Balto's Treasure Island Part Two

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : January 06, 2010

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Epic

Description : Part Two. As Balto and his companions get ready to embark in search of Captain Flint's hoard. It's Balto's only hope of rebuilding his home, but is it worth the journey? Some alcohol.

Length : Short -

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Balto's Treasure Island Part Two
By Jake Razor

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January 14, 2010
Usa Male
keeper --> I suppose there is some irony. But bear in mind, in this they're anthros kind of like Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, so they're bipedal. Meaning Steele has one leg.
And given that Balto is, by all appearances, not married yet (or old enough to be, even by that day's standards), putting Kodi and Aleu in might be a little bit difficult to swing.

January 14, 2010
Usa
Okay in the last message that was a suggestion for Part 4

January 14, 2010
Usa
Alright so you've made Steele a cooklol and included Togo. Well done overall cannot wait to read the next one. Oh and btw in the next one possibly include Star, Jenna, Kodi, and Aleu as part of the crew.

January 14, 2010
Usa
And you gave Steele 3 legs hahaha

January 14, 2010
Usa
Alright I lvoe it mainly because you signifigantly down graded Steele from most decorated dog in Nome to a cook hahaha. Aw man I was laughing when I read that and I could see Steele over a hot stove with a chef hat make soup hahaha.

January 13, 2010
Usa Male
Croc --> You ain't seen nothing yet. Next one might have some people wanting to hang /me./
Ice --> lol Next one won't be so funny.

January 13, 2010
Uk Female
Silvermoon family
Hahahhaha that's funny the ending.

January 13, 2010
Usa
Awesome work as usual my friend. I really like the way you make cliff hangers, I don't do too many of those any more*sigh* Can't wait to see the next part.

God bless,
Crocluva95

January 11, 2010
Usa Male
Angel --> It's coming, don't worry.

January 10, 2010
Usa
Wonderful build-up so far, very exciting and descriptive, waiting eagerly for the rest...and/or waiting impatiently for the rest :)

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