Dragon you did miss him see

Kodi came running to the front of the alley. "Dad, dad! Come quick!"

Balto quickly got up and ran out of the alley. Jenna followed.

"What's wrong?" Balto asked his son as they walked towards the front side of Nome.

"There's this wolf that just appeared here. She says she knows you."

"A wolf?"

"Yeah, she's white. She says she's related to you or something..."

Balto's face suddenly froze. It may be Aniu... he thought.

As they neared the area, Balto immediately noticed a big whtie blur of wolf. He looked closely and saw that maternal figure he only knew as a small pup. "Mother?" he asked hesitantly. She nodded. Both Jenna and Kodi looked at each other a bit confused. How on earth did Aniu know where to find Balto?


He is all in that part in the beginning.

It could stand to be longer, like Jane said. But I'm confused; Kodi's in the cast list, but I don't see him mentioned. Did I miss something?

thanks guys! I may extend this in the future! Whenever I get the time ^^

I liked it!

I like it. It has it's intense moments, and to me every good story is not just about love connection but also has to have a bit of drama and intensity. Please extend it. There has to be more to the story. Keep up the good work, mate.

P.S. Baltolover01- As much as we would like to see Steele dead and have Balto and his family become free from his predjudice, Balto is not like him; because his open heart would prohibit him from killing anybody. Therefore if Steele had to be killed, I would like it to be anyone but Balto; otherwise others might start thinking less of him and see his true evil side; which would then lead to further predjudice again for the rest of his living days. So anyone but Balto should kill Steele in the end. Cheers, mate.

really good! it might had been better if you had let balto kill steele... now THAT would be a story

It was a nice story, but I might have enjoyed it more if it was longer. You had great ideas for this story!

nice story