A finely imagined plot, I'd say, with well opened, closing, and closing cirlces of information and events.

Amacing literary piece, hoenstly It's a very well made Narrative Leyend, which are stories based usually off real / mythic stories, I love the way you used the direct characterization of the characters involving the story, teh main character specially In your story, I would say she's "rounded", this means she change with the story, there is another kind called plain, which are those characters that stay always the same, in this case Aniu would be rounded, and amazing work as an omniscient narrator, plus I also appreciate the way you've structured the story, although the classic used " posing, conflict, outcome" usually makes me boring,

Well, this is different from the stories of Aniu I've read before, but you do have a fine knack for drama. All in all, I give it three out of five.

Amazing!

Wow. You have a really nice writing style, i like it alot. Almost as much as this story! Cant wait to see more!

It was sad at first, but the suspension gradually rose and I like it how you described the characters. I can't wait for the next sequel. Keep up the good work!

Well, you made a great story. I like your writing style; dramatic and nicely paced. I'm not sure if you've already noticed but there are some words missing at the end. I cannot wait to see your next fanfic.