Star?! Why this?

Star: I'm sorry, I couldn't keep it.

Balto: Come on, Jenna! Let's find her!

Jenna: But we have to go to the veterinary!

Balto: It's true... let's go to Kodi's house! He knows the forest.

 

Both went to find Kodi. Kodi was chatting with his sister, Saba.

 

Jenna: Kodi!

Kodi: Oh, hi mom and dad!

Saba: Hey, mama and papa!

Balto: We need your help!

Kodi: What seems to be the problem?

Balto: Steele went to find Aleu. He'll probably kill her!

Saba: Oh my god! That's horrible!

Jenna: So we want you to find her and to stop Steele! Before it is too late...

Kodi: We are going!

Balto: Please come back with news!

 

Kodi and Saba already went to find the wolfpack. Meanwhile, Steele chatted with Aleu.

 

Aleu: Steele! I can't talk to you!

Steele: Who cares! Now you are mine!

Aleu: You won't kill me, Steele! Look at me, and see that I am stronger than you are!

Steele: You have beautiful eyes...

Aleu: Stop being sarcastic!

Steele: I'm not.

Aleu: Oh! uh... thank you...

Steele: *thinks* she's pretty. I'm not sure I want to kill her, now.

Aleu: *thinks* He's an handsome husky...

 

Both talked together, happily, until they saw Kodi and Saba running. Kodi jumped on Steele, while Saba went toward Aleu.

 

Saba: You must stay away from him!

Aleu: Kodi? Saba? What are you doing here?!

Kodi: We came to save you from that monster!

Aleu: Save me?!

Steele: Get off!!

 

Steele pushed Kodi, then went next to Aleu. Kodi ran toward Steele, but Aleu stopped him.

 

Aleu: Kodi, stop!

Kodi: *stops* uh? but...

Saba: He wants to kill you!

Aleu: No he doesn't... he's a gentleman...

Saba: What?!

Kodi: Aleu! You hate Steele! Now you think he's a gentle man?!

Aleu: He said I had wonderful eyes...

Steele: *blushes, then looks away*

Kodi: Steele said that? To you?!

Aleu: Yes, he's so nice!

Saba: Aleu, can I talk to you in private?

 

Aleu and Saba went away, while Kodi growled at Steele.

 

Saba: What's wrong with you?

Aleu: Saba... I never thought saying that, but...

Saba: But what?!

Aleu: I think I'm in love... with Steele.

Saba: You are kidding me right now, don't you?

Aleu: No! 

Saba: You are in love with Papa's rival?!

Aleu: Sadly... yes.

Saba: you can't, Aleu! What will you do when I'll tell that to Papa?

Aleu: I don't care... I just want to be with Steele.

Saba: No, you won't be with Steele! He is going in town with Kodi and I, and you stay in you're pack. Steele is a husky, he can't stay in your pack anyway.

Aleu: Please don't hurt him...

Saba: *rolls eyes* well see. *goes back to Kodi* Let's go Kodi. *looks at Steele badly* and you... follow me.

 

Kodi and Saba said goodbye to Aleu. Steele looked at Aleu, saying goodbye by the eyes. Aleu smiled at him.

 

Steele: *thinks* I'll come back, Aleu... i'll come back.

 

When Steele arrived in town, Balto jumped on him.

 

Balto: *growls* What did you do to my daughter?!

Steele: It's ok, Balto, she's alive!

Balto: I don't trust you!

Kodi: It's true, dad. Aleu is still alive.

 

Steele growled, bits Balto's paw, then ran away. Kodi and Saba joined Balto, Jenna, and their three siblings, Delia, Dingo and Prescott.

 

Delia: How's Aleu?

Saba: You won't believe me... she's... in love with Steele.

Balto, Jenna, Delia, Prescott, Dingo: WITH WHO?!

Kodi: It's the truth.

Balto: But... maybe Steele have feelings for Aleu too!

Jenna: That's really bad...

 

Mean while, Steele arrived, and his team mates went to see him.

 

Nikki: Did you killed Aleu?

Steele: No...

Star: So you made all this road for nothing?!

Steele: No, it wasn't for nothing... guys, this is not normal!

Kaltag: You seem nervous.

Nikki: what's wrong?

Steele: I... think I'm in love with her.

Kaltag, Nikki, Star: NOOO?!

Steele: I forgot about Jenna and I fell for her daughter!

Nikki: Not good man, not good.

Kaltag: What will you do?

Steele: I'll see her tomorrow... she is so pretty.

Star: You are not Steele... Aleu took your soul!

Steele: She didn't took it... she changed it. What's happening to me?! I don't recognize myself!!

Nikki: You should go to bed.

 

Steele went to bed. Next morning, he went to Aleu's pack. Aleu saw him, then ran toward him.

 

Steele: Aleu! It's so great to see you!

Aleu: Steele! What are you doing here?

Steele: I'm here to see you!

Aleu: But my dad will notice we see each other!

Steele: He doesn't know!

Aleu: Maybe my siblings told him.

Steele: Please, let's go take a walk.

Aleu: Ok...

 

Both walked and laughed. Suddenly, Steele walked in the direction of Nome.

 

Steele: gotta go now, it's soon my training time.

Aleu: Awww you're leaving?

Steele:Sorry. See you tomorrow.

Aleu: Bye.

 

Steele looked at her, then left. When he arrived, Balto was standing in front of Steele.

 

Balto: Hold on, Steele!

Steele: *rolls eyes* What do you want, mutt?

Balto: I want you to get away from my daughter right now!

Steele: Why would I do that?

Balto: She's not the good one for you, Steele, and you are not the good for her.

Steele: Balto...

Balto: What?

Steele: Your daughter changed me. I'm not the same anymore.

Balto: *rolls eyes* You are always the same, even when you're in love.

Steele: But with Aleu, it's different!

Balto: I forbid you to date my daughter!

Steele: No!

 

Both foughted. Dingo and Prescott saw the fight, and tried to stop them. Balto stopped.

 

Balto: *growls* Get away of my daughter! You bullied me since I live in Nome, and I don't want my daughter to date my rival!

Steele: We love each other, Balto. Don't try to stop us!

Balto: Oh yes I will stop you... OH YES I WILL!!

 

Balto ran away. Steele looked at Dingo and Prescott, who were looking at him.

 

Steele: What?

Dingo: We know what you had in your head, Steele!

Steele: ?

Prescott: You all wanted to kill us for Jenna! You wanted to make it on Balto's fault, so that Jenna can leave him and go with you. 

Steele: No! Where did you heard that?

Prescott: We were asking questions to Kaltag, Nikki and Star, and Star told all the truth.

Steele: *growls* Star! He always tell the truth by accident!

Dingo: But because you met Aleu, you don't want to kill us anymore and you want to be with Aleu. Well it won't take long.

Steele: What do you mean by that?

Prescott: Aleu will know someday that you went in the wolf pack just for kill her.

Steele: No, she'll not!

Dingo: Now just go away Steele! Anyone wants you here!

 

Dingo and Prescott growled after Steele. Steele looked at them with a mad face, then went away. For months, he came to visit Aleu and they were really in love. It was decided for Steele; he was going to tell Aleu he's in love with her, then ask her to be his mate. One morning, he came to visit again.

 

Steele: Aleu?

Aleu: Steele! *nuzzles him*

Steele: Let's go in the forest, it is more peaceful.

Aleu: Ok!

 

Both walked in the forest. Aleu started the conversation.

 

Aleu: It is funny that I am dating my dad's rival. I mean, I love my dad, but I love you too! You are a gentleman and you are so handsome! I wonder why he didn't liked you... you bullied him, but... you can say sorry. I love you Steele!

Steele: Yeah, talking about that...

Aleu: What?

Steele: Aleu, I need to tell you something.

Aleu: What is it, honey?

Steele: I...

Balto: He wants to kill you!!

Aleu: Dad?!

Steele: Balto! Get out of here!

Balto: I'll not let my daughter becoming mates with this monster!

Steele: Where did you get that information??

Balto: Star told me.

Steele: I shouldn't trust Star!!

Aleu: Oh, Steele... you want to be mates with me? Oh Steele! Ye...

Balto: NO!

Aleu: Dad! *growls* I love Steele, please let me be with him!

Balto: I'll not let you with him! He's a monster!

Aleu: Dad, he bullied you, ok. But he forgived you, right?

Balto: Steele wants to kill you ! He came to your pack just for kill you! And killing our siblings too! Falling in love with you wasn't his goal! All he wanted was Jenna! Not you!

Aleu: Steele wouldn't do that! *looks at Steele with tears on the eyes* right Steele?

Steele: ...

Aleu: Steele? Are saying that it is true?

Steele: I can explain you! I wanted Jenna at first, but then I saw you! Honey!

Aleu: *cries* Don't call me honey! You monster! I don't know how I fell in love with you!! *runs away*

Steele: Aleu, wait!! *growls and jumps on Balto* Why?! Why you did that?!

Balto: I wouldn't let my daughter being with you! You didn't think that I would stop you!

Steele: How could you!

Balto: After what you did for me... I had to take my revenge!

Steele: No!

Balto: Yes! And DON'T EVER touch her! Do not even speak to her!!

Steele: You won't control my life, Balto! *runs to Nome*

 

After what happened, Steele never talked to Aleu. He re-became the evil dog in town, and hated Balto and his family (except for Jenna). One day, Aleu decided to go to Nome. When she arrived, the first person who noticed her was her



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September 29, 2011
Canada
Thank you very much! I'll maybe do a second story ^^

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September 28, 2011
I love this story make a second one of the same story but continued. Please please make a new story bout that PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!......... oh and steals WAY! older then aleu, it's like having a 40 year old dude in love with an 17 year old creepy.:P °x° ;) :P

September 20, 2011
Canada
Thank you very much :D

September 19, 2011
Uk
Amazing!! I had tears in my eyes at the end! Favs!:P

August 29, 2011
Canada
Thanks u :D

August 29, 2011
Uk Female
Great job! Who'd have thouhgt that Aleu and Steele would be a couple. I think they definiely made the right choice in the end! FAVE!

August 27, 2011
Canada
Thanks :D

August 26, 2011
Usa Female
WQ > Balto > WoC
Wow... I didn't expect that, but despite the "Crack Pairing" vibe I get from it, it wasn't that bad. I like the method of Steele's sort of revenge - you did a good job of keeping him all interested in Jenna while he was suddenly falling for Aleu. To be honest, I though there would be a twist, but I'm sorta glad it didn't turn into one of those "we love each other and we'll stay together no matter what you say" stories.

Well done! I can't wait to see what you may have next!

- Juuchan17

August 26, 2011
Usa Male
Well, not just personality, although that is a pretty strong factor. Honestly I think most people who pair them up (present company not included, of course) do it out of a perverse enjoyment of the "Ew factor." As for basing pairings on looks, let's face it. DNA as a basis for choosing a mate, your own or someone else's, is hollow at best.

I will say this: You're the first and only person I've seen use this pairing with a sense of morality that wasn't seriously skewed.

August 26, 2011
Canada
I know, Steele and Aleu doesn't go with each other, by personality. But I don't hate this couple (by the look). Thanks for comment ^^

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