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| August 25, 2010 | ||
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That was beautiful. But the part where she says she's "not, not coming
back" would read smoother if it read, "not leaving." |
![]() | August 23, 2010 | |
Excellent work. I don't know for sure if Balto remembered all of what
Aleu said, but I'm sure Jenna heard some of it eventually. Great job
on this. |