i know right, thats what i feel when i read a really good book, i just wanna jump into the book ol

I cant stop reading it, i want it, i would love if i could actually live this

awwwwwwww thx Aerik i'm glad u liked it

I absolutely loved it, very few books capture my attention and this one did all that and more, it made me laugh and cry, and you capture the setting and the charaters very well, and its like you know me, because Aerik is sopossed to be exactly like me and i didnt give all the details, and yet you captured them all exactly, right down to the words and gestures he used, i couldnt stop reading it, this is why I love your work, love you.
Signed,
Aerik

thanks it wasnt one of my best but i kind of just let the words flow through me u know, i still have to work on making plots better thanks for the advice it really helps

It's a nice story. The plot is rather poorly developed, and the paragraph structure could stand to be a little more broken up, but it has a beautiiful feel to it, especially the end.