i read this and have a character called Jake, he was killed in this war like in this story maby he should be the dogthat went down named jake.

Have you read the book "Dog of War"? It's about a story kind of like this one that is based on a true story. I think you may enjoy that!

This story was good. Great idea adding Balto into the fights of WWII. Although, it did seem you rushed through it as it kept switching to a few sentence scenes.

I dont mean to be technical, but I've studied WWII for years, and I gotta let it out. Normally if the Army hires any native dogs from Alaska, they would be sent to fight the Japanise who where invading the Alaskan islands in 1942-43. Or, they would be sent to Norway, Eastern European nations like Poland and Yugoslavia, and most commonly to the Soviet Union to fght within the Eastern Front as war supplies from allied nations.

Although, there have been reports of Alaskan huskies/malamutes fighting in the American campaign from D-Day, the Battle of the Buldge (there were quite a few during this), to the final battle of Berlin. Although, they would never put a paratute on a dog and put him/her into an Airbourne squadren.

Also putting dates will help to, like the scene when Blato jumped out of the plane, put June 5, 1944 before it. And the endin was the most rushed. It ends off Harrison dying, then instantly back in 1946. How did balto get home? He still had almost a year of literal Hell to go though into the bloody road to Berlin.

But overall, quite origional ideas going there.