Toby Recharged: Rising Star

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : November 06, 2010

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Flashback/Character Developement

Description : All Star wants is to be beautiful like her mom - and her sister, too. But when it comes to looks, she's the runt of the litter. And that's just the start of her trouble...

Length : Long -

Characters : 3637 visits



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Toby Recharged: Rising Star
By Jake Razor

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January 18, 2011
Usa Male
Thanks. And it ain't over yet.

January 18, 2011
Usa
Former mod/retired
Now I see what I'm missing out on, when I don't catch up with my reading, great job DT.

December 18, 2010
Usa Male
jomom --> As always, I look forward to your input on it.

December 05, 2010
Usa
man i been meaning to read this for a a long time now that i have it was a super good story loved it 5 stars loved the part were stay said do you think she is a spy lol that whs funny cant wait tell i read the next

November 22, 2010
Usa Male
AK4 --> Excellent. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Too many girls judge themselves based on superficial standards these days, which are set up mostly to appeal to the physical interests of guys. And I'm saying this as a guy, so that says something.

November 21, 2010
Usa
Pretty Awesome. I Enjoyed the plot and what the main idea was.
Now to read Fallen Angel. Keep being awesome.

November 16, 2010
Usa Male
Croc --> Awesome.
Silwer --> Hey, I was saying double-feature months in advance, remember?

November 12, 2010
Norway Male
Why didnt you tell me you had uploaded not one, but TWO stories?!
Just got done reading "Rising Star" and I loved it. It was a new twist on your usual story-telling, but I thought it was most interesting. You made me think about my time as a kid, in fact, I kinda had to in order to fully connect with the characters and their choices. All in all, there is so much I like about this that I dont know where to start=P

Will read "Fallen Angel" after some much needed breakfast.

November 12, 2010
Usa
I finished reading this a bit ago and now reviewing it I'm gonna say it's awesome!!! I just can't decide which one I like better, this one or falling angel. Everything sparkles and shines with these stories. I'll probably write down some questions in the forum for the characters soon.

God bless,
Crocluva95

November 12, 2010
Usa Male
Skull --> I guess that's pretty good, considering this was one of the most difficult stories I've ever written. It was very much over my head. I'm glad, though, that it pleased you. I was hoping the opening would grab people's attention and arouse curiosity.
Taco --> lol I was waiting for your response. And it's okay. I like to get short responses too.

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