quickly blocked it with my sword. He lunged again,this time at my shoulder. In an attempt to dodge the blow it grazed my shoulder. I winced and looked at the cut,it looked deep even thought it felt like it did little to no damage. Greggory grinned evilly,He kicked my shins like I did to Shadow before. I winced again,I lowered my sword in pain. When he saw that I had my guard down he slashed at my shoulder again. I tried to block it but,to late. The sword cut right through my shoulder as if it was made of butter. "GAHHHHH!" I howled in pain,and felt my knees buckle,and before I knew what happened I crashed to the ground. "You cut my arm off." I croaked mustering all my anger but it was just one feeble croak. Greggory's evil grin widened "Indeed I did,and it will be my prize to the dark lord." he told me. He walked up to me and kicked me in the stomach. My eyes widened and I coughed up blood,and I felt some trickle from my mouth too. "Pathetic." He growled with distaste,"Wait," I croaked as he put his sword up to my throat. "What peasant?" He spat,"Who bewitched your sword?". "The dark lord did you idiot." He snapped,"Now," Greggory boomed "Prepare to die!" he was just about to slash my throat when two arrows sprouted from his back.

   His eyes widened in pain and shock,he opened his mouth,but fell to the ground. Blood leaking from his chest. "Travis!" I herd a voice call,it was a girl,not Luna,but someone familiar. And before I got to see who it was,everything went Black.

 

     Toby,Luna,Blazewind,and Goldfire(c)Dragon Tamer

   Edward,Kiba,Spark,Mason,Will,Frolo,Travis,Greggory Ruth,Mcgreggor,the guards,Travis's Parents,Creek,and more(c)Me

      Female General,and Shadow(c)Jordan.

       Sorry I didn't use some people's characters in this book,I promise I will put them in the next one!

     

    

 

 

      

     

      

 

               

 

 

               



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March 01, 2011
Female
The Marauders
You have to let me know when you get the next one up! I can't wait!! :Love:

January 28, 2011
Usa Male
It has potential, but a little more visual detail and breaking up the paragraphs would make it a lot easier to read and follow.
Also, two things to suggest. Toby's brown, not orange, and Luna is usually more talkative in scenes like when Toby told Shadow to stay away from her.

Having said that, I'm definitely looking forward to part 2. I can't wit to see what happens to Travis - and who that voice was.

January 25, 2011
Female
The Marauders
You're welcome!! =3 < 3

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January 23, 2011
Thank you!

January 12, 2011
Female
The Marauders
Love it!! Your best yet!!! ^^ < 3




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