Nice gamebook! FUN!

Cool fanfic, one of the BEST ones I`ve played.

I choose to go with the little girl.

I don't know, I sorta liked it, but at the same time it wasn't very appealing. Don't take this the wrong way, but it's kind of like bolonga, it isn't any thing special, but it is definately meat.

Me likey! Hehe, I won the first time!!

hehe I LIKE oliver

I like it! Nice gamebook.

I played this a couple times, but never left a comment. It's fun!

Yay i won!!!

Nice gamebook Kari, BTW my cat's name is Oliver.

I like this gamebook like to look at it again and again

Nice. I like gamebooks with one right path. The covered in make-up
part was funny.

Awsome!

That was a fun gamebook, it was really cute! [And I didn't
end up dying :O XD]

that was cool buddy

I love your game book and yours actually tells you if you
got the answer right or wrong unlike some other peoples. I
think I will try to make a game book. thanks for inspiring
me

that was cute, kari! i can't wait to see what other
gamebooks you will write!

Awesome gamebook Kari.:3

great! i love these kind of games. but i don't know how to
make one.......

pretty good,no, it was awsome!

Steet -> Thank you! And yeah, I know, this was more of my
experimental game.

AW -> Thank you! XD I plan
on making more after I think of a few plots...

that was pretty cool kari! more more!!

Nice Could be longer though...