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FANFIC SUMMARY: ?Kiona and Achak?s lives continue after they first meet! Read as Kiona adapts to the life of a wolf, Achak learns more about acceptance, and the two form a bond stronger than pack members.?

Here's a small snip of the fanfic that we (Draco and CatWhoHas14Tails) are working on (we have yet to come up with a title for it, we'll decide on that ourselves later) It starts off right where Kiona's fic "The Wolf's Trail" (written by CatWhoHas14Tails) AND Achak's fic "A Wolf's Story" (written by Draco) So if you don't want to be confused, we advise to go to our fanfic galleries and read them BEFORE reading this entry.

Keep in mind that things are more than likely going to change once the finished project is posted, so don't be surprised.

Achak ? Draco
Kiona ? CatWhoHas14Tails
Kita ? CatWhoHas14Tails


The red hybrid and the silver and black wolf stared at each other, both with unknown interest in each other. Thoughts were running rampant through their minds about each other, and they didn't know why. Why were they so intriguing to one another?

The male wolf stared down at the dog, trying his hardest not to seem interested, but he knew that staring at her could not have possibly helped any. His pack was almost as curious as he was, but for quite different reasons. The scent of the dog probably didn't interest them as much as their leader, but they were still in wonder as to why a mere dog would be in their territory alone.

The dog did not feel threatened by the wolves' scrutiny. But she could sense that at least one of them wanted her dead. Studying the black and silver wolf, she could also sense that he had a good mind and knew better than to give his pack a silly order as to attack a lone dog. But she then remembered the previous night when she felt a warm body against her own, keeping her alive from the storm's bitter cold. The scent that belonged to that body belonged to him. She was about to open her mouth to speak, but he spoke first.

"It's not safe for a dog to wander the world alone." he said. "You should run back to your human world and find one who won't leave you for dead."

The dog was taken aback from his first words. Even though his voice sounded gentle, the content of his speech was a bit harsh. She wasn't sure if the harshness was towards her or her human, Thomas. But how did he figure out that Thomas left her behind? She shook her head at the question and decided to try and find out at a later time.

"I...can't do that." she said, lowering herself a bit. "But I wanted to thank you," She paused to think of the right words to use. For some reason she felt that she didn't want to embarrass him in front of his pack. "...for before."

"Thank me?" the alpha thought, cocking his head. "She traveled all this time just to thank me?"

"Than consider yourself thankful." the wolf turned to leave with his pack, wanting to stick to his earlier ways of thinking, by not wanting to deal with dogs or humans.

"Wait!" the dog cried. The wolves turned back to look at her. She paused and swallowed. "I want entry to your pack."

A few of the pack members were heard snickering. The dog's fur bristled in embarrassment and anger, until the leader turned his head to hush them. He turned back to face the dog. As much as he didn't want anything to do with the workers of men, he was amazed as to how much courage she had wanting something like this. She must not want anything to do with man either, seeing that she wanted to stay. So she must not have been all bad. But he knew that when he first noticed her scent. She was different... And seeing how she handled herself, through fighting and being leader of her "dog team," she must be skilled in certain areas.

He would have let her into his pack, but a grey female known as Kita spoke up.

"Achak, sir, we cannot just LET a mere...mutt into the pack!" she announced. "She will only get in our way! One of her kind couldn't possibly survive out here for more than a day!"

Achak knew that wasn't true. It had been approximately three days since he rested with the dog, and even then she was injured from her fight. And there was a snow storm since then, so this dog handled bad weather and injuries and still survived. He made that point to Kita.

She said. "Even so, I will not allow that dog to taint our pack!" she turned to Achak. "Please allow me to be her key to entry!"

Achak thought about it for a moment. It would not be a bad idea to make the dog fight to get in. It would be interesting to see her style of fighting anyway. "Alright, Kita," he said, then speaking to the hybrid. "You will fight Kita. If you win, you can join my pack. If not, then you must leave my territory at once." He then began talking to both of them. "Anything goes. But there will be no killing." Then the fight began.

Kita jumped from her spot on the small cliff and made her way down to the dog, jumping on her from above. The dog leapt into the air and bit Kita in the face, making the two stumble in the air and land on their feet.

The dog could tell that this Kita would fight dirty. For some reason she didn't want her in the pack, but now she was even more determined to gain entry. The two females exchanged hateful glares before charging at one another yet again. Kita tried grabbing at the dog's throat, but she slinked out of her grip and bit hers. She didn?t draw blood, but Kita still whipped back for fear of physical pain. Kita jumped back forward and aimed for her opponent?s neck again, but instead latched into her harness. She viciously whipped the dog into the ground by her leather strap and it ripped with the force and fell to the ground.

The dog stared at her harness. She had forgotten it was on, but the thought that she could have been killed just now made her blood hot. The fury within her rose to the surface and her eyes rimmed with red brighter than her fur. With unnatural speed, the hybrid ran into Kita and knocked her into the ground onto some rocks. Kita cried out when she struck stone, and cried again when the dog just went insane and kept biting her.


We (CatWhoHas14Tails and Draco) have no idea when this fic will finally be released, but to keep you into it, more teasers will be on the way!

Picture teasers!

<<--Made by Draco

http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g184/catwhohas14tails/NAMELESS.jpg <<-- made by CatWhoHas14Tails

<<-- made by Draco

<<-- made by Draco

<<-- made by CatWhoHas14Tails


Will any of the old characters make reappearance? Yes. Balto himself will appear in this fic!

We're both very excited about this fic. Below, there is a URL, but it's not just ANY URL my friends, no...It is a link! A link to a picture I have posted on putfile.com that relates to this new story!



Now, what does this adorable little puppy (name is Hokee) have to do with the fic, you're asking yourselves, right? Well, he'll be in it for one! And to add onto this little teaser, we have a question to ask you.

Who does this pup look like to you? (From Balto)

That question is now raging in your minds isn't it, making you ever the more curious. Hints cannot be given other than what you see. You may want to go looking through some screenshots from the original first movie, maybe then you might find something.

Now, onward. So far we have pretty much thought out the entire plot. There will be drama, there will be mystery, and there will be love! There will also be twists and turns you never saw coming! 


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DragonKitty: that sounds like an amazinf fic! imma have to read it :)

July 24, 2009
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