The Shadow-Claw Clan: Pack Life.

Author : Rayana

Date sent : January 12, 2010

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Other

Description : This is the first installment of the packs adventure. This is just to get to know them better ^^

Length : Short -

Characters : 903 visits



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The Shadow-Claw Clan: Pack Life.
By Rayana

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March 16, 2010
Becky just wanted a place to live, that's all x] And I'll try better in my next fanfic if I bother to write it x] I did tell you that it would make no sesnse either xD

March 16, 2010
Usa Male
Well, you have a lot going on. The only three flaws I find it in are:

1) The flow is confusing (try breaking up paragraphs more).

2) It needs more details.

3) Even for wild animals, your characters don't seem to have much regard for others' lives.


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