Aniu: “Aren’t they the cutest little things you’ve ever seen?”
Narrator: She nuzzles he three new born puppies.
Kito: “Nothing in the world could be so adorable.”
Narrator: He leans down to see the new born puppies. A worried look came over his face.
Kito: “Aniu they’re part dog and they’d never fit in here.”
Narrator: He pointed out, sadly.
Aniu: “They’ll fit in just fine dear.”
Kito: “As long as no one knows I’m their father. We’d be chased out of the forest, and Nome would never accept us if they knew.”
Narrator: Aniu got to her feet and sapped.
Aniu: “NOTHING IS WRONG WITH MY PUPPIES!!!”
Kito: “Aniu, they’re OUR Puppies and they are what they are!”
Aniu’s eyes flared and she bit his throat.
Kito: “Aniu, honey please let go.”
Narrator: She slung him away from the den and chased him off. She chased him clear to Nome.
Aniu: “You’re just like those other town dogs, now you can live your dream go back to your owner. And the next time I see you I’ll finish you.”
Narrator: The furry in her eyes left and she returned to her puppies. No one found out the father, and they were safe. Four months pass and the puppies are grown enough to wonder freely, but Aniu kept them to the den.
Puppy one: “Mommy?”
Aniu: “Yes Allison?”
Allison: “I’m hungry.”
Aniu: “I know sweetie I am too.”
Narrator: Aniu Stood up and said,
Aniu: “Balto Dear, Watch you’re sisters while I’m gone.”
Balto: “Ok mommy.”
Bullet: “Let’s take a nap.”
Balto: “OK”
Narrator: The puppies snuggle in to the Caribou skin. A Dark figure walks in and picks up Balto and leaves. Bullet wakes up and looks around not seeing Balto, she jumped up and said,
Bullet: “Where is he? Allison, where is he?”
Allison: “Who?”
Bullet: “Balto!”
Allison: “He’s gone? He wouldn’t just leave us would he?”
Bullet: “Of course not! Balto would never leave us.”
Narrator: The same Dark figure came in and took Allison in its jaws. Bullet screamed at it, but it was no use the figure left. Aniu heard her pup and ran to the cave. She carried an Elk in her jaws, she set it down.
Aniu: “What’s wrong Bullet? Where are Balto and Allison?”
Bullet: “It was too dark to see but something took Allison, it probably took Balto during our nap.”
Narrator: Aniu has a flash back, “Aniu they’re OUR puppies.” Of course Kito was after her puppies for revenge.
Aniu: “Bullet stay here dear, No come on. No stay Put. Umm… I’ll be right back.”
Narrator: Aniu ran to her old friend Diamond and walks in to her cave.
Aniu: “Diamond, its Aniu I need you to watch my puppy Bullet.”
Diamond: “Sure I’ll watch her.”
Narrator: Aniu ran to her cave and got Bullet, then ran back.
Aniu: “I don’t know how long I’ll be gone, but I will return.”
Narrator: Aniu ran clear to Nome, and ran in to a Goose.
Aniu: “Goose, do you know where Kito is?”
Goose: “It’s Boris and yes I do, this way.”
Aniu: “Thank you,”
Narrator: Boris showed her to the boat.
Boris: “He’s new around here; he just brought up some puppies a little while ago.”
Narrator: Aniu’s eyes flared and she ran up the plank and latched on to Kito’s back. Kito saw a flash of white and was pinned down. His eyes met he wolf eyes,
Kito: “Aniu honey is it really you?”
Narrator: She latched on to his throat.
Aniu: “Why’d you take them?”
Kito: “I was lonely the humans hate me now, they say I’ve gone wild.”
Narrator: She unlatches her grip and speaks
Aniu: “I’ll finish you, but not in front of the puppies”
Narrator: She turned and said,
Aniu: “You have one more chance I never want to see you in this town again!”
Narrator: Kito got to his feet and ran off. Aniu picked up Balto and took him to Boris.
Aniu: “Would you care for my Balto?”
Boris: “The pup is safe with me.”
Narrator: He picked the pup up in his wings and put him on the ship.
Aniu: “Thank you.”
Narrator: She took Allison and snuck down an ally at one of the back doors of a house faced the ally, it had a small porch Aniu put Allison on it.
Allison: “Mommy”
Narrator: Aniu turned leaving the puppy. All she said was,
Aniu: “Don’t worry I’ll be back.”
Narrator: She turned her head and slightly sobbed not knowing why she was leaving her puppy in the care of humans. She walked to Diamonds to pick up Bullet.
Bullet: “Mommy!”
Narrator: The puppy said seeing her mother.
Aniu: “Come along.”
Narrator: Bullet looked around and asked,
Allison: “So where are Balto and Allison?”
Aniu: “Sweetie they were killed by a town dog moments before I got to Nome”
Narrator: Aniu was sad so was Allison, but Aniu was sad because she had lied to her puppy. They left and went to the cave. For a year she slept on the lie she told. She awoke one morning.
Aniu: “Bullet, they aren’t dead.”
Bullet: “Mother they are, you had a dream.”
Aniu: “I’m sorry when that dark figure came in, it was your father, I promised to kill him if he crossed over to our territory. When you were not even a day I chased him off our place. He came for revenge, I found Balto and Allison, they’re safe and I know where they are; a little town called Nome. Your father lived there he had taken them. Balto lives with a goose named Boris. And Allison lives with Humans. I told Allison I’d return but I haven’t. I was afraid if you knew you’d go looking for them.
Narrator: Bullet stood to her feet and walked out of the den.
Aniu: “Bullet don’t go!”
Bullet: “If I wasn’t met to reunite us. Why would you have told me when I was fully grown? It’s my destiny to reunite us!”
Narrator: Aniu nodded and Bullet embarked on her quest. The sky grew dark and she dug a snow nest. She placed he nose by the entrance, so she could breath. By the time the sun began to rises Bullet went on, but she became lost in the woods for three years. She saw the lights of Nome and she was so happy she could hardly feel her feet on the snow, she was running so fast. She spotted the goose her mother spoke of.
Bullet: “Where’s Balto?”
Boris: “The boat on the sea shore.”
Narrator: Bullet ran to the boat and called,
Bullet: “Balto are you up there?”
Balto: “Who are you?”
Bullet: “The pup of Aniu and sister of Balto and Allison.”
Balto: “I don’t have any sisters.”
Bullet: “Do you not know your mother?”
Balto: “yes she’s a white wolf named Aniu.”
Bullet: “I’m your long lost sister; you know you have another sister here Allison.”
Balto: “Allison, you mean Aerik’s new girlfriend”
Bullet: “She’s black with husky markings”
Balto: “I never knew she was my sister.”
Narrator: They both go to Aerik’s cave.
Balto: “Aerik?”
Aerik: “Balto is that you?”
Balto: “Yes I’m here with my sister, is Allison here?”
Narrator: A figure walks up in to the light.
Allison: “I’m here.”
Bullet: “Allison, do you remember me?” (In question)
Narrator: Allison looks at her something about her was familiar but she wasn’t sure what.
Allison: “I-I think so.” (Stutter)
Bullet: “I’m your Sister! Bullet!”
Allison: “I remember clearly now I was taken away and brought to a human and mother said, ‘I’ll be back soon.’”
Narrator: Bullet explained what happened to her on her journey.
Allison: “Mother did that?” (Surprised)
Bullet: “I’ve never been more truthful”
Balto: “And you got lost in the forest for three years?!” (Amazed/ surprised)
Bullet: “Of course I went through that to find you two. Aniu will want to see you. Come one”
Narrator: They Traveled to Aniu’s cave and call threw the entrance. A black wolf waked to the entrance and growled,
Wolf: “Get out of here!” (Meanly)
Narrator: A familiar voice spoke it was Aniu.
Aniu: “Honey, who is it?”
Wolf: “Just two wolves and a dog.”
Bullet: “Mother is that you? It’s Bullet your Daughter.” (In question)
Aniu: “Bullet?” (In question)
Narrator: Aniu welcomed in her puppies and showed them her most recent litter.
Aniu: “This is Scar my mate and these are our puppies.”
Narrator: The three siblings stared at the seven puppies all white and black.
Allison: “Awe” (Softly)
Narrator: Kito didn’t stop. He was out hunting them down to kill them all. He arrived at the cave and walked in growling.
Author’s Note:
Dear reader,
The reason I made it stop here was to make you wonder what’ll happen. I’ve rated the continuation PG for mild violence. I hope you
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Not to criticize, but the characters' behavior was pretty erratic.
Aniu's attack on Kito for simply stating that the pups wouldn't be
accepted by others just comes out of nowhere, and the way she split up
her pups and didn't keep any of them in her own care seems very
uncharacteristic. But it is your first time. Then again, I was a beginner once myself. I suggest you keep at it. |