that?” she asked, “Even though I don’t have much experience?”
“Hey, no one is experienced on their first day,” Misha replied, “But you have talent. Talent that only a lead dog can have.”
“I know this is hard for you; it sure is for us, but we’re a team Sonya,” Jake continued, “You aren’t alone anymore. We’ll always be there for you. Besides, someone has to lead us and you’re the best dog for the job.”
“Even though I’m only half dog?” she asked.
“Hey, there are some things that a dog can’t do,” Jake replied, “But that a wolf can.”
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Epilogue: A New Deal
Sonya had been resting for the past few days, and during that time, she had been mulling over what to do with Steele. Before, she had wanted to tell everyone what she had learned, but after that run, something in her head was telling her not to. She knew that it would result in him being banished, but that didn’t seem like the right thing to do anymore. He may have gotten Marcus lost, but he had also helped her get him home, along with making sure she got home safely as well.
“Balto was willing to give me another chance, as long as I gave him another one too. We decided to bury our past feelings and leave them behind.”
She had mostly been thinking over Kaltag’s words. Like Steele, he had been a bully before, but Balto still decided to let him start over. Could she forgive Steele the same way Balto had forgiven Kaltag? Could she just bury what he had done to her? “Well, if I’m going to be on the same team as him, I may have to. However, I will need a way to keep him on a tight leash.”
As she lay in front of the fireplace, she heard a faint rustling under the floorboards. Curious, she got up and walked to the door, passing by Marcus, who was resting on the couch. His leg had been wrapped in a cast, and other than needing some time near the fire to warm up after being out in the cold for so long, he had suffered no other injuries. She left the house and crept around the side until she found the open board that led into the crawlspace. She poked her head in and saw that it was Steele, hiding under her home.
“So that’s where you’ve been,” she said, “I haven’t seen you since we got back home.”
“Yeah, well it’s probably safer here, considering you’ve probably told everyone that I’m a big liar by now,” he replied.
“Actually, I haven’t told anyone yet,” she replied, “I’ve been spending the last few days thinking about what to do with you, and I’ve made my decision. I’m not going to tell them and I’ll let you stay in White Mountain,” she said.
“R-really?” he asked, “You’re letting me off the hook?”
“Not exactly. There will be one condition that I expect you to follow,” she replied. He may have helped her out, but she wasn’t going to let him off with a slap on the paw. She would have to make sure that there wouldn’t be a repeat of what had happened before, “First thing’s first; on this team, I am the lead dog. Not you, me. I expect you to follow my instructions and I don’t want any back-sass from you about me being part-wolf. You may have helped me get Marcus home, but don’t think that means I’ll instantly forgive everything you did to me,” she said. She may have been willing to accept him into her team, but he would still have to earn her trust, “Now, is that too much to ask? Can you run under the orders of a half-wolf, or do you want to try your luck in the next town?”
“I’d rather stay here,” he replied, “If it means I can stay here, then I suppose I can tolerate being around you,” he may have accepted her offer, but Steele would always have his prejudice against half-wolves.
“Good,” she finished and turned to leave. However, another thought came to her, and she stopped, “Oh, and Steele, thanks for not leaving me behind.”
“It was only fair. After all, you did save me from falling off that cliff,” he replied, “Not even Balto did that for me.”
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Sonya, Jake, Sierra, Jonathan, Ellie, Marcus, Maddie, Bruno, Misha, Tom, Felix and Amak belong to iWolf231, and may not be used in any way without my direct permission.
All other characters belong to Universal Studios and Amblimation
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What I love about this story is the way that you, again, were able to provide flashbacks to bring the moral of the story to life. I always think that using this technique makes a great story. I also love the way that you were able to interpret the hardships and painful experience that Sonya was going through in her life as well as the complexities involved for her to overcome it all. I think that this story has a lot to say about what it is like to be different to others and the consequences of vengeance. The main message of the story to me is that venegeance is a sin, it does not help, and it does not make the pain go away. It only makes things worse.
That quote that you used about being careful when fighting someone as it may hurt someone close to you is very true. That is one of the most important quotes that I have read and heard, and I think that it sends an important message to everyone about the consequences about picking a fight. The same goes with the quote about giving a second chance to those who have done bad things. One author on this site said that everyone deserves a second chance; and I believe that very much. Everyone must have the chance to see what they have done and how they can make up fot their mistakes. I always believed that Steele deserved another chance; but some other authors could not change him because some believed that he would never change. Not entirely true to me. I know that there is always a way for everyone to see reason if they just make the effort. It is all about performing good deeds to erase bad deeds, and Steele did some of that in this story. He still has more to go, but at least he has seen reason in his mistakes.
I have to admit, I cried when Amak was leaving Sonya, because Sonya had already lost her parents and she was going to be orphaned again. I just thought that this part was so sad.
Also, again, very well written. I can't see any spelling mistakes and your grammar is near perfect; and the story is very clear and concise.
I love your stories so much, mate. Excellent work and I look foward to reading your next ones when they come out.