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| April 12, 2010 | ||
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I Liked the fanfic... but..... why didnt you just create it as one big
fanfic, instead of Part 1-7 ? like um why not just work on it every chance you got? (but any way... thats my opinion)... |
| April 11, 2010 | ||
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Very interesting plot. But if you want some advice, include more of
the speech idiosyncrasies, like Nikki's "youse" (instead of "you"). It
goes a long way. |
| April 11, 2010 | ||
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I think it was great. And your not the only spaz everyone's stopped
commenting on my fanfics too ![]() |