Balto's Treasure Island Part One

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : December 02, 2009

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Epic

Description : When a strange sailor comes to stay at the Admiral Benbow Inn, Balto Hawkins' life is sent into a tailspin of pirates, treasure, and danger. Inspired by the classic, it's Treasure Island, Balto style. Some violence and alcohol in later parts of the story.

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Balto's Treasure Island Part One
By Jake Razor

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December 25, 2009
Usa Male
Replicator --> And it was an interesting idea. I'll keep it in mind and see what I can come up with.

December 24, 2009
Usa Male
DT-- Hm. You're right, that does pose a slight problem. It was, after all, only a suggestion, so you don't have to do it, but I was quite interested to know what you'd be able to do with the idea. The Pagemaster was one of my all-time favorite movies when I was a kid.

December 24, 2009
Usa Male
Replicator --> I do indeed. I was thinking of mostly sticking to classic books, but seeing as the Pagemaster is built almost entirely around classic books, I think that sounds like a great idea. The tricky part would be avoiding redundancy, since I'd be using parts from stories already used, if that makes sense.
Frozen --> You may have seen movies based n Treasure Island before. There's a whole bunch of them out there. Muppet Treasure Island, Treasure Planet, and at least one non-spinoff (ie they made no significant changes to the setting or characters) that I know of. And a classic like this, there's probably some allusions to it in other books and/or movies as well. Robert Louis Stevenson was nothing if not a master of adventure. I just hope I can do justice to his story, and I appreciate your anticipation.

December 24, 2009
I surely don't know what to say DT. It's a good one and somehow, reminds me of some sort of movie scenes. But yeah, it's a nice one. Can't wait for the rest ^^

December 24, 2009
Usa Male
Woo-hoo! More of them like this would be a good read. And seeing as you're taking suggestions, I have a challenge for you, if you're up to it. Do you know the movie, The Pagemaster?

December 23, 2009
Usa Male
Replicator --> lol Thank you, I aim to please. I myself enjoyed Treasure Island, and a great many other classics (mostly through "The Adventures of Wishbone" lol) growing up, and I'm glad to have found so many other people who enjoyed it as well. In fact, I may at some point write takeoffs of stories like Moby Dick or Robinson Crusoe in the form of sequels to this one (suggestions welcome).
As for the ending of this chapter, teasing my readers is a hobby of mine. But you you thought this one ended at a good part, you are going to HATE me on the next one.

December 23, 2009
Usa Male
XDDD NO WAY!!! So that's why you thought I read it that fast. I must be psychic! Man.... Ok, now about the story. You suck, man! Cutting it off just as it's getting to the good part? That's cruel... XD jk. It was great! This is one of my most favorite stories of all time, and you have recreated it masterfully! Two humbs way up, amigo!

December 22, 2009
Usa Male
Wishbone --> I know. I'm trying to see if I can get the rating down to PG. Frankly I would rate it G, but rules are rules.

Jarcieri --> Oh, just you wait. It's going to get even better in the chapters to come.

December 22, 2009
Usa
haha i loved this different spin on the story, it was really cool. this is definitely why you are the better writer. I'd fav you but you're already one of my favorites haha

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December 22, 2009
I would have it read it but I'm 10 years old.

December 21, 2009
Usa Male
Just --> Hopefully you won't have to wait very long, although the next part will likely be longer, and therefore most likely take longer.

December 21, 2009
Usa Male
another amazing story! Can't wait for the next part.

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