blankets, shivering mightily.  "I'm sorry!  I'm sorry!"

"Dog of the worldly mind!" Charger replied bitterly, "do you believe in me or not?!"

"I do I do," Steele groveled miserably.  "I must.  But why are you here, and why have you come to me?"

"It is required of every dog," the ghost responded, "that the spirit within him should walk abroad among his fellow dogs, and among men, and travel far and wide.  And if that spirit does not do so in life, it is doomed to do so after death.  Condemned to wander through the world--oh, woe is me!--and witness what it cannot share, but might have shared in life, and turned to happiness!"

Charger dropped down to the floor and buried his face in his spectral forelegs as the chain line rattled forward and hung over his shoulders.  He let out another terrifying cry, this of anguish and agony.

Steele observed Charger's misery with consternation, and then looked back behind the ghost at the bonds which shackled him.  He glanced again at Charger.  "How did you end up chained to that mess?  What brought this on you?"

Charger straightened up and again looked out past Steele, resuming his blank-eyed but still pained expression. "I drag the chain I forged in life", he replied forlornly.  "I made it link by link, and yard by yard; I strapped myself to it of my own free will, and of my own free will I wore it."

For a brief moment, Steele actually felt a tinge of pity for his old friend.  "I'm sorry".

Charger turned then and actually met Steele's apprehensive gaze, and, in warning, replied "ah, you don't realize the weight and length of strong chain you bear yourself!  It was full as this, and long as this, seven years ago.  And you have labored on it since."  Charger bowed his head, and shaking it, lamented sadly "oh, it is a ponderous chain!"

Steele absent-mindedly glanced down around behind him expecting, perhaps, to find himself harnessed to some great expanse of heavy iron links of chain.  But there was none such to be seen.  He shook his head and looked up at the ghost. 

"Charger, my old buddy," he implored the ghost, "give me some hope.  Give me hope, Charger!"

"I have none to give," the ghost replied. "Listen to me, Steele!  In life my spirit never walked beyond the limits of our kennel yard, or from our various runs across the countless trail miles in the wilderness.  And now I am doomed to wander without rest or peace," he said sadly.  "Incessant torment of remorse."

Quite to his own surprise, Steele began to sob.  Stumbling over his words in a desire to speak comfort to the ghost, he offered "but it was only that you were a good, strong leader on the trail, Charger.  After all, that was our business!"

Charger's gaze became hard, and struck Steele solidly and unexpectedly as he cried "Business?!?  Mankind was my business!  Our fellow dogs were my business!  The common welfare was my business!  Mercy, charity, patience, and benevolence were all my business!  Being a leader of our team was merely as the settling of a single snowflake on the vast glacier of my business!"

Steele had shrunk again within the folds of the blankets in his bedding, shivering at Charger's harsh words to him.  When he finally peeked out again, he found the ghost staring again blankly out beyond him.

"Hear me", the ghost implored, "my time is nearly gone.  I have come to warn you that you have yet a chance and hope of escaping my fate.  A chance and hope of my procuring, Steele."

Steele breathed a sigh of relief at his words.  "Thank you, Charger.  You were always a good friend of mine."

"You will be visited by three spirits", Charger replied blankly.  And at those words, Steele's expression dampened.

"Is that the chance and hope you mentioned, Charger?"

The ghost simply stared, offering "it is."

"I think I'll pass on that," Steele replied, shaking his head timidly.

"Without their visits," Charger replied, "you cannot hope to avoid the trail I now tread!"  The ghost paused for a moment, and then continued.  "Expect the first when the clock tolls one."

Charger straightened up again and began to tug on the great mass of chain and objects behind him, struggling towards the window at the end of the hall.  Without turning back to his old partner, he said "Don't expect to see me again, Steele."  As he reached the window, the lower pane suddenly shot upwards, and a cold breeze blew in, tossing the curtains.  "But look here," he beckoned, "so that, for your own sake, you may remember what has passed between us!" 

Steele rose sheepishly and, stumbling momentarily over his bedding, joined Charger at the window.  The ghost nodded down towards the kennel yard, at the dogs shivering in their little wooden houses, trying to get through the night on some degree of sleep.  All around them were phantoms of dogs trying desperately to comfort the living animals.  Most of them were bound in some manner similar to Charger.  Some of them attempted to lay close to them in hopes of sharing the warmth they could have offered in life.  Others dragged spectral blankets and tried to lay them over the shivering dogs.  All to no avail.  Steele became aware of a mournful lamentation...a deeply sorrowful and pitiful howling wail from the many spirits down below and, it seemed, all over all at once.  Charger, after listening at Steele's side for a moment, faded and vanished, and then reappeared below in the yard with the other spirits.  He looked up beckoningly towards the window.

This was all Steele could stand.  Jumping up and pulling the pane shut with his paws (whereupon the wailing of the spirits was shut out, and it became quiet in the hall again), he then turned and rushed to his bedding and buried himself in it, utterly awash in terror.  He remained curled up and shivering in that manner for some time before exhaustion finally came over him, and he fell into an uneasy sleep.
 


CHAPTER 2: THE FIRST SPIRIT


Steele awoke with a start.  It was dark.  Even the shaft of light pouring in from the moonlight earlier was now gone and, in spite of squinting, he could make out nothing more than the routine shapes of doors, molding, the odd piece of furniture, a painting or two hanging on the wall, and nothing else.  Just then, the grandfather clock on the first floor began to chime the top of the hour...all four quarters.  So he listened for the toll of the hour itself.

One, two, three...the chime struck in rhythmic, regular intervals onward, which came as a surprise to Steele, who thought back upon the admonisment by Charger's ghost to "...expect the first when the clock tolls one".  Nevertheless, he listened as the chimes continued, and counted right up to eleven.  And, at last, came, the last chime.

"Twelve!"  Steele mused to himself.  It was past midnight, he pondered, when he finally fell asleep earlier.  "That clock has to be wrong.  Some ice must have gotten into the works.  I can't have slept through a whole day and into another night!" 

He sat there pondering on that for some time, and then laid his head back down and started to nod off.  He was unaware of the passage of time at this point, being rather groggy.  Before he could take stock, however, there came yet another chime of the bells--just a single chime in fact.  In that same instant a brilliant white light filled the hallway.  Steele raised his head in stark surprise and abject fear, and then just as suddenly dropped down, throwing his paws over his head in hopes of somehow going unnoticed.

And yet, a strange euphoria started to overtake him.  Slowly, cautiously, he peeked out from under his paws, and looked out at the hallway.  The brilliant light had faded, and standing before him was the most beautiful white wolf he had ever seen.  It's fur was silky, snowy white, and its eyes golden yellow, bordered all around in black.  It stood tall and proudly and, befitting a wolf, was quite large.  To Steele, it seemed as though this was a female wolf, and he determined in his own mind, without any conscious thought to the fact, that this is how he would perceive it.  He also felt a nagging sense that there was something vaguely familiar about her, though he could not fathom the how or why of it.

"Are you the spirit I was told would be coming?" Steele stammered.

The spirit looked straight at him with a confident but kindly expression.  "I am."

"Who and what are you?" Steele asked in reply, hardly knowing how to address an apparition.

"I am the spirit of the past."

Confused, Steele continued to question the spirit.  "The past?  As in long-ago past?"

"No...", she replied, "...your past."

Steele felt his tension easing, and he grew just a little bold.  "And what do you want with me?"

"I have come concerning your welfare."

With a wry smirk, Steele scoffed at the sentiment.  "My welfare, huh?"

"Your reclamation then."  The spirit then strode slowly past him, stopping at the window at the near end of the hall.  As she did, the window began to open slowly on its



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March 02, 2016
Usa Male
Cool. And yes, I dare say we do.

February 29, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
If you look now on the forum topic, the post about possible casting ideas is there:

http://www.animationsource.org/board/post1509920.html#p1509920

February 29, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Well thank you again, DT. I should be releasing my thoughts as to a what-if casting in that forum topic tonight sometime. But yes, I would imagine that, on its own (without being reworked AS a Christmas story), it probably wouldn't work as a televised movie (or otherwise). But then, that was never my intent originally, so I'm really not worried about that. It's just fun to imagine it. A lot of us do that with our characters and our fan fictions, don't we?

February 25, 2016
Usa Male
Well, I finally got to the last page. I've got to say that I don't know as this would have worked movie-wise, but as a fanfic... you've done it again, JC.

February 25, 2016
Usa Male
Private Messaging it is, then.

February 24, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Dragon Tamer, you must admit that, when weighing the names of two fictional figures, there is absolutely no doubt whatsoever that "Santa Claus" is going to be about a gajillion times more recognizable than "Wishbone". Say "Santa Claus", and the nostalgia spans generations--and more than one hundred years (just in the United States). Say "Wishbone", and (at least in the U.S.) somebody is likely to think you're talking about a brand of salad dressing. lol

You're an evangelical Christian. Not that I am knocking that, but I would imagine that if there are any Christians on the planet who do not generally ascribe to or condone a child's very harmless (and brief) belief in the secular Santa Claus myth, which takes nothing whatsoever away from Christian celebrations of the holiday, it would be evangelicals and fundamentalists. But that is, I will admit, a presumption based upon my own experience in encounters with evangelicals and fundamentalists. But I REALLY don't want that to become another tangent that gets discussed on this page.

February 24, 2016
Usa Male
You're welcome; I've found major typos in posts of mine in the past, so I can relate.

Your idea for the forum topic sounds promising. I've sometimes wondered who I'd pick to voice OCs myself.

One other note on the Wishbone thing (this is the last thing I plan to say about it here; I promise); I guess considering where you're at now it would be pretty hard to develop an appreciation for the books and show if you hadn't grown up with them, as you said. I know nothing of "Dog with a Blog," but I can relate to having a harder time latching onto younger-age entertainment when nostalgia isn't involved. All the same, I would point out that you yourself once thought it strange - if not downright unfortunate - that I went through my entire childhood never believing in Santa Claus beyond his historical roots.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Ah yes...thank you for spotting that spelling error. That must have been at a point when I was writing late at night, and not keeping track. Even with my editing scan of the document later on, I missed it. Huh. But it has been corrected.

My interpretation of the Ghost of the Present was based mostly on the 1951 movie version. Even moreso than the literary one. I like the way the actor who played him brought a certain feel to the role. Kevin Michael Richardson would indeed be a good choice. I envisioned Dennis Haysbert, whom you may recognize as the pitchman who always appears in the Allstate Insurance commercials. He's not only got a resonating voice, but is a good actor who also, like Kevin, has VO experience in cartoons (among others, he played Kilowog in the Justice League series). Here is a snippet (sorry, you'll have to copy and paste) of him appearing on Conan O'Brien's show:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XHFQe7mTxqA

Interestingly, you've given me an idea...putting together a post, in the existing Balto forum post I have for the fan fiction, of a voice cast I would have loved to see for this. Got some pretty good ideas.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Kind of forgot where I was in the story, but looking gave me a chance to re-view the Ghost of Christmas Present. I like the character; charming, yet forceful towards the end. I could very easily seem him being voiced by Kevin Michael Richardson if this ever became a cartoon - which I would completely support based on what I've seen so far.

Chapter 4 is good, although I think you used the wrong spelling for "sight" in the first paragraph. In all other respects your choice of wording to describe the third ghost (like calling its body a "corpse") is impressive, as is the touch of describing how it sounded breathing.

I would have read past the end of page 12 if not for time constraints, but I'm impressed as before. The description of Star telling what had happened is a very well-written "what if," and the way you kept them going right up until that last obstacle really kept me guessing. Nice.

February 19, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
I just watched some clips too (it appears the literature is based off of the television series, rather than the usual literature as inspiration for television series thing). Didn't care for it. Seemed too silly for me. But that is because now, as an adult, I see no magic in it, and no attraction. Perhaps if I were a child in the 1990s (and by that, I mean an ACTUAL child, whom the series targets for an audience, and not a teenager), I might have felt different.

But this thing strike me as being about as interesting as the TV series "Dog With A Blog"...which really isn't very interesting or entertaining. Or deep.

But again, just my opinion. Let's just leave this particular tangent at that.

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