When are you going to be putting the next fic in the series on here? You got me interested!

Yeah, the story is pretty tragic for all the characters, which stinks, but there's gonna be follow up fics too! Makoza actually wrote her own fic where we learn a lot more about Hima's side of the story.

This is a very beautiful yet sad story I feel so bad for Aylen and Saomik. Seems like things might get more complicated with Hima though she seems sweet so far and something tells me things will only get a little more complicated as times move on.

Oh thank you so much Juuchan. That means a lot to me! Me and Makoza have been working on this little plot together for a little bit, so there's a lot more to come your way! She's actually going to be writing her own version of this fanfic from her character Hima's POV. And on the whole homosexuality stuff, I suppose so. XD Warning them is the best I could do. XD

Kema: Oh, it's fine though. I like the fluff~! It's better than some other straight quick romance fics I've read on here. Please write some more - it's good to see different topics mentioned on here than just the typical "Balto character saves the day and gets a mate" story. This one is nice yet tragic once reality sets in. There's a hidden emotion in the ending, one that makes you feel sorry for what the lovers must do... I agree that I'd fave it if it were possible to!

And I know that there's a notable few that are against homo-characters altogether [canon or not], but I see it that if you warn them and someone offended by it still read/view things... and are offended, it's their own darn fault. Hopefully they don't get on you - just ignore them!

- Juuchan17

Yeah, this was more of a set up for a different fic I plan on writing, but thanks so much! of course I was gonna go the fluffy route with this, but I made it pg-13 because I don't know how well homosexual relationships are going to be handled on here XD but yeah, thank you again! I'll try to make the next one more elaborate.

Risky subject matter, but it's a good attempt that sorta works... in a cute, fluffy... and PG- rated sort of way. I wish that there was more build-up to the relationship, but the ending... wow, I did not see that coming. If you continue this, I've love to see how that changes things afterwards.

- Juuchan17

This is really good, I honestly can wait to see more of it! If I could fave I would! I also really love how you made Hima's character, it is perfect!