told Dusty that he loved her. And Dusty became his mate. Kodi was so happy. Then Ralph came towards Kodi again. Ralph then decided to tag Kirby, since he was here. Kodi then saw Kaltag coming towards him. Kaltag waved his paw at Kaltag. Kodi snapped out of it.
" Oh, hi Kaltag" said Kodi.
" Hello, Kodi" said Kaltag.
" I hear your mates with Dusty" said Kaltag.
" Well, good luck" said Kaltag.
" Thanks" said Kodi.
Kodi saw that the sun was going down. Kodi realized it was time to go home. Kodi said bye to Kirby, Ralph, and Dusty and left. Kodi felt something wet drop on him. He saw it was raining. Kodi then started to run and run as fast as he could. He got home. He walked inside a layed under the table. Kodi heard his owner yelling. He ran in his owner's room.
" Kodi !" said Kodi's owner.
Kodi jumped on his owners bed. His owner snuggled up with Kodi. Kodi smiled. Kodi then got very sleepy. Kodi realized his owner had fallen asleep. Kodi smiled. Kodi then got out of his owner's arms and layed on the ground. Kodi then fell asleep, too.
THE END
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It's a cute story, but it needs more work. Try throwing in a few more
plot twists next time and see what happens. Like, what if Kodi and
Dusty came within a fraction of an inch of fessing up, but then
somehow ended up with other dogs (say, she ends up with Ralph or Kirby
and he ends up with some OC girl dog), and they have to work their way
out of that mess before they can be together? Just a suggestion. |