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| March 24, 2013 | ||
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Thank you, Juuchan. And of course, I would try to make my fanfics
better. I appreciate these kinds of comments, really gives me a means
in which I could improve. ![]() |
| March 24, 2013 | ||
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| WQ > Balto > WoC |
Not a bad first attempt! I like the "Chicken Soup for the Soul"
concept a lot, however I wish that the stories were more in tune with
the characters' personalities and not just a flat-out retelling of the
plots in the first person with a little bit of the character shining
through. I believe that it might make the overall reaction more
effective and in-canon with the source material of the films [or at
least what we're given from the films anyway]. Keep on writing! I'd like to see more from you soon! - Juuchan17 |