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| December 28, 2009 | ||
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| Lone Wolf- stay away |
It's a good storyline, and overall, it's very good, but... The rule in
literature is a new paragraph every time a new person starts talking.
So, a quote by one person, then on a new paragraph, the next person
starts talking. It keeps the reader from getting confused. |