I liked it, but I can see room for a few improvements. You're missing a word here and there, like when Kodi was saying "I am" and there's only "am." And there's room for a lot more detail. But other than that, I liked it.

I always love a good love story, and I thought that this was very sweet, mate. I really loved it. It just broke my heart. Keep up the good work, mate.

aww lov it

loved it.. just curious, what was the obvious big deal about his dad calling him Kodiak? thats his NAME!

yea great story mate

It was pretty good....Besides the spelling and other errors...great!