Checked out chapter one. It justifies the PG rating, and it could stand a little polishing, but it's good all around. Although Mel and Dipsy never struck me as a couple in the movie, I like that you indicate they chose to marry over something besides "that." Also, I didn't know you could set up a fanfic from another site as if it were on this one, so maybe I'll do that myself in the future. Thanks for the education.

Chapter 2 was pretty sweet. If I had to find a flaw I would say it was, again, a bit unpolished, but you're a lot better than I was in the early years of my own writing (back before I found this website). In a society where parenthood is so often put in a negative light, it's nice to see someone buck the trend.

Chapter 3: I really like the way you have them supporting and looking out for one another; Mel sticking close to Dipsy, Dipsy encouraging Mel through his paranoia. Although it would have distracted some from the main plot in the movie, I think it would have been nice to see them do some of that anyway.