Thanks to all praise and critics. And DT, dont worry, "Walking through life" was the first real story I wrote, and this one was just a small bridge to connect my "personal Balto-universe" with the series im planning. Trust me, when I get to write the next stories, I will put alot more soul into it and and hopefully utilize some of my newgained experience. Again, thanks for all past and future comments. You all matter^^

Silwer

I must say, in expansion on my earlier comment, that I like the pairing (as always), and the twist at the end was definitely a surprise. However, by way of constructive criticism, I will say that the plot needs more substance in order for this to be a truly fantastic story. In other words, get more into the characters, more into the setting, more into the story as a whole. Make it come alive.

M. O. R. E! Awesome story! It was really well written and I enjoyed every bit of it, no matter how short! 8D

keep this up!!! Kodi and Dusty stories are the best!!

Uh-oh, that last part doesn't sound too good...

ohh sounds interesting you must do this series !