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| March 31, 2010 | ||
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I hate to be the lone critic, but I'm going to try to balance this. As a reader, I always like to say good things about a K/D fanfic. And this one was a pleasantly familiar walk, almost like taking a walk on a favorite trail. The only problem was you skimmed so much, the trail looked more like a blur. This story needs a lot more substance and detail (and time. There's no way Dusty would know she was pregnant, much less show characteristic signs of it, only a day or a few days after she and Kodi decided to be mates. Dogs gestate fast, but not that fast). |