A Dozen Red Roses

Author : Love_Jane

Date sent : March 14, 2010

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : This is a fanfic about Kodi and Dusty

Length : Short -

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A Dozen Red Roses
By Love_Jane

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March 11, 2012
I agree with Whispers in the Dark,there is no way Ralph would do that,maybe Kodi.Ralph loves Dusty

May 17, 2010
Usa Male
Whispers --> I just don't think he has the gumption to to what's needed unless there are two or three other dogs leading the way. A sizeable number of relationships run into trouble for that very reason; i.e. one or the other isn't pulling their share of the load (pardon the pun). So if Ralph is disinclined to do his share, it follows he would not make a good mate.

March 25, 2010
Yes I know, I'm changing that a little in the sequal

March 23, 2010
Usa Female
Hey, Dragon Tamer, what do you mean that you don't think Ralph would make a very good mate for any other girl? I think he would be a good mate, after all a dogs got to settle down sometime, right?
Anyway, Balto769... the story was okay. It should have been longer, and Ralph was definitely not like that in the movie. But still, it was pretty good.

March 18, 2010
I have definate ideas for a sequal, but what are yours?

March 18, 2010
Usa Male
I have an idea or two if you're interested, although I'd prefer if you had some plans of your own nailed down first to at least compare them to.

March 18, 2010
Yeah, I was thinking about a segual, if I made one she would definately be in it.

March 17, 2010
Usa Male
I would have picked Kira as an antagonist, if not quite a villainess. And she could still add some interesting elements to a sequel.

March 17, 2010
Yeah well, I needed someone to be the vilian character in this fanfic, and I chose Ralph.

March 17, 2010
Usa Male
Hmm. A few minor writing flaws here and there, but the plot wasn't so bad. I've been waiting for a fanfic that showed a rivalry between Kodi and Ralph, although I wish this one had been longer.
The one major character flaw I observed was that although I don't think Ralph would make a very good mate for Dusty or any other girl, neither do I think he would tend to become violent.




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