with you, I guess.”

Angel glanced at Arrow. “Is that a reward or a punishment?”

Arrow smirked. She knew the answer, and she knew that it meant it was safe now to have a little fun. “I don't think he knows that either,” she stage-whispered.

Toby produced a very contrived frown and said, “Now, I'm going to have a talk with Luna, and I'll pretend I didn't hear that little remark.”

As he walked out, both of them looked after him. Angel wasn't sure what “Dad time.” would be like. But somehow she knew that everything was going to be okay.

 

Angel took her punishment remarkably well. She never once complained, and she spent every free moment looking after Star almost to the point of absurdity. Luna was surprised one time to come in and find a wet trail across the floor, terminating in a sopping-wet Angel trying to push the water bowl, which by now was nearly empty, over to where Star sat. After all, Angel defended herself when Star had at last gotten her drink and Luna had finished cleaning up what she could of the mess, Star was sick because of her. So why make her move around when there was no need?

Luna had to laugh. If nothing else, it seemed Angel had at least gotten the point. Which was very fortunate. It would give the parents one less thing to worry about the next time a problem arose – which, as always, would be much, much too soon.

 

All characters © Dragon Tamer

Don't forget to also read Toby Recharged: Rising Star.



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November 28, 2010
Usa Male
You're welcome. I aim to please.

November 23, 2010
Usa
I liked how the story corresponds with Rising Star - great story:)

November 16, 2010
Usa Male
Conay --> Thanks as always. I'm sorry for the long delay, but that's how writing can be sometimes. I ad to make sure both stories were interesting and that the events matched ocrrectly and all that.

November 13, 2010
Uk Male
Epic win! It's been quite a long time since the last Toby, and I enjoyed this one like I enjoyed the others. Thanks for keeping the Toby series going! 9.5/10!

November 13, 2010
Usa Male
Silwer --> Glad you enjoyed them, as always. I'm really pleased that I succeeded so well in incorporating the young mindset to my stories, particularly since they were concerning a gender I know so little about. Thanks.
And aww, I'm sure your dog appreciates it.

November 12, 2010
Norway Male
Ok, now I got to read this one to. Im gonna use my statement from my comment on "Rising Star" and add a "Cant wait for more."
If youll excuse me, I feel like hugging my dog right now, I got a bit emotional reading this.

November 12, 2010
Usa Male
Croc --> None the less, your review is welcome. It's nice to know my work is appreciated.
Taco --> Indeed. Toby's life is a prime example of the fact that the only thing necessary for evil to win is for the good to do nothing.

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November 11, 2010
Another awesome story DT! Darn Nome and it's seemingly endless current of villains and evil-doers! Good thing Toby is there to keep things in line, otherwise who knows what would happen! =O

November 11, 2010
Usa
Yeah, I see what you mean there. We may not purposely do the wrong thing, but even so our actions must be addressed. And I'm really glad you addressed that myth. I still don't feel my review does your story justice. There's just so many things I love about the story. Now I just need to read rising Star...

November 11, 2010
Usa Male
Croc --> Thanks. I tried to paint a picture with this story to show that, while not all shortcomings are outright wrongdoing, like Angel's was (and even more so her so-called friends'), we all must be held accountable for our actions. Toby and Luna, for example, fell into one of the common myths of parenthood: dads look after boys, moms look after girls. Each kid needs attention from both parents growing up.

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