slowly on its own.  The spirit turned back to him.  "Rise and walk with me."

Steele rose from his bed, but hesitated.  "Through the window?" he asked.  In response, the spirit took a few steps towards him.  "Are you afraid?"

At this, Steele walked over to the window and looked out into the night.  A cold breeze blew gently across the open sill.  He turned back towards the spirit and shrugged.  "Well I'm not a ghost like you.  If I climb out of the window, I'll fall!"

The spirit walked over to Steele, nodding askance.  "Bear but a touch of my fur, and you will walk as I do."

Slowly, hesitantly, Steele joined the spirit at the window, and quickly nudged her fur with his nose.  A spectral breeze overtook them, tossing their fur.  Gradually, the walls of the hallway, and the window before them, faded, and Steele found himself standing beside the spirit in an entirely different environment.  It was daytime (a bright but somewhat overcast day), and they were outside a large outdoor kennel enclosure--currently unoccupied.  The ground around them was blanketed with snow, and the fence coated in a sheen of ice.  Here and there along the fence line, icicles hung and sparkled in the diffuse light.  He marveled at the surroundings.

The spirit, noticing his expression, inquired "You recall this, no doubt?"

Steele, letting out a brief, subtle laugh under his breath, replied "recall it?  I was raised here, as a puppy.  Trained to be a sled dog.  But that was so long ago!  How can we possibly be here?"

"These are the shadows of things that have been", the spirit replied. 

Steele approached the fence of the kennel yard, and walked along observing the interior.  "How lonely it looks...how empty", he observed sadly.

"Not entirely empty, Steele", the spirit retorted.  "A solitary pup, yourself, left behind by the master and his other dogs is left there still."

Steele hung his head, recalling the lonliness of the scene.  "I know."

From inside the kennel yard came the sounds of paws crunching in the snow.  An adult husky, a black and white female, strode in and looked across the yard towards a black and white puppy, huddled alone in a corner...he appeared to be less than a year old.  With a forlorn expression he stared out across the tundra in silence.  The female husky walked towards him, while Steele attempted to conceal himself behind a large bush at the fence line.  The spirit joined him at his side.

"We are shadows as well, Steele.  They do not know we are here.  They cannot see or hear us."  With that reassurance, Steele stood tall to watch the goings on.

The female husky sat down next to the saddened puppy, and stroked his head with her paw.  "I have good news, son.  The master is returning, and I have learned that he has changed his mind about your situation.  He is eager to start training you now, and you'll finally have a shot at joining the team!"

The puppy didn't even turn to look up at her, but just kept staring out across the open tundra beyond.  "I can't believe that, mother.  The master called me useless.  Don't you remember?  I 'don't have what it takes to be on the team'.  That's what the master thinks of me.  Maybe he's right.  Maybe I haven't got it."

"Nonsense!" the female husky reassured him.  "He's setting up a place for you on the line right now.  Come and see!"

The young husky looked up at his mother with surprise, and he cocked a slight smile.  "Really, mother?  You're not just saying that to make me feel better?"

The female husky rose and started to walk towards the house, to which the kennel yard was connected.  "Come see for yourself, Steele!"  At that, the young husky rose up happily to join her as they strode towards the house.  The spirit turned towards older Steele and said "Your mother was a delicate creature, whom a breath might have withered.  But she had a large heart."

"She certainly did", Steele recalled fondly.

"She died shortly thereafter", said the spirit, "and tragically I think."

"Yes", he replied grimly.

Suddenly, the scene seemed to dissipate around Steele and the spirit, and they suddenly found themselves in what appeared to be a large barn.  Before them several huskies were laughing and celebrating...a string of long sausages being divided up between them.  The spirit looked at Steele, whose face was full of joy at the scene unfolding before them.  "You know this place?"

Steele turned towards the spirit, his face aglow.  "Sure!  This was during the final days of my apprenticeship on the team.  This is a celebration of my graduation to a full team member!"  He turned back and observed the scene with great happiness.  A large and handsome male husky strode confidently into the center of the group of huskies.  Steele's eyes widened.  "Look, there's ol' Franklin, the lead dog of our team!"

The big dog held his head high and, addressing the group, said "Boys, today we welcome fully, into our team, a young lad who's been training with us for some time.  A brave and strong young lad who has proven himself time and again, earning the master's trust and moving steadily up the ranks of team to the position of swing dog!"  He gestured towards a somewhat younger and smaller black and white husky, who stood proudly, with a wide, toothy grin on his face.

"Look--there I am!  How young I was in those days!" Steele remarked with astonishment.  The spirit nodded silently as the big husky continued.

"We now graduate him to full team member, and give him the appreciation that is well earned for a year's worth of hard work!"  The dogs vociferously assented in full agreement with their leader, and the group of them broke into raucous laughter and conversation, mingling together randomly.

Steele shook his head in fond reminiscence.  "Ah, there never was a kinder, fairer leader on any team!"  He laughed as he recalled those happier times. 

"A small matter, really," the spirit interjected.

Steele's ears rose at once, and he turned, wide-eyed.  "Small?" he remonstrated bluntly.

The spirit smiled at him, calmly asking "Why?  Is it not?  He did a bit of begging to convince his master to provide that juicy train of sausages for the team.  Nothing more.  Is that so much that he deserves your praise?"

"It's not that at all", Steele insisted, sounding much like his former, younger self.  "He had the power, through his good humor and his concern for us, to make all our burdens fun.  Every mission was an enjoyable experience no matter how hard the journey.  The happiness he gave us all it was as if every effort was worth ten times as much in sausage or any other reward."

But suddenly Steele's smile fell into a slight frown, and his expression became crestfallen.  He dropped his head and turned away from the scene playing out before him.

The spirit, acknowledging his sudden sullenness, asked "What's the matter?"  Steele merely shook his head.  "Nothing...".

"Something, I think", the spirit gently insisted.

Steele looked up and glanced off into space.  "It's just that I had a thought about my own team...shivering out there in the cold tonight."  The spirit nodded approvingly, acknowledging some tiny spark of goodness in Steele's thoughts.  In response, Steele closed his eyes and shook his head again. 

"You took to the sledding with some enthusiasm, Steele, did you not?" the spirit inquired, as the scene changed around them.  Now they were in a large room with a wood furnace at one end, connected by pipes to a large steam boiler.  Around them against (and built into) the walls were various wooden shelves, with several dogs lounging lazily upon them.  Before them once again was Steele's younger self, only about a year old, chatting merrily with his fellow team members.  A large brown dog, slightly older than the young Steele, approached the group of dogs, who backed away sheepishly...all except for young Steele.

"Charger", the older Steele observed under his breath. 

Charger slowly circled the young dog, observing him with mild interest and apparently sizing him up.  "You've made quite the impression upon the master, boy", Charger observed rather dryly.  "That's not so terribly easy to do, you know."  The younger Steele, his head slightly bowed in deference to the older dog, looked up, hesitantly at first, into Charger's eyes.  "I think I've done my part", he replied. 

Charger laughed coldly at the young dog's boldness.  "And a bit of a bite too.  I like that..."  The young Steele's ears perked up, and he raised his head proudly.  Charger, catching this out of the corner of his eye, sneered at him and shot back "...don't let it go to your head, boy.  Not yet anyway."  Charger came to a stop and stood face-to-face with young Steele, staring menacingly down at him.  Then he cracked a wry and somewhat sinister smile at the young dog. 



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March 02, 2016
Usa Male
Cool. And yes, I dare say we do.

February 29, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
If you look now on the forum topic, the post about possible casting ideas is there:

http://www.animationsource.org/board/post1509920.html#p1509920

February 29, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Well thank you again, DT. I should be releasing my thoughts as to a what-if casting in that forum topic tonight sometime. But yes, I would imagine that, on its own (without being reworked AS a Christmas story), it probably wouldn't work as a televised movie (or otherwise). But then, that was never my intent originally, so I'm really not worried about that. It's just fun to imagine it. A lot of us do that with our characters and our fan fictions, don't we?

February 25, 2016
Usa Male
Well, I finally got to the last page. I've got to say that I don't know as this would have worked movie-wise, but as a fanfic... you've done it again, JC.

February 25, 2016
Usa Male
Private Messaging it is, then.

February 24, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Dragon Tamer, you must admit that, when weighing the names of two fictional figures, there is absolutely no doubt whatsoever that "Santa Claus" is going to be about a gajillion times more recognizable than "Wishbone". Say "Santa Claus", and the nostalgia spans generations--and more than one hundred years (just in the United States). Say "Wishbone", and (at least in the U.S.) somebody is likely to think you're talking about a brand of salad dressing. lol

You're an evangelical Christian. Not that I am knocking that, but I would imagine that if there are any Christians on the planet who do not generally ascribe to or condone a child's very harmless (and brief) belief in the secular Santa Claus myth, which takes nothing whatsoever away from Christian celebrations of the holiday, it would be evangelicals and fundamentalists. But that is, I will admit, a presumption based upon my own experience in encounters with evangelicals and fundamentalists. But I REALLY don't want that to become another tangent that gets discussed on this page.

February 24, 2016
Usa Male
You're welcome; I've found major typos in posts of mine in the past, so I can relate.

Your idea for the forum topic sounds promising. I've sometimes wondered who I'd pick to voice OCs myself.

One other note on the Wishbone thing (this is the last thing I plan to say about it here; I promise); I guess considering where you're at now it would be pretty hard to develop an appreciation for the books and show if you hadn't grown up with them, as you said. I know nothing of "Dog with a Blog," but I can relate to having a harder time latching onto younger-age entertainment when nostalgia isn't involved. All the same, I would point out that you yourself once thought it strange - if not downright unfortunate - that I went through my entire childhood never believing in Santa Claus beyond his historical roots.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Ah yes...thank you for spotting that spelling error. That must have been at a point when I was writing late at night, and not keeping track. Even with my editing scan of the document later on, I missed it. Huh. But it has been corrected.

My interpretation of the Ghost of the Present was based mostly on the 1951 movie version. Even moreso than the literary one. I like the way the actor who played him brought a certain feel to the role. Kevin Michael Richardson would indeed be a good choice. I envisioned Dennis Haysbert, whom you may recognize as the pitchman who always appears in the Allstate Insurance commercials. He's not only got a resonating voice, but is a good actor who also, like Kevin, has VO experience in cartoons (among others, he played Kilowog in the Justice League series). Here is a snippet (sorry, you'll have to copy and paste) of him appearing on Conan O'Brien's show:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XHFQe7mTxqA

Interestingly, you've given me an idea...putting together a post, in the existing Balto forum post I have for the fan fiction, of a voice cast I would have loved to see for this. Got some pretty good ideas.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Kind of forgot where I was in the story, but looking gave me a chance to re-view the Ghost of Christmas Present. I like the character; charming, yet forceful towards the end. I could very easily seem him being voiced by Kevin Michael Richardson if this ever became a cartoon - which I would completely support based on what I've seen so far.

Chapter 4 is good, although I think you used the wrong spelling for "sight" in the first paragraph. In all other respects your choice of wording to describe the third ghost (like calling its body a "corpse") is impressive, as is the touch of describing how it sounded breathing.

I would have read past the end of page 12 if not for time constraints, but I'm impressed as before. The description of Star telling what had happened is a very well-written "what if," and the way you kept them going right up until that last obstacle really kept me guessing. Nice.

February 19, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
I just watched some clips too (it appears the literature is based off of the television series, rather than the usual literature as inspiration for television series thing). Didn't care for it. Seemed too silly for me. But that is because now, as an adult, I see no magic in it, and no attraction. Perhaps if I were a child in the 1990s (and by that, I mean an ACTUAL child, whom the series targets for an audience, and not a teenager), I might have felt different.

But this thing strike me as being about as interesting as the TV series "Dog With A Blog"...which really isn't very interesting or entertaining. Or deep.

But again, just my opinion. Let's just leave this particular tangent at that.

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