you...*sniff* too!" Aleu broke out in an uncontrollable sob, pressing her face into his soft chest, the fur being soaked by her tears. "shhh, don't worry, we'll get through this together. I promise." balto comforted her more, trying to soothe his crying daughter as much as his instincts and abilities knew how. He cooed to her, rocked her back and forth, rubbed her back, petted her head, even sang. "reach for the light, you might touch the sky."

To her, this was new. He had sung her lullabies before but this one was something she hadn't heard of until now. It was, relaxing. Calming, and most of all inspiring. The teenage wolf husky took steady deep breaths and snuggled into her papa's warm soft fur chest. Just like she used to when she was a pup. "I guess I still have a lot of growing up to do huh?" aleu smirked. She could feel her father smiling too. "Like I said, you'll always be my baby. No matter how old you are." Balto whispered in her ear, licking her cheek.

Aleu blushed at the kiss, but she didn't care if the fox was watching. What she wanted now was to share this moment longer with him. He made her feel safe, warm and loved. How could she have felt alone when she had him all along? "Thank you for being there, thank you for being my papa."



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BlackJack16
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August 29, 2012
This was so beautifully written, mate. It really shows how much Balto cares for his daughter no matter who or what she is or what her destiny is. Aleu will always be loved by her family and close friends regardless of what she does or where she goes. It is important for her to understand this before she jumps to conclusions. She then knows that her father really does love her and she returns it.

This story gives us a vibe of connection with family and how it is important to us all. They will always be there to help and guide us so that we may carry the strength and will to follow our destiny. By all means we should all be free at our desire to do what we want, but we must never forget about our family. We must put them first before anything else, and then we will never be broken.

Excellent work, mate. Keep it up.:icon14: :wink:

Guest
Guest
July 18, 2012
This is a fantastic piece of work! It's got the perfect amount of emotion and I think you captured the characters to a "T." If I could fave single works, this one would be there. :)

Guest
Guest
July 18, 2012
It's really touching!! I'm almost ... not crying XD but feeling it deeply!! You know how to make this scene as if a real human father talking to his daughter!! Well done is too cheap for this awesome story in just two pages!!

July 01, 2012
Usa Male
thanks

Guest
Guest
July 01, 2012
I loved this story good job Lynxie;)




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