parents for the endless joy that you will experience when you are finished. I know this is hard..” “No, it’s fine, I know I that I must do it.” “I will always be with you my grandson, no matter what happens. Just look to the sky and I will be there, but our time is coming to an end as dawn approaches, is there anything else you’d like to ask?” As Brigham looked up into his grandmothers beautiful eyes a question came mind. “Well, there is one thing…. uhh… well, do I get married?” Aniu smiled at her grandson and said, “Yes, to the most beautiful dog in all of Alaska… yes she is a husky like your mother.” “And…” “I think that’s enough questions for tonight.” “Yeah, sorry.” Brigham got up and looked out over the cliff. Nome was still visible but now the Aurora Borealis was filling the sky over it. He now knew what his whole life was for, what everything he had gone through was for… he was to be like his father. He was going to save people, but before he could save them he had to be saved himself. He was calm, and determined, ready for his journey to begin. This is for you mom and dad. We will see each other again, but this time I will be a hero. I will make you both proud.

In Nome, Balto and Jenna were sleeping. The sun was shinning brightly through the window in the back room where Balto and Jenna lived. Balto loved living in Rosy’s house with Jenna, it was all he ever wanted, to be with the one he loved, forever. As we awoke, he felt a sudden chilly breeze that blew in through the open window. As Balto smiled at the site of his sleeping mate he heard a familiar voice. “Mother?” Aniu appeared in the room and said, “Your son is safe and well, do not worry my son. He will return to you in due time.” “I am ok with him being gone, but Im afraid he will resent me.” “There is no need think such things, he knows why he must be apart from you and has come to grips with it.” “He loves you both dearly, but do not be fearful for him, I am always watching over him.” “I knew you’d be protecting him mother. Thank you so much, I love you.” “I love you to my son.” As Aniu faded away, Jenna woke up and tiredly said to Balto, “You’re up early honey, is something wrong?” “Nothings wrong Jenna, especially since I’m with your beautiful self.” As he kissed her head she said “You’d’ think id be tired of hearing that all these years, but it always is just as great as the first.” “Well it true, but lets go back to sleep.” I’m so proud of you Brigham, just know that.



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February 02, 2010
Usa
haha its fine DT, dont worry... i really just want the most critique i can get. I really want this story to be good.... im hoping for maybe must-see but thats a very high hope :(

February 02, 2010
Usa Male
So am I, I just... oh, well, I guess maybe I'm being too hasty in my conclusions again. I'll read the rest and see how it goes.

January 31, 2010
Usa
really jom? thanks!! why did you like and not like...

January 31, 2010
Usa
it good i give it a 5 out of 5 im christian so it made a conection for me

January 30, 2010
Usa
hmmm, well he was not really meditating. It was more like a vision in his sleep. Well i've always felt that Aniu was a spirit so... i merely expanded what she was a little farther. Its a metaphor the christian faith, i mean she's not just a deity. But opinions are opinions haha

January 30, 2010
Usa Male
The meditation, for one. Also, I've never liked stories that cast Aniu as a deity.

January 29, 2010
Usa
no they are in a later chapter, it is simply the first chapter really.
why did you not the spirituality of it?

January 29, 2010
Usa Male
I hate to make my comment a negative one, but on a spiritual level, I'm not too crazy about it. There's a lot of good, but also some that isn't so good.

On a writing level, it was very good. Very emotional, with a minimum of wasted words. But you might want to break up the paragraphs more so it'll be easier to follow. Keep it up, though.

And, uh, where were Kodi and Dusty in this?




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