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| November 22, 2010 | ||
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It's a cute story, but it needs more work. Try throwing in a few more
plot twists next time and see what happens. Like, what if Kodi and
Dusty came within a fraction of an inch of fessing up, but then
somehow ended up with other dogs (say, she ends up with Ralph or Kirby
and he ends up with some OC girl dog), and they have to work their way
out of that mess before they can be together? Just a suggestion. |