Toby Recharged: A Life Unlived

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : November 24, 2011

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : Toby has five terrific pups, and one problem: Melchior. He's got the best of genes, and the worst of attitudes. Why is he so sullen? What will his family do when stubbornness turns to violence? And what will it take to get through to him before something tragic happens?

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Toby Recharged: A Life Unlived
By Jake Razor

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September 03, 2013
Usa Male
Whispers --> Again, sorry for taking so long to reply on this. Yeah, I'm trying to make each pup's life a little different (which could get difficult if Toby and Luna go for another round, and... well, they probably will, knowing them).

I think you're right about Mel's adoption, though the musher's kid might have kind of latched onto him. I'll need to fix that.

June 19, 2012
Usa Female
I meant to review this when it first came out, but it was late and I never got around to it. I reread it and thought I'd comment. This one is really good and it makes me hungry for more. I like how Toby's relationship with Mel is very different than his relationship with Caspar. Now Balthazar just needs his own fanfic... I only have one question: Wasn't Mel adopted by a musher? Anyway, keep up the good work!

December 13, 2011
Usa Male
redwolf --> High praise coming from you. Yeah, I guess Melchior was a lit like Copper in some ways. Maybe I'll develop that more in an expanded edition sometime.

As for the names, I'm pleased you caught that. The boys' names, and those of the biological girls, are explained in Part 12.

December 12, 2011
Usa Female
Nice fanfic! I'd forgotten how much I missed reading about Toby and Luna and their family. The story was very sweet; it kind of reminded me of how my character Copper felt towards Balto in my 'A Second Chance' stories. It was also interesting to see Pete being "Uncle Pete"! :) Overall, very nice story. I look forward to more. P.S. This was probably answered in one of your other fanfics, but why are Toby's sons named after the three Wise Men?

Baltorigamist
Baltorig
amist
November 30, 2011
I think I mised the last Sourcecast. I'll have to listen to it when I have time.

November 29, 2011
Usa Male
I'll work on that once I finish my current project, a fanfic requested for Sourcecast.

Baltorigamist
Baltorig
amist
November 28, 2011
No problem. All your fanfics are amazing. ;)
BTW, is Tower of Babble on ADGTHS done yet?

November 28, 2011
Usa Male
Thanks. :D

Baltorigamist
Baltorig
amist
November 28, 2011
nice fic, DT. It was worth the wait! :P

November 28, 2011
Usa Male
Imagine --> Thanks. It's good to know I'm still pleasing readers.

Thank you renton.

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