Rough sketch of Jenna  Balto 4 Steele's revenge Script

(zooms into boiler room. Steele is inside all sad that everyone doesn't treat him as well as they used to and they just ignore him. Suddenly, Steele has flashback when dogs all found out that he was lying and Balto was really alive and that's when they all started ignoring him. Steele bares his teeth and growls.)

(scence switches to a music video.)

(After music video, there is another scene. Jenna is walking through town minding her own buisness with her sister Raven then, Dixie joins  her.)

Dixie: Hi there Jenna! How's Balto doin'? Did he win any races or save anyone in trouble lately?

Jenna: Oh yeah, ummm, he saved a pilot who was stuck in a blizard. It was amazing! Of course, my son Kodiac and the rest of the sled-team helped him.

Dixie: That sounds exceleration! (rambels on and on)

Sylvie:(Joins two other dogs and butts in) I heard that at first, the other dogs didn't wanna' help that man because they didn't wanna lose their job. Is this true?

Jenna: Yeah, it is true but in the end Kodi saw the light. He even got the rest of the team to help him.

Raven: I was so proud of my nephew Kodi! I have always loved him.

Jessica:(Joins the dogs and interupts.) Hi there! What's up? Guess what? I just saw Steele walking down town with Oliver the other day and I could of sworn he looked at me.

(Jenna, Sylvie, and Dixie look at her shocked. Sylvie rolls her eyes.)

Dixie: Steele? He is such a Glory-hound! Yeah, he is handsome looking but he is a big fat liar! Not that he is fat or anything. If I were you, I'd stay away from him. I hate to admit I used to like him until I found out what a bad dog he was! So did a bunch of other girl dogs in the town including Sylive here. I also used to not like Balto and not trust him because he was part wolf but now, if he wasn't Jenna's husband I would love to be with him. You really shouldn't crush on him even if he is the most handsome dog in town.

(Jenna, Raven, Jessica, and Sylvie all look surprised.)

Sylvie: Wow Dixie! Despite the fact everyone now knows how much you don't like Steele, that didn't sound like you.

Jessica: I don't care about any of that Dixie! I'm going with Steele.

Jenna: You know Jessica, Dixie's right! You just can't trust Steele. Steele used to like me because I am the prettiest dog in town and I didn't like him back because I knew he was arogant, rude, mean, and all the other bad qualities you could find in a dog but I used to try and like him because he was the best match for me I knew and I heard his owner saying that he wanted us to have puppies. He knows our puppies would be worth tons. Then, I met Balto. At first, I didn't trust him because he was part wolf but then, I got to know him and he was nice. He liked me for me. Steele just liked me for my looks and that our puppies would be worth tons but I hate to admit it, I myself think he's more handsome than my own husband.   

Jessica: I don't blame him for going after you Jenna! You're a pure- bread husky! You'd have gorgeous babies. I'm just a labrador and husky and Alaskan Malamute puppies would look prettier than Alaskan malamute and yellow lab puppies. Unfortunately you're taken because you bread with that stupid half-bread.

Jenna: Hey! This is my husband you're talking about! He may not be pure-bread but he's no dope.

Jessica: Alright, I'll admit he was a hero and saved Nome and Steele decieved everyone, but still, I like Steele. I think he might of learned his lesson by now, all those dogs ignoring him.

Jenna: I wouldn't count on it.

(Scene switches. Steele is walking through town. His sidekick Oliver is walking with him.)

Oliver: So boss, I noticed there has been something on your mind lately. What is it?

Steele: It's that wolf dog! Balto! He stole my fame I was plotting revenge on him all these years and I think it's about time I got started.

Oliver: Well, what kind of things do you have in store for that mutt? Something devious probably.

Steele: Well, I'm not sure what I'm gonna do with him yet but I know that I'm gonna win my fans back! Even if it takes as many years as that lobo has been famous!

(Kodi comes from other direction and accidently bumps into Steele.)

Kodi: I'm sorry sir. I really didn't mean to... Woah! Steele? Is it really you?

Steele: Yup! That's my name and don't wear it out.

Kodi: Wow! I've heard of you! You're the best sled-dog who ever lived! 

Steele: I am and not that wolf-dog everyone calls Balto?

TO BE CONTINUED

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Guest	January 22, 2009

ill help with some of the story

Guest	January 22, 2009

i love steele) hes going to rip baltos head off

Guest	January 05, 2009

thats sooo cool ill jion

Saske italian wolf	December 04, 2008

hmm..I liked the scene where Kodi meets Steele and Oliver...maybe I can do an animation with that part ;]

SkulShur tugalTCG	October 03, 2008
	Site Builder

I'm up to play Kodi; I'm a great voice actor, and I can impersonate anybody. So, if Kodi's already taken, then maybe I could play...I don't know, somebody else. Also, I can edit the script if you want me to. Just PM it to me.

Paxis	September 17, 2008
	Small but Determined

I'm open for voice talents. ^^ I would love to help you out. If you are interested in listening to an example of my voice, just send me a private message. ;D

Steelefa ngirl	August 02, 2008

I'm glad you think so but there are probably a lot of flaws in there that I wont keep in the final thing.

Mantisbo y9090	August 02, 2008
	My inner wolf is a Loner

WOW! nice script.

Steelefa ngirl	July 26, 2008

Oh! I see! It's great so far!

Steelefa ngirl	July 26, 2008

What do you mean? Sorry if I sound dumb but, I'm still a beginner with animations and storyboards.

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