Fixing A Family

Author : ZukotheCat

Date sent : July 16, 2010

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : ****RP between me and Skotta. Special thanks and credit. Jade doesn't have much luck with the ladies, not that he's unpopular but rather that something always happens so the leave. Jade now has a mate by the name of Aiyanna and an adorable daughter by the name Clover. But when a old enemy returns his happy little family gets destroyed, but how can a young female by the name Kit change his life around?

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PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Fixing A Family

By ZukotheCat

This fanfic was rated PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned).

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Retro_Ro llerskat es	July 17, 2010

	im not a wolf, ok.

It was a great story, and wonderfuly sustained plot- you are obviously very good RPers. It was an interesting twist that if Jade had followed Clvoer atthe beginning, inncoently disguised by his normal conversation with Kit, he could have died. I also liked how it was Clover who was sort of responsible for Aiyanna's death, but I felt sorry for her that history repeated itself when Clover was grown up enough to understand >< I also liked how Clover and Utah's feelings changed towards eachother as they grew up

All inall I loved it - part 2, part 2! :3


Saske italian wolf	July 17, 2010

Oh my D8 I wasn't expecting an ending like that! Jason is a real bauustard D<

but great fic 83 I enjoyed reading it!


Claire Cooper	July 17, 2010

	Lone Wolf who protects others

Oh dear poor Clover DX i hope she will be okay


Larkspur	July 16, 2010

	The GAME!!!!

amazing story you guys, sad, emotional but happy^^! poor clover though!


Street dog	July 16, 2010

OMG I loved it 8D Poor Clover...Gosh, great job you two!!

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