pungent and rather obtrusive, and it annoyed Steele greatly.  "There's trouble in town", the man continued. "Dr. Welch has notified us of a diphtheria outbreak.  We've got six cases so far.  It started with a young boy."

Steele's master stroked his beard for a moment, and then shook his head sympathetically.  "Well Dr. Welch's staff may be small, but they ought to be able to handle this now that he's identified it, shouldn't they?"

The gentleman shook his head.  "Not likely.  It appears his supply of anti-toxin is nearly exhausted, and may well have expired beyond it's efficacy.  We are going to need to procure a supply, and quickly."

The master sat back and crossed his legs, laying his arms across the back of the couch.  The barking out in the yard had finally subsided, and he sighed.  "What are your intentions?"  Has the mayor consulted with Dr. Welch about this?"

At the master's question, the second gentleman responded.  "Yes he has.  There has already been one death, and a growing concern that this will escalate..."

Steele's ears pricked up at hearing this.  But with a quick roll of his eyes, he thought to himself "Tsk.  I don't see what the fuss is about anyway.  The population of this town has been steadily falling since the influenza epidemic of '18.  But Nome's still here.  If this town loses one or two more, it makes little difference".  He settled back into listening to the discussion.

The gentleman continued.  "We've sent messages out by telegraph, but it would appear our options for securing a resupply of antitoxin are severely limited by the prevailing weather.  The newspaper men want us to put our faith in the airplane, saying it would be the fastest and safest mode of transport for the medicine.  However, the territorial governor and several people of influence disagree with that assessment."

"As do I", the third man broke in.  Like the master this fellow was a musher.  "I will still hedge my bets with the dogs.  The mail teams have never failed us in the past.  You, Dan, are our best man for the job.  You have the fastest, most experienced team in the region, and that's why we came to you.  The mayor specifically asked us to do so."

Steele's master raised an eyebrow in surprise.  "Did he now?" 

"Yes", the second gentleman replied.  "A supply of the antitoxin has been found at the railroad hospital down in Anchorage, and they're shipping it up to Nenana by rail.  But it falls to us to send someone out there to pick it up and carry it back to Nome as quickly as can be managed."

The master paused for a moment to consider the implications of this revelation, and then stood up, crossed his hands behind his back, and strode slowly over to the mantle.  Laying one arm across it and, with the other, grabbing a poker to stoke the fire, he asked  "So...what's our play then?"

The first gentleman stood up and started to slowly pace about the perimeter of the room still puffing on his cigar and seemingly absorbed in thought, his head lowered in concentration.  Steele raised his head and observed the man closely as he went.  He passed around the furniture and then passed by the windows.  When he reached Steele's master he stopped, glanced up at him, and replied "We were hoping you might have some suggestions to that effect."

As Steele turned his attention to his master, the man scratched at his beard, seemingly lost in thought.  "Hmmmm."  There was a momentary pause.  Then he raised his right hand and, pointing and wagging his finger indistinctly in the air in front of him, said "You know, we could hold a small race through the town streets...invite the mushers in town to put in their best dogs.  From that, we could determine the fastest among them, and put together a special team for this run."

The men continued talking for some time.  Steele, growing weary of it, headed for the side door, which opened out onto the kennel yard.  He started whining and scratching at it, which brought the men's conversation to a momentarily halt.  The master, muttering through his beard, strode to the door and, with a frustrated glance down at Steele, opened it.  Steele returned his master's glance with one of feigned gratitude, and strode confidently out towards the kennel yard.  The door creaked on its hinges, closing with a dull thud.

Standing on the stoop outside of the door, Steele leaned back into a long stretch, and then leaned forward and stretched out his rear legs.  He observed that the sun was already down very low on the horizon, and twilight was setting in...even if it was several hours until "evening".  Descending the narrow steps, he sauntered into the kennel yard, and was approached by a large husky-Chow mix. 

"So, did youse hear the news, boss?  Word is that some sort of sickness has broke out in town, and they ain't figured out the solution there."

Steele just grunted indifferently in reply, and continued past him.  The chow mix continued, saying "I heard some of them little kids is sick too.  That is a shame, that is.  Those kids might die."

"If they're gonna get sick, Nikki," Steele replied with a curt sigh, and without looking back, "they might as well die and make room for those strong enough to fight it."

As Steele walked away, sternly inspecting the dogs curled up uncomfortably in front of their little houses, Nikki's brow furrowed in silent consternation.  Steele made rounds of the entire yard.  He was, however, momentarily startled as he heard a voice from behind him.  He turned to see his young nephew, a yearling dog of proud and pleasant bearing, approaching.  "Hello, uncle!  How are you?"

Steele rolled his eyes and did his best to ignore the young dog, only grunting in reply as he continued on towards his master's house.  But his young nephew persisted.  "What an exciting finish to the race today, huh?  The team did great!"

Steele turned towards him, casting him a hard glance, which caused the younger dog to stop in his tracks.  "Don't you mean my team?" 

The young dog stammered, wide-eyed, but continued.  "Sure, uncle.  Your team."  He paused for a moment, thinking to himself, and then offered "What a day!  Ol' Balto almost upset the apple cart though, didn't he?"  He laughed at the thought of it.

Steele turned again on him...fast this time and, with teeth baring, growled "DON'T mention that worthless half-breed in my presence again, boy, or you'll regret it."  Steele stood fast, towering over the young dog, who shrunk back submissively.

The young dog's face became serious.  "Don't be cross, uncle.  I meant no harm by it."

Steele shook his head in digust, and turned to resume walking towards the house.  "You know nothing.  You haven't even earned a place on the team yet.  You couldn't possibly understand, so don't bother.  Go back to your little hovel."

"You really shouldn't be so morose, uncle", the young dog lamented.  "I have no quarrel with you, and neither does he.  I don't consider him such a bad fellow anyway.  I came over here to welcome you home, and I want or need nothing from you but a simple acknowledgement.  Though I do wish we could be friends."

"Good night, Tommy," Steele replied, as dryly as he could, leaving the young dog standing in the snow utterly flummoxed.  By the time he returned to the house, the men had gone, and the master had let him back in for the day, as evening would soon be setting in.

Some hours later inside the house Steele, who was snoozing by the fire place, was awakened by the sounds of the master preparing to retire for the night.  Steele rose to follow him on his rounds just as the master had completed washing up some dishes from his dinner earlier that night.  As the master proceeded from room to room on the main level of the house, he turned knobs on a few lit gas lights, blew out a few candles, and attended to the remains of the fire in the fire place, which was all but embers and one faintly-burning log.  The master then proceeded up the stairs towards his bedroom.  Steele turned aside momentarily for one last lap or two from his water bowl, and then moved towards the staircase.  Then he heard it...a voice that was not the master's.  It didn't come from the upper level of the house either, but seemed to be all around him.

"Steele".  He froze.  The voice was at first indistinct, and sounded a bit hollow, as if it were but an echo.  But it repeated itself again.  "Steele".  Nervously, Steele shook his head and continued towards the stairs.  By the lower step was a carved wooden umbrella stand, in which were a few canes and odd items.  Around its exterior was carved a mountainous scene in a snowy wilderness, and a dog sled team in motion across it.  Steele's eyes were almost unconsciously drawn to the team, and specifically to the face of the leader.  But gazing upon it, he saw not the general face of a husky which normally was there, but that of his old co-leader, Charger. 

Charger's face...lit, it seemed, by some



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March 02, 2016
Usa Male
Cool. And yes, I dare say we do.

February 29, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
If you look now on the forum topic, the post about possible casting ideas is there:

http://www.animationsource.org/board/post1509920.html#p1509920

February 29, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Well thank you again, DT. I should be releasing my thoughts as to a what-if casting in that forum topic tonight sometime. But yes, I would imagine that, on its own (without being reworked AS a Christmas story), it probably wouldn't work as a televised movie (or otherwise). But then, that was never my intent originally, so I'm really not worried about that. It's just fun to imagine it. A lot of us do that with our characters and our fan fictions, don't we?

February 25, 2016
Usa Male
Well, I finally got to the last page. I've got to say that I don't know as this would have worked movie-wise, but as a fanfic... you've done it again, JC.

February 25, 2016
Usa Male
Private Messaging it is, then.

February 24, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Dragon Tamer, you must admit that, when weighing the names of two fictional figures, there is absolutely no doubt whatsoever that "Santa Claus" is going to be about a gajillion times more recognizable than "Wishbone". Say "Santa Claus", and the nostalgia spans generations--and more than one hundred years (just in the United States). Say "Wishbone", and (at least in the U.S.) somebody is likely to think you're talking about a brand of salad dressing. lol

You're an evangelical Christian. Not that I am knocking that, but I would imagine that if there are any Christians on the planet who do not generally ascribe to or condone a child's very harmless (and brief) belief in the secular Santa Claus myth, which takes nothing whatsoever away from Christian celebrations of the holiday, it would be evangelicals and fundamentalists. But that is, I will admit, a presumption based upon my own experience in encounters with evangelicals and fundamentalists. But I REALLY don't want that to become another tangent that gets discussed on this page.

February 24, 2016
Usa Male
You're welcome; I've found major typos in posts of mine in the past, so I can relate.

Your idea for the forum topic sounds promising. I've sometimes wondered who I'd pick to voice OCs myself.

One other note on the Wishbone thing (this is the last thing I plan to say about it here; I promise); I guess considering where you're at now it would be pretty hard to develop an appreciation for the books and show if you hadn't grown up with them, as you said. I know nothing of "Dog with a Blog," but I can relate to having a harder time latching onto younger-age entertainment when nostalgia isn't involved. All the same, I would point out that you yourself once thought it strange - if not downright unfortunate - that I went through my entire childhood never believing in Santa Claus beyond his historical roots.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
Ah yes...thank you for spotting that spelling error. That must have been at a point when I was writing late at night, and not keeping track. Even with my editing scan of the document later on, I missed it. Huh. But it has been corrected.

My interpretation of the Ghost of the Present was based mostly on the 1951 movie version. Even moreso than the literary one. I like the way the actor who played him brought a certain feel to the role. Kevin Michael Richardson would indeed be a good choice. I envisioned Dennis Haysbert, whom you may recognize as the pitchman who always appears in the Allstate Insurance commercials. He's not only got a resonating voice, but is a good actor who also, like Kevin, has VO experience in cartoons (among others, he played Kilowog in the Justice League series). Here is a snippet (sorry, you'll have to copy and paste) of him appearing on Conan O'Brien's show:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XHFQe7mTxqA

Interestingly, you've given me an idea...putting together a post, in the existing Balto forum post I have for the fan fiction, of a voice cast I would have loved to see for this. Got some pretty good ideas.

February 23, 2016
Usa Male
Kind of forgot where I was in the story, but looking gave me a chance to re-view the Ghost of Christmas Present. I like the character; charming, yet forceful towards the end. I could very easily seem him being voiced by Kevin Michael Richardson if this ever became a cartoon - which I would completely support based on what I've seen so far.

Chapter 4 is good, although I think you used the wrong spelling for "sight" in the first paragraph. In all other respects your choice of wording to describe the third ghost (like calling its body a "corpse") is impressive, as is the touch of describing how it sounded breathing.

I would have read past the end of page 12 if not for time constraints, but I'm impressed as before. The description of Star telling what had happened is a very well-written "what if," and the way you kept them going right up until that last obstacle really kept me guessing. Nice.

February 19, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
I just watched some clips too (it appears the literature is based off of the television series, rather than the usual literature as inspiration for television series thing). Didn't care for it. Seemed too silly for me. But that is because now, as an adult, I see no magic in it, and no attraction. Perhaps if I were a child in the 1990s (and by that, I mean an ACTUAL child, whom the series targets for an audience, and not a teenager), I might have felt different.

But this thing strike me as being about as interesting as the TV series "Dog With A Blog"...which really isn't very interesting or entertaining. Or deep.

But again, just my opinion. Let's just leave this particular tangent at that.

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