his paw and slammed down on his other paw.

   "No prob," The large husky smacked Star over the head, waking him up instantly.

   "I'm up, I'm up!" He cried, before noticing the Inspector's presence in the room, "Oh, sorry about that, Inspector."

   "Its fine, Monsieur Andre," He replied, "Now then, as I was saying, you three called me here because of the appearance of a thief in the Café de'l Opera."

   "Yes, and I was just about to send over Monsieur Star to fetch the waiter-"

   "There is no need to, Monsieur Moncharmin," Jean-Claude interrupted, "I have already spoken to him, and he has given me the details about this thief." He then pulled out a notebook from his coat, and flipped a few pages, and started reading, "Here is the list of items that have been reported as stolen: A small, cooked chicken, one bottle of wine, a case of various vegetables, and a pate."

   "Did the waiter tell you anything else?" Nikki asked.

   "He stated that he was standing nearby the storage room around the time of theft, which was during dinner at 9:25 PM. According to the waiter, he was sent back there to fetch a bottle of wine, and he noticed that something was rustling amongst the many boxes, crates, and cases, and upon further investigation, he saw what



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June 30, 2016
Usa Male
Thanks, it's no problem at all. I'm still working on the rest of the story, just been a while since i've been on here.

Ah yes, the Inspector is a character that I've created solely for this story, and perhaps I might continue to use him in some other stories (if not with animals than with humans, as creating detective characters is always fun.)

Also, his progression from naive detective to Inspector of Police is based off of Gaston Leroux's short story, The Case of the Yellow Room, just a little fun reference.

June 24, 2016
Usa Male
Pages 14-16
Quite gripping. You did the boxkeeper's description of her encounter very well.

June 23, 2016
Usa Male
Back after a long hiatus.

Page 13 (end of Chapter 3): Uh-huh; that's the Steele I remember, alright.

The detective character, Jean-Claude, intrigues - particularly as I've recently begun work on a couple of police-related stories.

My apologies for taking so long to get back to this.

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
Hopefully you'll enjoy them! :)

April 30, 2016
Usa Male
That all makes sense. btw, I've pasted the next several pages to a document for offline reading.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
I totally know what you mean. Jenna and Steele just seem like a very unlikely couple. It's like Nala and Scar in the Lion King. You just don't do it!
But I can assure you, there will be some good Jenna and Balto scenes in this as well. ;)

Yeah, I've noticed that you're into mostly anthro Balto fanfics, and I just wanted to clear up that yes, they, and everyone else in the story, is a feral animal, not an anthro one (I said that even though they're anthropomorphic, I was mostly referring to the definition, not necessarily stating that they were anthro characters.)

I don't know, I just felt it was sort of appropriate. Somebody actually commented on that as some point, and was wondering as to why I did that. I mostly wanted to keep them in their original forms since everyone is mostly familiar with it, and it's also reminiscent with movies such as All Dogs Go To Heaven, where some scenes have characters doing what they do in my story (wearing clothing, holding objects, etc.) Yes, I know, dogs don't wear clothes, but I think it's a fun little addition, just for the sake of this fan fic.

Also, that's kind of the whole point of this part. Jenna and Steele haven't met in like 13 years or so (well, just for this story anyway) so it would make sense for her not to recognize him.

- Dante

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Just chiming in here, since you and JC kind of lead into it; the first project on our collab list will not be anthro - just in case anyone was concerned about that.

Also, on to Page 12. Not bad, especially for a Jenna/Steele scene (which I usually detest, so getting a "not bad" out of me for one is pretty big). The description of them moving on all fours kind of threw me because when you describe them in clothes and so on my mind naturally drifts to a more "anthro" version of them. Also, I was kind of surprised at how long it took Jenna to connect the dots. Other than that, it's good.

February 21, 2016
Usa Male
I'm glad that you've enjoyed it. To tell you the truth, I'm also a purist for the original forms of the characters. And even though I stated that in the introduction, they are anthropomorphic, I was referring to that they have the same characteristics of the Balto film, they just have more human like qualities to them, such as wearing clothes and such. Of course anyone can interpret it in their own way, I hint in some of the chapters that they are still in their original feral forms.

Also, don't feel bad if you're not analyzing every aspect of the story. I'll take anything that I can get when it comes to comments or critiques. As long as someone enjoys it, it's good enough for me! :)

Yeah, it's a long one, since I wrote it in chapters, but I decided to just put the whole thing here. Might as well, but I didn't think it'd be as long as I originally thought.

Oh, I don't consider myself to be that advanced. I've just had years of experience, what with English always being my favorite subject in school. Always has. I may not write like the greats, but I know exactly what to put down, in order to give the reader something cool and interesting to read. And I'm glad you've enjoyed thus far! :)

February 20, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Okay, so, I have been pouring gradually through this, and I must admit, I am enjoying it! You have a keen writing style, which is pretty advanced (considering the relative writing skills of the average fan writer). A few thoughts:

1. I will continue to read the whole thing but, given that I have completed at least a few chapters, I feel that I have gotten the entire gist of this, enough to comment on it...

2. As I mentioned to DT with his recent submission, I am a purist when it comes to the characters. While I love seeing them in good and effective crossovers, I really am not a fan of anthro concepts. Now, that being said, you HAVE crafted an entertaining and engaging story line here, and it would be untrue to suggest that I am not enjoying it!

3. I guess the only anthro setting I ever have enjoyed (and continue to) is that created by Disney for the Robin Hood movie. For me, that worked. And I guess I have seen it that was because I viewed it years ago as a kid. It's another great crossover. And I SUSPECT that the "Zootopia" film will be likewise for me...I even have already made up my mind that it could work as a modern-day future of the Disney Robin Hood setting. Now that I can get behind! Not taking anything away from what you've crafted here of course.

4. While I am not a fan of the Phantom of the Opera epic (though I know the basics of the story, and went to read a full outline of it to get myself prepped for this read), I know it is a great work of literature, and I totally see why you chose it. Especially given the fact that you are a fan of that story.

5. I'm not much of a "Monday-morning quarterback", and I personally don't like to minutely analyze chapter and verse in comments. So you won't see that much from me (and I hope I'm not letting you down in that regard). The size of this work makes it very intimidating to try and flip back through and locate something to analyze in comments. I hope you don't mind!

All that aside, you really have crafted a very good story here so far, and I am impressed! It is a LOOOONG one (lol), perhaps the longest I've seen on Animation Source (as far as I can recall anyway), but I understand why it is as long as it is.

Best of luck with Part 2!

February 08, 2016
Usa Male
UPDATE: The 2nd part of this story is still being worked on, however, for those of you who don't wish to wait for the entire thing to be posted here, this story is also uploaded and updated on my DeviantArt account: HydeCorner, and on my Fanfiction account: Dante Frost.
Once I'm finished with the 2nd part, I will upload the entire thing here. Until then, feel free to follow along either my DeviantArt account, or on my Fanfiction account.

Also, for future stories, I am currently working with Dragon Tamer (Author of the Toby series and Balto's Treasure Island) or Omnitrix 12 on Fanfiction.net for a collab story. Be on the look out for that in the near future.

Peace!

- Dante Frost

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