“So I guess this leaves us back where we were?”

         She shook her head.  “Not exactly.  I thought about your question, and yes.  I do want to be your mate.”

         Toby’s face lit up.  “Really?  Oh wow, this is-!”

         “I wasn’t finished,” she cut him off.  Pleased to see how quickly he stopped, she went on.  “I’ll marry you on two conditions.  One, from now on when we have a disagreement, we talk.  No more ‘My way or no way.’”

         “Are you going to insist on that?” he joked.  Seeing the serious look on her face, he withdrew.  “Sorry.”

         She gave him a look before continuing.  “Yes, and I want you to insist on it too.  I like you the way you are, and I don’t want to end up cowing you into a yes-dog.”

         “Like that could happen?”

         “I could certainly try.  Anyway, that’s the first condition.”

         “Talk things over and don’t let you walk over me.  Got it.  Rule Two?”

         Luna smiled coyly.  “I don’t want this to just be a marriage of convenience.”

         “It won’t be, I promise.”

         “Good.  Then you should have no problem with this one.”  She hesitated and looked around before leaning in and whispering in his ear.

         He blinked.  “That’s it?”

         “Take it or leave it.”

         Toby hadn’t been around Luna all that time without knowing when she was playing one of her games.  “Well, dear, if that’s really the way you want it, I guess I can agree to those terms.”

 

Toby, Luna, Rex © Me

Copper and Taya © redwolf03



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June 21, 2012
Usa Male
Thanks BlackJack. Knowing it had that impact makes the time and effort well worthwhile.

On a side note, has anyone seen Skull?

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June 21, 2012
Very well written. I have loved your Toby series and I think that this is a nice little addition to fit in with the story. It really brings another important element into Toby and Luna's relationship and how much they mean to each other. It also teaches us an important lesson about the complications of relationships and how they need to work by reasoning without breaking up unfairly. I, for one, have never had a serious relationship before so this is good advice for me when my time comes. So cheers, mate. I love your work again. Keep it up.:P

June 20, 2012
Usa Male
Thank you. :)

June 19, 2012
Usa Male
Nice job! I like it!

June 18, 2012
Usa Male
Thanks Arctic. One of the few upshots of having had my share of relationships go sour is that it really gets me thinking about what makes one work. Here's hoping this is a help to others in the future.

June 17, 2012
Usa Male
Awesome story! You really thought that one through. One of my favorites!:/:

June 16, 2012
Usa Male
Thanks guys. I wonder when Skull will get to see it.

June 16, 2012
Mexico
Another splendid work, my friend!

June 16, 2012
Usa Female
Awww, that's so sweet! I really like this one.




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