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![]() | March 11, 2012 | |
I agree with Whispers in the Dark,there is no way Ralph would do
that,maybe Kodi.Ralph loves Dusty |
| May 17, 2010 | ||
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Whispers --> I just don't think he has the gumption to to what's
needed unless there are two or three other dogs leading the way. A
sizeable number of relationships run into trouble for that very
reason; i.e. one or the other isn't pulling their share of the load
(pardon the pun). So if Ralph is disinclined to do his share, it
follows he would not make a good mate. |
| March 23, 2010 | ||
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Hey, Dragon Tamer, what do you mean that you don't think Ralph would
make a very good mate for any other girl? I think he would be a good
mate, after all a dogs got to settle down sometime, right? Anyway, Balto769... the story was okay. It should have been longer, and Ralph was definitely not like that in the movie. But still, it was pretty good. |
| March 18, 2010 | ||
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I have an idea or two if you're interested, although I'd prefer if you
had some plans of your own nailed down first to at least compare them
to. |
| March 17, 2010 | ||
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I would have picked Kira as an antagonist, if not quite a villainess.
And she could still add some interesting elements to a sequel. |
| March 17, 2010 | ||
Yeah well, I needed someone to be the vilian character in this fanfic,
and I chose Ralph. |
| March 17, 2010 | ||
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Hmm. A few minor writing flaws here and there, but the plot wasn't so
bad. I've been waiting for a fanfic that showed a rivalry between
Kodi and Ralph, although I wish this one had been longer. The one major character flaw I observed was that although I don't think Ralph would make a very good mate for Dusty or any other girl, neither do I think he would tend to become violent. |